um...if you don't get it, that's okay...it's not about anyone most of you know, and anyway, the truth is artistically stretched in this piece.


This Is You.

. .
U

this is you

. .
^

this is you
a little sad
or disappointed in me---
one of the hardest faces to bear

><
~

this is you
when we tease you too much

^^
U

this is you
on the good days
when you're bouncy
and not depressed

O_o

this is you
when you're seriously disturbed

O O
U

this is you on crack

/
~

this is you
when you realize what you've done

X X
P

this is you
if you keep doing these things to yourself

o/o
--

this is you
when you tell me never to be as messed up
as you are

o/o
O

this is you
when you really lose it
and everyone but me runs and hides

* *
U

this is you
when we talk about the things we love

$ $
U

this is you but seldom----
thank goodness

. .
U

this is you
how I want you---
no preservatives, no additives
no artificial flavoring
the real, natural you

Only problem is, this package is fragile
and it comes to me already broken in pieces...

How shall I put the pieces together again?




Words by PoeticProcrastination
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Written on 2006-03-05 at 15:35

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Feiyn
That was an awesome poem. I love how you used faces to help describe the person. I hope you can help them whoever they are.
2006-03-11


Mary
hope you're not talking about me :D hahaha... but who are you talking about that most of us don't know..... hmmmm.... awesomely awesome and heck yeah it deserves a bookmark!!! i luuve the faces!! :D
2006-03-07


CherryFairy
Sooooooo cute!!!
Some of it made me laugh 'cause the faces were so funnnny. And then I stopped when I saw the reality behind whoever that person is. It's a deeeeeep poem. It's funny and it's sad. I love it.
-cf
2006-03-06


Andy
outstanding!!! I love it.

its simple but wonderful.
2006-03-05


SlipThruCracks
Woah. This is way cool.

I keep rereading this....

:]
2006-03-05


Teala
Wow, this says a lot. It is hard sometimes to break away the barriers and wall someone has put up to protect themselves---disarm him!!:)
2006-03-05