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Sameen

29 years old

from Nepal

The latest comments that Sameen has written.

Help Needed to Keep PoetBay Running (Update)		2025-10-20 I volunteer
SOME BEDSIDE MANNER!		2024-11-19 Doctors are often assholes
Reflection		2024-11-19 Nice
Trump will fix it?		2024-11-08 Damn right
The Man		2024-10-27 The GOAT
Manyfew		2024-08-07 Like Jazz. This poem is like Jazz
Subtle		2024-08-07 The details really make the poem. I love how these finely detailed images flow together to that wonderful end
FOOD OF CHOICE		2024-08-07 Poetry is food. You are absolutely correct
PIXELS IN THE MIST		2024-08-07 Good one. I’d have loved more detail but the brevity works for what it is. Thanks for posting
The Widow		2024-08-02 Poignantly captured, man. Amazing
Winston-salem		2024-08-02 Amazing work. Orwell couldn't do better.
I'M AN OFF WHITE TYPE OF GUY		2024-08-01 Hahahah, if only everyone was like you Alan
The one that is you		2024-08-01 Amazingly beautiful as always
I USED TO THINK		2024-07-31 Another great distillation of sorrow
Shall I About Yours Then?		2024-07-31 Fucking amazing. I love this. You tell em sister
Memento Mori		2024-07-29 What a journey of a poem
Chanson d'automne		2024-07-29 Ahh Verlaine. One of poetry's greatest failures. Truly remarkable poem. Perhaps his best. Perhaps.
STRANGE THOUGHT'S		2024-07-29 The way you mix hilarity with sorrow is enviable
Remembering How Light		2024-07-29 Beautifully poignant. I shed a tear. The emotions in this verse are cathartically amazing
MY WORK		2024-07-29 All any poet can ask really
De mon coeur		2024-07-29 Man, I wish I knew French. The Google Translate version of this shows this a fine poem.
Never Thought It'd Ever Be Possible		2024-07-28 “My life has drastically changed for the better And it feels like I'm finally getting to live it“ Powerfully moving
MADNESS EXCEPTED		2024-07-28 The repetitions you use really drive home the long. I really appreciate your poetry
ASKHOLE		2024-07-28 Hilariously true
Everbeen		2024-07-28 The images you create are intelligently amazing
DEEP IN THOUGHT		2024-07-28 Your days may be dull but this poem surely isn’t.
Djinns		2024-07-26 Fucking amazing bud
WORLDS MOST TYPICAL POEM:		2024-07-25 Nah, one of a kind more like. All you. All you.
Life Forever		2024-07-25 A wonderful circle of a poem
Waste Time		2024-07-25 Time spent wasting is not wasted time as they say
Passing		2024-07-25 Amazing
Just now		2024-07-24 The poem is beautiful and full of yearning but its the last couplet that really does it for me
I do		2024-07-24 Poignant, man. The world is too much with us
summer pasture		2024-07-24 Your poetry deserves so many more eyes than it gets on the bay. It deserves spectacle and awards and cold hard cash you're so fuckn good
To Disintegrate		2024-07-23 I love how cyclical it is. Very Borges-ian. Amazing as always.
Mutability		2024-07-23 Beautiful. I want to wear the optimism on display here
the backstory is this		2024-07-23 Whoa. I have no words. So much said in so little. I am in awe.
To live is to die.		2024-07-23 Beautiful, just beautiful. The rhythm. The tale. The rhymes. Amazing.
Destiny		2024-07-22 Love what you did at the end there
Sea		2024-07-22 Both are good but I prefer the first one
Sunday Afternoon		2024-07-22 That final couplet is everything
Lion		2024-07-22 Damn
Sunday		2024-07-22 Whoa, again you've gotten so much better
A day before it sets.		2024-07-22 Love it. You've utilized line breaks SO WELL here
midnight		2024-07-22 The old masters would be proud
Things Fall Apart		2024-07-22 Very 'Once in a Lifetime'. I love it
her name is lin		2024-07-22 You great such magical words in so few lines I am amazed and appalled
i ma (am) trying		2024-07-22 Whoa, you're on a roll
Making sense		2024-07-22 The last two verses kinda elevate this good poem to great
Real is Bare		2024-07-22 Amazing.