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Sameen

30 years old

from Nepal

The latest comments that Sameen has written.

Before She Slept		2026-03-30 Lovely, lovely, lovely
Grandpa		2026-03-30 aww man, reminds me of my own grandpa
WHY DO I LOVE YOU SO ( repost)		2026-03-30 Masterfully Done
Purple and Blue		2026-03-30 I loved the mouth feel of this poems. Meaning, I love how my mouth moves when reading this poem aloud.
Peanuts		2026-03-30 So sad. And the way you've described it, so visceral.
On This Early Spring Morning		2026-03-30 What wonderful scenes you've painted
Only The Gloating Silence Knows		2026-03-29 Good one. I especially liked the she parts
shared distances		2026-03-29 Good one. I especially liked "Splintered shards/of once a unified day."
Michelangelo		2026-03-29 A most wonderful tanka
Enough to Show Up		2026-03-29 Amen. Also, I love the line "the body as argument"
high heels		2026-03-29 Amazing
Anger Quenches Devil's Hunger		2026-03-29 Ain't that the truth
The nectar of truth		2026-03-29 wonderful. George Herbert would be proud
Pen Pushers		2026-03-27 Pen pushers indeed
Never 2 Old		2026-03-27 Hillarious! I love it
tangerine		2026-03-27 i dont know what to say except your poem feels so cute
THE FUTCHER IS LOOKING BLEKE		2026-03-27 oh bugger indeed
Cemetery of fate		2026-03-27 Amen
REMEMBER BETTE DAVIS EYES?		2026-03-27 a wow poem definitely
After		2026-03-27 i am curious about why you chose short lines for this particular poem
Until Then		2026-03-27 killer last line. saves the poem from too much pathos
images		2026-03-27 phenomenal
Looming		2026-03-27 the lack of punctuation makes this one long loom, nice choice on that
Dear Ralph		2026-03-27 I love how the poem leads to that stellar ending
Today's Entry in my Diary		2026-03-27 "I am a recovered insane person." what a line, man
Thank You Is Not Enough		2026-03-27 aww cute
The Council’s Verdict		2026-03-27 Very clever. I also love the use of off rhymes
reclamations' desk		2026-03-27 hillarious
The Pollening		2026-03-27 very picturesque. i love it
it rains		2026-03-27 the ending's a bit weak. but nice nonetheless
Really, you're on your own		2026-01-26 Nice
Debtsville		2026-01-26 Nice
PoetBay People: Lawrence ('Larry') Beck		2026-01-19 The GOAT of Poetbay
Goodbye to Poetbay and To all My dear Friends (See you later)		2026-01-04 And he never returned lol
November		2025-11-25 Oh my god the meter in this poem is fucking amazing. Good job. I love it!
bees n flowers		2025-11-23 Poetbay’s first poem
The snail-		2025-11-10 Very Robinson Jeffers. I like it.
Maybe I Should be Thankful		2025-11-10 I love love love how the poem's ending echoes the beginning. This cyclical-ness really ties the poem up very well. Amazingly done.
Namesakes		2025-11-10 A wonderful trip through a family history seldom talked about. I too have wondered about the women in my family, on both sides, and what their lives must've been. The difference between us being you sat down and wrote about it. Kudos.
to the unseen		2025-11-10 quaint, concise and simply amazing
Help Needed to Keep PoetBay Running (Update)		2025-10-20 I volunteer
SOME BEDSIDE MANNER!		2024-11-19 Doctors are often assholes
Reflection		2024-11-19 Nice
Trump will fix it?		2024-11-08 Damn right
The Man		2024-10-27 The GOAT
Manyfew		2024-08-07 Like Jazz. This poem is like Jazz
Subtle		2024-08-07 The details really make the poem. I love how these finely detailed images flow together to that wonderful end
FOOD OF CHOICE		2024-08-07 Poetry is food. You are absolutely correct
PIXELS IN THE MIST		2024-08-07 Good one. I’d have loved more detail but the brevity works for what it is. Thanks for posting
The Widow		2024-08-02 Poignantly captured, man. Amazing