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67 years old from USA


The latest comments that melanie sue has written.

Lost Sheep

2022-06-20
https://youtu.be/iU8Z1lW3kvs


Stay home save lives by Ann Wood

2020-04-17
You stay home. I am going outside and enjoy life without the influences of deception and Tyranny.


Sounds of sadness

2020-03-24
"unless you are deadwood"
[no edit feature and I'm a typo tempest]


Sounds of sadness

2020-03-24
Excellent expression. I felt yours AND mine-- it's universal in our humanity-- uness your deadwood and feel nothing at all. I have missed reading poetry...and writing too, for that matter. Anyway, to continue my ramble, discernment of what I can and can not change, state of mind- full, empty, positive,negative.... I would go to work so sad inside, but for the sake of others- fake a smile...and in a little while the fake smile transformed into an authentic one. State of mind.


My Response

2020-03-24
I cherish friendship. What is the ultimate commandment? Love God and each other. So simple. It is not your fault. The whole world is deceived. Watch. Be ready. Prophecies unfolding.


FAREWELL THE PRESIDENT OF PRESIDENTS

2019-10-25
What? No tribute to his "whiteness"? May I remind you that he is not the first American "Black"President. He is half black and half white, like our twin grandchildren.


Truth Island

2019-08-27
Writing has always been good therapy for me. And "be kind" shouldn't be so hard. But for many it is. All I know is that God wants us to love him and each other, being imperfect beings requires forgiveness- 70x7. and more-especially to those who ask for forgiveness and are repenting.Those lacking that ability can't truly love. Truth


The richest gem of all

2018-06-03
Beautiful. Most important to life is the water! I see the gem as being the water. Love this, Nils. A very soothing and refreshing read. Thank you, sir! [much needed]


Politicos

2018-04-30
https://thefederalistpapers.org/ebooks/the-constitution-of-the-united-states


BY KNEELING! THE NFL PLAYERS! (addishans)

2017-10-01
no, they are standing small


dark timber holds

2014-10-07
*****stellar*****


What The Political Nickel Said To The Recalcitrant Penny

2014-10-07
***giggle***

[thank you-I needed a laugh to start my day!}


End Of The Light

2014-06-26
....interesting twist on it....love that last line


Borrowed Time

2014-06-02
Shells, this is beauutifully worded. I relate to this poem very much. I survived this phase and you will too! And when the grandkids come along......awesome and wonderful!(we havew sons ages 23 and 33 and one daughter age. 27...and in 2 years time went from 4 grandchildren to 8 (3 from previous relationships.) We are 60 and weathered it thru....and you can too!


my father did not go gently

2014-05-02
Superbly written and one that I definitely relate to. My father, mother and younger brother did not go gently either. Thank God for the morphine that eventually helped ease them on into the afterlife.


DI Mention

2014-04-29
A toast to the Light of the Moon and the Goddess of the Hunt.

[very good poem-great title]


For you

2014-04-13
*excellent*


Prayer For Grace

2014-04-13
I enjoyed this immensely. Creative rhyme imparting meaningful message very well structured. Thank you


Imploded :-)

2014-02-12
Stellar!


Monsieur Axonge

2014-02-01
very clever...love that last line, Elle....[like your expressive work-contemplative,evocative....and definately not boring!]

thx


The tenderness - the Heat

2014-01-08
I think this is an excellent expression taking a glimpse into the scathing reality of some. Very well done, Ivan. I applaud your work. Thank you


Nightmare Funeral

2013-12-28
Welcome back Lizzy!

This is excellent! Looking forward to reading more. :)


autumn encounter

2013-11-15
*****STELLAR*****


Rain of grace

2013-09-29
Such a pleasure to be reminded through the reading of your eloquent words! Much appreciated.


Critics

2013-09-23
I like the syllables and sounds in the word "merdivorous". It sounds so much better than "shit-eating".


The harmony of being

2013-09-14
simply is.....


Love this.


Did I Say

2013-04-23
Beautifully expressed, sweetly sentimental. [one possible typo to correct-sat should be say, correct?] Enjoyed this much!


All Things Brief And Beautiful

2013-03-18
I needed to read these words to be there....and no regrets...it was worth every syllable. I loved reading and absorbing every word of this. Fantastic write.


