| Osiepna...who said I refused you
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2007-01-10
Mike,your presentation of this piece of poetry is brilliant.The poem is uniquely African yet simply understood by all and sundry.
The use of vernacular and broken english really captures the emotion of the character who feels rejected by the lady.
But for a few areas,particularly th dropping of names which can throw the reader off,I feel that this is a great write and Mike you have greatness inside of you.Keep it up brother.
From Zambia with Love,
Matayo
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| Best of me...
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2006-10-16
very rhythmic and exciting poetry
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| Independent?
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2006-06-30
mike,you have done it again.straight to the point
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| Uneasy Truce
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2006-06-11
quite a good write
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| She said...
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2006-05-13
the contents of this poem are very powerful...very powerful..very very powerful...good..good..good..good..
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| Lament to a rapist
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2006-04-28
very truthful...very powerful...very emotional
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| Untold
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2006-04-26
great write...beauty
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| Moving On.
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2006-04-24
powerful write.
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| Moving On.
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2006-04-24
powerful write
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| The Sweetest Thing
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2006-04-22
I like the way you wrote this poem.It is so sincere and from the soul.Keep up the good work
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| A Kenyan Expression of Love
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2006-04-21
hey my brother.now this is true african poetry.same thing happens here in Zambia
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| A Kenyan Expression of Love
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2006-04-21
hey my brother.now this is true african poetry.same thing happens here in Zambia
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| Moonleaves
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2006-04-19
pia..the way you write is just so very very very great...you are a welcome addition to www.poetbay.com...keep it up
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| Ghetto Prayer
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2006-04-15
you speak from the heart..well written
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| Still I rise
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2006-04-15
well captured..mike..keep it up
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| Still I rise
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2006-04-15
well captured..mike..keep it up
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| I hate watching the news
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2006-03-16
this is very true..especially in my home country of zambia and all over the world as well.
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| Salt in my wounds
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2006-03-16
superb!
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from Germany 