| The snail-
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2025-11-10
Very Robinson Jeffers. I like it.
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| Maybe I Should be Thankful
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2025-11-10
I love love love how the poem's ending echoes the beginning. This cyclical-ness really ties the poem up very well. Amazingly done.
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| Namesakes
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2025-11-10
A wonderful trip through a family history seldom talked about. I too have wondered about the women in my family, on both sides, and what their lives must've been. The difference between us being you sat down and wrote about it. Kudos.
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| to the unseen
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2025-11-10
quaint, concise and simply amazing
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| Help Needed to Keep PoetBay Running (Update)
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2025-10-20
I volunteer
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| SOME BEDSIDE MANNER!
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2024-11-19
Doctors are often assholes
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| Reflection
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2024-11-19
Nice
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| Trump will fix it?
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2024-11-08
Damn right
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| The Man
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2024-10-27
The GOAT
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| Manyfew
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2024-08-07
Like Jazz. This poem is like Jazz
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| Subtle
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2024-08-07
The details really make the poem. I love how these finely detailed images flow together to that wonderful end
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| FOOD OF CHOICE
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2024-08-07
Poetry is food. You are absolutely correct
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| PIXELS IN THE MIST
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2024-08-07
Good one. I’d have loved more detail but the brevity works for what it is. Thanks for posting
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| The Widow
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2024-08-02
Poignantly captured, man. Amazing
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| Winston-salem
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2024-08-02
Amazing work. Orwell couldn't do better.
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| I'M AN OFF WHITE TYPE OF GUY
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2024-08-01
Hahahah, if only everyone was like you Alan
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| The one that is you
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2024-08-01
Amazingly beautiful as always
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| I USED TO THINK
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2024-07-31
Another great distillation of sorrow
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| Shall I About Yours Then?
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2024-07-31
Fucking amazing. I love this. You tell em sister
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| Memento Mori
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2024-07-29
What a journey of a poem
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| Chanson d'automne
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2024-07-29
Ahh Verlaine. One of poetry's greatest failures. Truly remarkable poem. Perhaps his best. Perhaps.
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| STRANGE THOUGHT'S
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2024-07-29
The way you mix hilarity with sorrow is enviable
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| Remembering How Light
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2024-07-29
Beautifully poignant. I shed a tear. The emotions in this verse are cathartically amazing
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| MY WORK
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2024-07-29
All any poet can ask really
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| De mon coeur
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2024-07-29
Man, I wish I knew French. The Google Translate version of this shows this a fine poem.
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| Never Thought It'd Ever Be Possible
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2024-07-28
“My life has drastically changed for the better
And it feels like I'm finally getting to live it“
Powerfully moving
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| MADNESS EXCEPTED
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2024-07-28
The repetitions you use really drive home the long. I really appreciate your poetry
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| ASKHOLE
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2024-07-28
Hilariously true
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| Everbeen
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2024-07-28
The images you create are intelligently amazing
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| DEEP IN THOUGHT
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2024-07-28
Your days may be dull but this poem surely isn’t.
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| Djinns
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2024-07-26
Fucking amazing bud
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| WORLDS MOST TYPICAL POEM:
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2024-07-25
Nah, one of a kind more like. All you. All you.
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| Life Forever
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2024-07-25
A wonderful circle of a poem
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| Waste Time
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2024-07-25
Time spent wasting is not wasted time as they say
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| Passing
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2024-07-25
Amazing
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| Just now
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2024-07-24
The poem is beautiful and full of yearning but its the last couplet that really does it for me
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| I do
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2024-07-24
Poignant, man. The world is too much with us
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| summer pasture
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2024-07-24
Your poetry deserves so many more eyes than it gets on the bay. It deserves spectacle and awards and cold hard cash
you're so fuckn good
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| To Disintegrate
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2024-07-23
I love how cyclical it is. Very Borges-ian. Amazing as always.
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| Mutability
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2024-07-23
Beautiful. I want to wear the optimism on display here
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| the backstory is this
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2024-07-23
Whoa. I have no words. So much said in so little. I am in awe.
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| To live is to die.
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2024-07-23
Beautiful, just beautiful. The rhythm. The tale. The rhymes. Amazing.
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| Destiny
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2024-07-22
Love what you did at the end there
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| Sea
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2024-07-22
Both are good but I prefer the first one
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| Sunday Afternoon
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2024-07-22
That final couplet is everything
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| Lion
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2024-07-22
Damn
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| Sunday
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2024-07-22
Whoa, again you've gotten so much better
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| A day before it sets.
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2024-07-22
Love it. You've utilized line breaks SO WELL here
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| midnight
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2024-07-22
The old masters would be proud
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| Things Fall Apart
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2024-07-22
Very 'Once in a Lifetime'. I love it
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