Life is grace

2013-01-30
This is the perfect poem to start my day with. Refreshing!Thx


Where did you go? A kind of - logue

2013-01-19
LOL! thx


Beyond hate and fear

2013-01-19
*****STELLAR*****

(these soothing words found me finding them)


Thank you, Nils. :)


My Dear Melanie Sue

2013-01-03
Thank you for clarifying! aND THANK GOD for this alternative route to communicating!I was totally dumbfounded because all I was receiving in your messages was this:

--------------------------------------------------------------------!

I didn't know what I did wrong and did write Anna about it. I never want to hurt anyone especially you!


Searching For A Spring And Finding Gary Snyder

2013-01-02
*PS Forgot to mention or perhaps ask....."at what age does one become OLD and loses the desire to go?"......"what takes the desire away---the pain of the mind or the body or both?"


Searching For A Spring And Finding Gary Snyder

2013-01-02
Thank you very very much for sharing this. I have heard of this place so I googled it to see if the landscape painted in my head by the words matched the actual place. I wasn't disappointed.Now I know I want to go there on our next excursion out.The vivid words conjured up visions of our own recent experiences.Not to be confused with "jet-setters", we think of ourselves as explorers and we study LIFE. We left in a 1994 Gulfstream RV in early Oct. and have just returned home on Dec.15. We went on a journey that traversed the U.S. from coast to coast. The highlights (of which were many)included hiking down to the bottom of the Grand Canyon and back up; and to the top of Grandfather Mt. and some of the Appalachian trials and everything in between!America is awesome in its beauty!!!

I wish all a Happy New Year and Life!


Our Annual Delusions

2013-01-01
I read this and raised my glass-a toast to you and your wonderful writings! HAPPY NEW YEAR ESPECIALLY TO YOU, STAN!


"New Year"

2012-12-31
Thank YOU very much, Country Fog. I meant to add an author's note that if you have ever eaten a pine nut seed, depending on variety, it can be either bitter or sweet. The brown seeds that come from the variety that grows near the Grand Canyon is sweet and delicious...My experiences are both literal and metaphor......HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU and ALL!


HAPPY CHRISTMAS TO YOU ALL MY FRIENDS

2012-12-26
Belated wishes of good will to you, Ken, and to all mankind. ~hugs


It's Criminal

2012-12-24
Reading your work always always brings a chuckle to my day.


Just A Veil

2012-09-23
True. But it is that determined effort to smile that brings on the genuine...such is the potential of the magical power of the smile.


My Mother Was A Corsetiere

2012-09-10
I love this. Gives my heart a chuckle. :)


VOTES AND RIGHTS

2012-08-22
Why all the doom and gloom? Liberals claim that this is the conservative agenda. I assure you, it is not and if you truly believe this,IMHO, you have been deceived.


Spinning

2012-08-22
And you are exactly right, Countryfog.
Thank you, Editorial team. :)


SCARY TERRIFYING AND SO SO SAD (AWORK IN PROGRESS)

2012-08-20
What nation would that be, Ken? Many lies going around these days, ya know.


Facebook Solitude

2012-02-03
How can we not relate to this? You always have a way with words that touches and connects to others in an easy flow of rhythm so pleasing, even if the message/content is not so pleasing...I have missed reading your work. Hope all is well with you.

~Mel


Scapegoat

2012-02-02
Wonderful! I too, admire you and your work. Once again, thankyou, Stan!

~Mel


Chug-A-Lug

2011-12-08
funny ......the flow was impeccable....
.........it makes me chuckle as I drink from the mug of muddle,

lol


Babble

2011-12-03
I love this! (sorry, I am short on words today)


Simply Summer (Six Haiku and a Tanka)

2011-07-27
I wish I could lose myself within this beautiful setting, painted with words. Excellent writing, my friend. I enjoyed this immensely.


Bare

2011-06-28
And Love IS so universal, that anyone that knows love will understand these words more than instinct. Your words caught my eye and held me. I love what you have written and the way you expressed it. Thank you so much for sharing it.


Death of a Tree

2011-06-26
Nice. I like your vivid imagery.Like Kathy said, it brought me there with you. Good work. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you!