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Sameen

30 years old from Nepal


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COMPLIMENTARY, adj. - UNCONSCIOUS, adj.

2026-06-22
Always look forward to these


The worm-

2026-06-22
Another amazing poem. Blessed to have read it.


THE MIRROR SEES IT ALL

2026-06-22
Tantalizing and sensual. I love it.


THE FUTCHER UNFOLDS BEFORE US

2026-06-22
Ain’t no choice but to keep moving


When air lays hands on the world

2026-06-22
An unfamiliar resister maybe but one you wield well.


The Final Voyage

2026-06-22
Your endings have gotten better and better. Also what a wonderful meditative poem


True pertecters

2026-06-22
Cuteeee


on the blue ridge

2026-06-22
Aside from everything else this poem does well I really want to applaud your rhyming


evening

2026-06-22
This really is quite beautiful. It aches. But a lovely ache.


What He Wasn’t

2026-06-22
A wonderful ode for your father which I feel blessed to read. The ending turned my eyes misty.


Wayward

2026-06-22
That last line really is a punch to the throat. Nice.


3 C poems

2026-06-22
I love each of them and not only do I love each of them but I think all three of them but especially the first two are some of your best poems for the way they create a whole world in just short verse. Bravo.


murmur of whiskers

2026-06-22
Reading this to my cat right now haha

Lovely verse


Meuse in late October

2026-06-22
A truly wonderful description. This genre of travel vignettes is sorely missed nowadays and I thank you for blessing us with it


random thought

2026-06-22
Never a day I’m not thinking of Larry on the Bay


Fleeting

2026-06-20
Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww


Cheaper Than a New Car

2026-06-19
I love this. Reminds me of William Carlos Williams’ poems.


Plain Jane

2026-06-19
Ride with the mob, Alhamdulillah
Check in with me and do your job
Ferg is the name, Ben Baller did the chain
Tourneau for the watch, presi Plain Jane


strength

2026-06-19
I’ve tried to write poems like this all my life but couldn’t I’m so jealous of you


Sanguine

2026-06-19
Wow felt like I was dropped in the middle of a dialogue and then plunged back out


melded roads

2026-06-19
Amazing! I love the effervescence of this one


SEARCHING FOR LUDO

2026-06-19
What a beautiful fucking poem. My god. My cat ran away last night. Luckily I found her but I feel this poem in my bones.


You and Me now Us

2026-06-19
Wow you really knocked this villanelle out the park


Enough

2026-06-18
This is beautiful


Sneeze

2026-06-18
What a fabulous ending! I also love the couplets leading into the final triplet.


THE HEX OF THE WOULD-BE KING

2026-06-18
Amazing! More of this please


first snow

2026-06-18
I love how the poem conformed to meet that ending


Fear: Cloudburst

2026-06-18
A charged poem! A truly charged poem.


Pernormal

2026-06-18
Remarkable


Echoes

2026-06-18
Oh wow. That ending. It’s gonna stick with me.


TWO CLAWS FOR BIRDS

2026-06-18
Whoaaa this one is a banger


CEREMONY, n. - A WASH, n.

2026-06-18
Man you should rewrite the whole dictionary


The Unpacking

2026-06-18
What a realistic picture you’ve wanted


Yet another hospital test

2026-06-18
Yer a legend Alan


One Day I Woke Up Early

2026-06-18
What a quaint and curious poem. I love it.


Bonded

2026-06-18
What imagery!


When I close my eyes I see eyelids

2026-06-18
Nice one


NOW, n.

2026-06-16
Nice one, this


rested quill

2026-06-16
Ahh reminds me of Keats: Here lies one whose name was writ in water.

Wonderful poem this one


rain-slick steps

2026-06-16
A brief but poignant piece. I like it, especially it’s muted ness.


IT SEEMS DEATH HAS BETTER PLANS

2026-06-16
A potent poem; one that arrested me with the personification of death.


BLOSSOM

2026-06-16
A wonderful meditative poem that’s a joy to read.


when ?

2026-06-16
You’re asking questions I never have. What a joy to read!


TOY FOR THE END OF THE WORLD

2026-06-16
I concur with Allen. That last stanza is stunning.


Diagnosis

2026-06-16
Stunning use of anaphora. Great piece.


tropezarse (meaning to stumble in Spanish)

2026-06-16
Hmm a poem to ponder on. At least for me.


Mens sana in corpore sano

2026-06-16
Clever as always


Too Many Forty-Sevens

2026-06-15
The mundane made adventure! Good one


The Platypus

2026-06-15
I love this! A brilliant meditation on humanity through the personified lens of a platypus


If there is a God

2026-06-15
I don’t believe in God but God believes in me