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Sameen

28 years old

from Nepal

The latest comments that Sameen has written.

Not One of the Cool Kids, I Guess		2024-07-26 Hilarious and that song slaps
Nobody's Hero		2024-07-26 Rhymes for days and what rhymes they are
Djinns		2024-07-26 Fucking amazing bud
WORLDS MOST TYPICAL POEM:		2024-07-25 Nah, one of a kind more like. All you. All you.
from the mind, from the body (revised)		2024-07-25 A is funny B took quite the turn C is fucking amazing, boys
Let it Expire Today		2024-07-25 Its like Michael Jackson said, "They don't care about us"
Not the First Mass Murderer to be Feted by Congress		2024-07-25 My heart aches for the sole person in that hall who stood against genocide holding a sign
Life Forever		2024-07-25 A wonderful circle of a poem
Twinkle Twinkle		2024-07-25 Time spent wasting is not wasted time as they say
Carried Along		2024-07-25 Harrowing, and the absolute truth of living these days
Passing		2024-07-25 Amazing
Just now		2024-07-24 The poem is beautiful and full of yearning but its the last couplet that really does it for me
I do		2024-07-24 Poignant, man. The world is too much with us
summer pasture		2024-07-24 Your poetry deserves so many more eyes than it gets on the bay. It deserves spectacle and awards and cold hard cash you're so fuckn good
The Quintessential Western Asshole		2024-07-24 Fuckn hell, this is biting
My Encounter with Philip Glass		2024-07-24 Damn, sorry to hear that
To Disintegrate		2024-07-23 I love how cyclical it is. Very Borges-ian. Amazing as always.
Mutability		2024-07-23 Beautiful. I want to wear the optimism on display here
the backstory is this		2024-07-23 Whoa. I have no words. So much said in so little. I am in awe.
To live is to die.		2024-07-23 Beautiful, just beautiful. The rhythm. The tale. The rhymes. Amazing.
Doubly Stuck		2024-07-23 An apt title for a poem that has me glued to my seat
"The World's Finest Healthcare System"		2024-07-23 Fuck, that last line
chain reaction		2024-07-22 Amen
hillbilly elegy		2024-07-22 I’d heard tell of that god awful book. I’m glad I saw your poem. I won’t read it. I’m glad I read you
Destiny		2024-07-22 Love what you did at the end there
Sea		2024-07-22 Both are good but I prefer the first one
Just Don't Ask Me to Do the Parallel Bars		2024-07-22 I love this poem. I love this celebration of a poem.
A grit of sand-		2024-07-22 Your words crash against each other like hard waves. I love it.
When Trump is Gone and Fanon Reappears		2024-07-22 A wonderful fantasy that I hope turns to reality
Sunday Afternoon		2024-07-22 That final couplet is everything
Lion		2024-07-22 Damn
Sunday		2024-07-22 Whoa, again you've gotten so much better
A day before it sets.		2024-07-22 Love it. You've utilized line breaks SO WELL here
Holding Up		2024-07-22 Milan Kundera would be proud
midnight		2024-07-22 The old masters would be proud
Things Fall Apart		2024-07-22 Very 'Once in a Lifetime'. I love it
The origin of the text message		2024-07-22 Another banger
James Bond's girl		2024-07-22 FUCK dude, how are you so good with the BREVITY
her name is lin		2024-07-22 You great such magical words in so few lines I am amazed and appalled
Emily, Fleshed Out		2024-07-22 This poem is what yearning is all about. Just wow. You never fail to amaze me
i ma (am) trying		2024-07-22 Whoa, you're on a roll
Making sense		2024-07-22 The last two verses kinda elevate this good poem to great
Real is Bare		2024-07-22 Amazing.
Genesis		2024-07-22 Fuck, the pathos in this poem bleeds
WHERE'S MY RHYTHM OF MY RHYTHMS		2024-07-22 I hope not too
REMEMBERING THE PAST		2024-07-22 A poignant capture of quite the portrait
Like Ms. Angelou, I Rise		2024-07-22 Wow, just wow.
L I F E - - - itself		2024-07-22 Lmaooooo fuckn hell this is good stuff The spacing really makes the poem here
the grimace does not make the monkey		2024-07-22 Fuckn hell you're on a roll
Soap Bubbles		2024-07-22 Oh fuck, I love love LOVE the ending