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Osiepna...who said I refused you

2007-01-10
Mike,your presentation of this piece of poetry is brilliant.The poem is uniquely African yet simply understood by all and sundry.
The use of vernacular and broken english really captures the emotion of the character who feels rejected by the lady.
But for a few areas,particularly th dropping of names which can throw the reader off,I feel that this is a great write and Mike you have greatness inside of you.Keep it up brother.
From Zambia with Love,
Matayo


Best of me...

2006-10-16
very rhythmic and exciting poetry


Independent?

2006-06-30
mike,you have done it again.straight to the point


Uneasy Truce

2006-06-11
quite a good write


She said...

2006-05-13
the contents of this poem are very powerful...very powerful..very very powerful...good..good..good..good..


Lament to a rapist

2006-04-28
very truthful...very powerful...very emotional


Untold

2006-04-26
great write...beauty


Moving On.

2006-04-24
powerful write.


Moving On.

2006-04-24
powerful write


The Sweetest Thing

2006-04-22
I like the way you wrote this poem.It is so sincere and from the soul.Keep up the good work


A Kenyan Expression of Love

2006-04-21
hey my brother.now this is true african poetry.same thing happens here in Zambia


A Kenyan Expression of Love

2006-04-21
hey my brother.now this is true african poetry.same thing happens here in Zambia


Moonleaves

2006-04-19
pia..the way you write is just so very very very great...you are a welcome addition to www.poetbay.com...keep it up


Ghetto Prayer

2006-04-15
you speak from the heart..well written


Still I rise

2006-04-15
well captured..mike..keep it up


Still I rise

2006-04-15
well captured..mike..keep it up


I hate watching the news

2006-03-16
this is very true..especially in my home country of zambia and all over the world as well.


Salt in my wounds

2006-03-16
superb!