| We Were All In Love And We All Got Hurt.
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2007-02-18
i WAIT and wait for you to write something new. you are my favorite, you are fabulous and unique.
plus you seem to live the same life that i do.
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| Adventures---
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2006-12-22
you are astounding. i always look for your name on the que because i know it means something amazing is on its way. you really speak to what i feel. thank you so much.
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| No longer, I promes
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2006-11-24
really really true. nice job, you hit it on the nail
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| All Alone
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2006-09-24
beautifull. i can see that we both have an inclination towards the greek gods (as in my poem 'Olympos')
this was wonderfull and heartbreaking. you have talent.
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| chaos in love
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2006-09-24
i especially love the first three lines. they hooked me. you have an amazing talent.
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| Why I'll Never Let the Idea of Him Go.
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2006-09-19
this is possibly the best poem i have read in the past month. you are an amazing writer, pretty heart wrenching and so bold.
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| My Tiger My Heart.
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2006-09-12
wow thats heartbreaking and brilliant. keep it up, its really powerfull.
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| A man of bad influence
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2006-09-07
what does influation mean?
i like this a lot though
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| Mitch Hedberg , in memoriam .I.
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2006-09-02
i miss him, i still listen to him every time i'm sad. you can't stay sad with that smooth bass in the backround can you?
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| Sixteen reasons why I do not love you
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2006-09-02
this was completely unexpected and wonderful. thank you for it. i loved the twist and i had to read it about four times. the title is heartbreaking.
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| And everything looked so usual
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2006-08-30
i really like the obsurdity of this one.
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| GOODNIGHT GOODNIGHT
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2006-08-25
you are really talented. i like the way you carve the poem. it is really poignant
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| my mind carries an ocean but you're the one with legs
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2006-08-25
the last line is perfect. you created a great rhythm and image. i like this one a lot : ]
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| Simple Equation
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2006-08-25
this is a really cute image
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| Take me as I am..
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2006-08-25
to the point with so few words. i like it a lot, amazing work.
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| Kind of Love
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2006-08-17
you said it all
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| Waiting
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2006-08-16
we seem to both think about waiting a lot. check out my poem called 'Hold' it has the same theme. i like this one a lot because even though none of the stanza's are particularily picturesque the way you compiled them makes me see what you wanted [or at least what i got]
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| Either Or
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2006-08-16
I ALLWAYS THINK LIKE THAT
you hit the nail right there on my brain...when i'm lying in bed thinking wierd mazes with words.
just make sure that your
something/nothing/everything is meaningfull even if its the emptiness
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| Deceptive Masquerade (Part 2)
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2006-08-16
loving is always wise, it's just how they recieved it that was not. i loved the flow and the repitition really hammers in the warm points.
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| I Dont Want To Write About Being Alone
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2006-08-16
the first two lines are great. and the rhyme scheme is really awesome.
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| Back of and shut the fuck up
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2006-08-16
you'll do fine. i just finished freshmen year, it suckkkked. and basically the last line, ILOVEDIT. so work your ass off and you'll be fine.
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| A Short Tale (The Hidden Package) Adult content
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2006-08-16
HAHAHA
thats really funny turn at the end.
"He finally got up the courage
to walk over she said with
a grin "You're Cute"
then thought to herself
so sue me because it
wasn't the truth"
that was my favorite part by far. nice work
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| Sometimes
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2006-08-16
I love this, the last line is the best. you really have a way with sayimg a lot without using many words.
props
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