| A Poem to My Poem
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2023-12-08
If this isn't me, hahahah. Love this!
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| What It Won't Feel Like
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2023-12-08
Cats are a known balm for depression. Trust me, I know
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| Haiku 8th December
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2023-12-08
Me everyday, or night
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| Dear Sameen
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2023-12-08
I appreciate it, kind sir.
It's all about exercises.
Different topics.
Different subjects.
The goal is always the same:
To become a God through Poetry.
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| Patterns
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2023-12-08
Amazing! I love how you went to old Gould at the end there. Enhances the poem!
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| Hospice
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2023-12-08
This really is a truly, truly beautiful poem. There is great strength in your words. I feel honored to have read them.
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| Is Anyone Less Useful Than a Poet?
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2023-12-08
Is Anyone Less Useful Than a Poet?
Social Media Influencers
Chiropractors
Life Coaches
To name a few.
Lovely poem by the way
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| Everyday in Jumbleorium, XXVb
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2023-12-07
The entire bit where you describe your body’s response to waking up is amazing writing.
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| HOSPITAL BLUES - 1
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2023-12-07
And now for something completely different
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| a word, a phrase
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2023-12-07
That's what it means to be a poet
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| natural man
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2023-12-07
Imagine a subject called Supernatural Sciences
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| Hypocrisy and Hubris
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2023-12-07
Good one!
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| Advice
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2023-12-07
Another banger!
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| I'll never be a bard
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2023-12-07
I agree with Ingvar. Fine soup
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| ADVENT
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2023-12-07
I have no words. This is amazin!
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| DREAMING (Adid Line)
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2023-12-07
Dreams are often the only thing making me smile
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| THE RISE OF THE RIGHT - FASCISM (On Going Theime)(Major additn))
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2023-12-07
Yes, the Right, Fascism, is rising
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| Oh, Cruel, Cruel World
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2023-12-07
Very you, this poem. I love it.
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| A Polished Boot
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2023-12-07
Wonderful Rimes!
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| Vile Asymmetry
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2023-12-07
Wait till they find out Hamas didn't rape anyone
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| The Eye of the Storm
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2023-12-07
Wow. There's something so horrifying about this poem. Especially the way you've framed it. The last line, man. Fuck.
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| Ich sehe dich in tausend Bildern
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2023-12-07
Beautiful!
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| natural civilization
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2023-12-07
Nothing sensible is acceptable for the MAGA crowd
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| 76th Letter to a Poet
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2023-12-07
I have no words except I enjoyed this
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| Goodnight
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2023-12-07
"all my dreams are adventures in failure"
That's the realest shit you've ever wrote, sir
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| tanka
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2023-12-07
I prefer the original haiku, but the additions make it cuter
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| Musing Darkly on a Dreary Day
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2023-12-07
Wonderful poem in all its suburban horrors.
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| Emergency!
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2023-12-07
I'd laugh if it wasn't true
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| SURVIVAL ? ( the political thang)
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2023-12-07
What a shot to the head, this poem
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| SURVIVAL ? ( the political thang)
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2023-12-07
What a shot to the head, this poem
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| agent quadruple
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2023-12-07
Math + Poetry = Me, intrigued and delighted
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| agent double
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2023-12-07
Man, now you've got me curiously considering who I am
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| I DON"T MUCH LIKE THE RAIN
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2023-12-07
Powerful words. Strong choice with the fonts too.
I don't believe I have, or should have, anything else of import to say about this.
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| you should better find yourself a god
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2023-12-07
Thus Spake Zarathustra (Poetbay Edition)
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| Courtship
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2023-12-07
I would refute you. I think you mean everything you say. And I think you truly believe what you write.
I wonder where you got the notion for otherwise.
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| Local Contexts
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2023-12-07
I feel like this is two different poems smushed into one.
So, from the start to until this line: and the randomness of probability
reads like one poem, and then all that comes after reads like another.
Independently, they are quite good, especially the first one.
Altogether though, I don't know. They leave me wanting.
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| Two 4 December Haiku
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2023-12-07
I like how the two haikus work in conjunction to each other. By themselves, they are weak. Together, amazing.
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| HOSPITAL DAYS - 3
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2023-12-07
This is beautiful. Though I feel bad for saying this, I am loving this series
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| January Night
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2023-12-07
The end bit reminds me of a Whitman poem. I like this, but find it somewhat opaque.
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| Sketch
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2023-12-07
The poem reads like Frost. If he was actually good, that is.
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| How you know?
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2023-12-07
Yes, one must be tuned to one's self. A good meditation, if a bit too winding
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| Discombobulation
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2023-12-07
Your own Second Coming?
Nice
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| HOSPITAL DAYS - 2
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2023-12-03
I’m loving these poems, my good man. Keep ‘em coming
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| Notes from Spencer
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2023-12-03
I echo OTP’s words. This, and forms like these, suit you well
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| RED SHOES
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2023-12-03
You’ve a tone of wonder in your poems i envy
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| Colored Christmas Lights are Passe
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2023-12-03
Jesus would be crucified again if he existed today
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| Strange Advent
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2023-12-03
Injustice. It’s all injustice
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| TOTAL ~~~ CONTROL
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2023-12-03
Idk man, I don’t think Mother Nature can teach me memes.
Haha, just kidding. Fine poem
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| A Put-On, Put On
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2023-12-03
Imma be honest, I hadn’t been “feeling” a lot of your recent poems. They were fine works, sure, but they didn’t punch me in the gut like your best work usually does. This one though. This one is amazing
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| LATE NIGHT THINKING
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2023-12-03
Feels like a Larkin Poem. Sad Steps, I believe it’s called
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from Nepal 