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Teala

40 years old from USA


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He washed my hair when we were young

2007-02-16
What a sensual, beautiful poem. Last night, ( incidently), my husband washed my hair for me..I had never had someone do that-it felt fantastic..the imagery is fantastic here, it took me back to last night!


An Angry Mother

2007-02-02
Mother Lioness! I love this write, full of love for your child, and agression at some asshole. Good one!


Through Love, We Are Connected [A Thomas-Liz Love-Tanka Collection 1]

2007-01-18
I love how well you two flow together-that is probably what brought you together in the first place, a like mind--great job you two!! Love it! Passionate!


A Clothes Call

2007-01-18
Quirky and fun! Your laundry comes alive here! ( wouldn't that be scary!)


Heartstream

2007-01-18
It looks beautiful together.. a warm, fuzzy feeling all over at the brillance of love!


OCEANS OF LOVE[TANKA]

2007-01-18
Fantastic! I love anything to do with the ocean--and using the dolphins in this one was great! Excellent, beautiful job!


Grovelling days

2007-01-17
Hauntingly beautiful..full of emotion and vivid imagery..bravo!! bravo!!


Infant Stars of Infinity...

2007-01-17
The cosmos and all it's wonder is so fasinating..thank you for this wonderful piece..the imagery is fantastic!


The topic of cancer

2007-01-17
A unique, fun, interesting read!


When I dream of you.

2007-01-17
A romantic write, full of longing and remembrance..excellent job, vivid emotions run deep.


Gettysburg by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-17
This piece does bring history to life..I have always been into history, the Civil War being one of my favourite periods to read about. The imagery in this poem is superb..as well as the subject, of course. A true masterpiece! Bravo!!


Gettysburg by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-17
This piece does bring history to life..I have always been into history, the Civil War being one of my favourite periods to read about. The imagery in this poem is superb..as well as the subject, of course. A true masterpiece! Bravo!!


The Love Birds a haiku renga for Thomas and Liz by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-17
An excellent tribute to a wonderful couple here on the bay-great job!


Enigmatic

2007-01-17
What a thought-provoking piece..the layout and thought behind this is excellent...brillant imagery.


in a wait

2007-01-17
What a hauntingly beautiful piece...moving and rythmatic!


Missing Note

2007-01-17
Excellent tribute..full of love and appreciation. BRAVO!


Love in terms of Rejection

2007-01-17
A unique, thought-provoking write. Very nice series!


...The First Time...

2007-01-17
A beautiful poem about pure love and adoration...a very moving piece.


becomes a dream

2007-01-17
There is truth in these words..beautiful and moving, bravo!


Too Far...

2007-01-17
What a deep, raw, emotional look at human emotion..excellent job.


My Caring Friend [Zoya]

2007-01-17
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful, caring person..our own Ms. Zoya. Excellent job!


a new sky

2007-01-17
A beautiful, moving piece..what fantastic imagery!


apathetic

2007-01-17
Wow--this is ever so thought-provoking. The imagery is unreal..everything is so raw and emotional. Brillant job!


In the silent darkness of the room by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-17
Ah...what a sensual write..I love the imagery..we can see her through your eyes now:)


Love in terms of Affection

2007-01-17
What a romantic, pure poem of love...the flow and imagery is excellent!


haiku for tom and liz's challenge

2007-01-17
Wow! What romance and adoration..I love haikus..so much can be said in few lines..bravo!


prophecy.

2007-01-17
Very haunting..what excellent, frightening imagery. Brillant job!


In The Begining Of Time...

2007-01-17
Wow! What an excellent format to do this in! I love the layout, imagery, and how thought-provoking this is! Excellent work!


An eight level love haiku

2007-01-17
Beautifully done, love and romance..ahhh..great work!


Hiding In Your Cloak

2007-01-17
What a heartfelt, moving piece of love and devotion to the Lord. Excellent imagery and thought..bravo!


My Intelligent, Handsome Son

2007-01-17
What an excellent tribute to your son--beautifully done!


My Heart's A Storm

2007-01-17
A emotionally moving text..excellent feeling, imagery, and thought put behind this. BRAVO!


Good night poetbay. . .

2007-01-17
Goodnight;) Although it is only 8:34 p.m. here!


MY REAL FRIENDS[haiku for all my poetbay friends]

2007-01-17
Hahaha, I have sure thought exactly this before, Love it Liz!


SLEEP!SLEEP! SLEEP!

2007-01-17
Been there! Hate that! The worst is when you are tired, but cannot seem to fall asleep! Excellent poem describing this misery.


A Liz-Thomas Perdue Tanka

2007-01-16
So very true! Love does heal an empty heart..bravo!


...When...

2007-01-16
Beautiful! Excellent flow and imagery, bravo!


Angelic Sweetheart[Haiku]

2007-01-16
How sweet and romantic..;)


A Little Love Poem

2007-01-16
So simply put-beautiful and moving..lots of wisdom in these words!


Of Me

2007-01-16
A very beautiful write, full of love and devotion. Quite moving! BRAVO!


Love, the Elixir of life: A rapid-fire-round of Haiku(Zoya) and Renga(Liliana)

2007-01-16
What an epic tale of love and adoration! Excellent flow, wonderful piece, bravo!


Erotic Moments Between Two Lovers

2007-01-16
How very sensual and beautifully romantic..bravo, my friend, a lovely, heartfelt read.


When Death Comes Round

2007-01-12
The unknown is always scary..excellent display of emotions and thoughts here..bravo!


Do the words "Blah blah" mean anything to you

2007-01-12
Oh, what a dark, intense poem. Excellent imagery and form, bravo!


Love and Hate

2007-01-12
There is so much wisdom and power in this write..your writings have so much truth to them, my friend. Brillantly done!


My Apologies

2007-01-12
We all should forgive and forget, but sometimes it isn't that easy. An emotional poem, excellent work.


The Burden of Charisma

2007-01-12
Chills..the emotions in this really come alive. The imagery is superb..I can identify with this poem quite a bit. BRAVO!


Kisses so sweet . . .

2007-01-12
What a powerful poem, full of love and adoration! BRAVO, Dan!


Sunbeams' Trance

2007-01-12
This is such a fun poem! I love the imagery and layout..superb!


To Be A Survivor Of Abuse

2007-01-12
There is so much strength and power behind this write. You are giving every victim a voice..I know someone that was abused badly as a child, their plan in life is to rise above their abusers, and overcome!