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Sameen

27 years old from Nepal


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A Poem to My Poem

2023-12-08
If this isn't me, hahahah. Love this!


What It Won't Feel Like

2023-12-08
Cats are a known balm for depression. Trust me, I know


Haiku 8th December

2023-12-08
Me everyday, or night


Dear Sameen

2023-12-08
I appreciate it, kind sir.

It's all about exercises.

Different topics.

Different subjects.

The goal is always the same:

To become a God through Poetry.


Patterns

2023-12-08
Amazing! I love how you went to old Gould at the end there. Enhances the poem!


Hospice

2023-12-08
This really is a truly, truly beautiful poem. There is great strength in your words. I feel honored to have read them.


Is Anyone Less Useful Than a Poet?

2023-12-08
Is Anyone Less Useful Than a Poet?

Social Media Influencers
Chiropractors
Life Coaches

To name a few.

Lovely poem by the way


Everyday in Jumbleorium, XXVb

2023-12-07
The entire bit where you describe your bodyís response to waking up is amazing writing.


HOSPITAL BLUES - 1

2023-12-07
And now for something completely different


a word, a phrase

2023-12-07
That's what it means to be a poet


natural man

2023-12-07
Imagine a subject called Supernatural Sciences


Hypocrisy and Hubris

2023-12-07
Good one!


Advice

2023-12-07
Another banger!


I'll never be a bard

2023-12-07
I agree with Ingvar. Fine soup


ADVENT

2023-12-07
I have no words. This is amazin!


DREAMING (Adid Line)

2023-12-07
Dreams are often the only thing making me smile


THE RISE OF THE RIGHT - FASCISM (On Going Theime)(Major additn))

2023-12-07
Yes, the Right, Fascism, is rising


Oh, Cruel, Cruel World

2023-12-07
Very you, this poem. I love it.


A Polished Boot

2023-12-07
Wonderful Rimes!


Vile Asymmetry

2023-12-07
Wait till they find out Hamas didn't rape anyone


The Eye of the Storm

2023-12-07
Wow. There's something so horrifying about this poem. Especially the way you've framed it. The last line, man. Fuck.


Ich sehe dich in tausend Bildern

2023-12-07
Beautiful!


natural civilization

2023-12-07
Nothing sensible is acceptable for the MAGA crowd


76th Letter to a Poet

2023-12-07
I have no words except I enjoyed this


Goodnight

2023-12-07
"all my dreams are adventures in failure"

That's the realest shit you've ever wrote, sir


tanka

2023-12-07
I prefer the original haiku, but the additions make it cuter


Musing Darkly on a Dreary Day

2023-12-07
Wonderful poem in all its suburban horrors.


Emergency!

2023-12-07
I'd laugh if it wasn't true


SURVIVAL ? ( the political thang)

2023-12-07
What a shot to the head, this poem


SURVIVAL ? ( the political thang)

2023-12-07
What a shot to the head, this poem


agent quadruple

2023-12-07
Math + Poetry = Me, intrigued and delighted


agent double

2023-12-07
Man, now you've got me curiously considering who I am


I DON"T MUCH LIKE THE RAIN

2023-12-07
Powerful words. Strong choice with the fonts too.

I don't believe I have, or should have, anything else of import to say about this.


you should better find yourself a god

2023-12-07
Thus Spake Zarathustra (Poetbay Edition)


Courtship

2023-12-07
I would refute you. I think you mean everything you say. And I think you truly believe what you write.

I wonder where you got the notion for otherwise.


Local Contexts

2023-12-07
I feel like this is two different poems smushed into one.

So, from the start to until this line: and the randomness of probability

reads like one poem, and then all that comes after reads like another.

Independently, they are quite good, especially the first one.

Altogether though, I don't know. They leave me wanting.


Two 4 December Haiku

2023-12-07
I like how the two haikus work in conjunction to each other. By themselves, they are weak. Together, amazing.


HOSPITAL DAYS - 3

2023-12-07
This is beautiful. Though I feel bad for saying this, I am loving this series


January Night

2023-12-07
The end bit reminds me of a Whitman poem. I like this, but find it somewhat opaque.


Sketch

2023-12-07
The poem reads like Frost. If he was actually good, that is.


How you know?

2023-12-07
Yes, one must be tuned to one's self. A good meditation, if a bit too winding


Discombobulation

2023-12-07
Your own Second Coming?

Nice


HOSPITAL DAYS - 2

2023-12-03
Iím loving these poems, my good man. Keep Ďem coming


Notes from Spencer

2023-12-03
I echo OTPís words. This, and forms like these, suit you well


RED SHOES

2023-12-03
Youíve a tone of wonder in your poems i envy


Colored Christmas Lights are Passe

2023-12-03
Jesus would be crucified again if he existed today


Strange Advent

2023-12-03
Injustice. Itís all injustice


TOTAL ~~~ CONTROL

2023-12-03
Idk man, I donít think Mother Nature can teach me memes.

Haha, just kidding. Fine poem


A Put-On, Put On

2023-12-03
Imma be honest, I hadnít been ďfeelingĒ a lot of your recent poems. They were fine works, sure, but they didnít punch me in the gut like your best work usually does. This one though. This one is amazing


LATE NIGHT THINKING

2023-12-03
Feels like a Larkin Poem. Sad Steps, I believe itís called