| Pieces of a Dream
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2007-08-03
nice poem dear friend....
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| You Are the River
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2007-08-03
i love the title of the poem, and found poem too intresting....good poem...
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| Requiem for a Dead Poet
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2007-08-02
this is a good poem, saying eternal truth and pain...anyone who spoke for truth and love..always disappear early, but last for ever
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| Heart is a Lonely Traveller
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2007-06-25
what a great title, just loved it...good poem....
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| Happiness
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2007-06-13
very nice poem Kathy, last line justify whole poem...nice job
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| Happiness
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2007-06-13
very nie poem Kathy, last line justify whole poem...nice job
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| Only Rain by M.A.Meddings
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2007-06-13
nice poem, shows how deeply you attached to your beloved one
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| Its Just Life.
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2007-06-01
deep and profound....nice poem....
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| Love is an enigma...
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2007-05-28
nice poem, reminds me of KhaliGibran, one of my fev...
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| Wings of Poesy
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2007-04-06
soulful solitude..love this one...good writting Zoya
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| Voices of silence
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2007-04-05
its very profound and like estern philosophy...like it....
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| 51) Voice of Iraq
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2007-04-03
war is an evil, whichever place it is happening...its really sad to see and hear about it..this is a good write....i also wrote one on same....read it any time
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| Life's mysterious journey-a haiku collection
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2007-04-02
these are quit simple and true....good one....
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| Time- A question of Perception
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2007-03-06
Its very true and little bit analytical... life is made of time fragments, its on us how use that little time frames.
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| What will I find in your heart?
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2007-02-20
its good oen Arti, i like the last Stanza very much....
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| Spring (haiku Poem)
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2007-01-25
very nice, like this one...
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| A Little Child
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2007-01-16
this is good one, perfectly portray the picture of little girl, but are u talking abt some kind of girl [ means war or oraphan]or general
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| War
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2007-01-16
thats how we people talk and think about war..good writing..i also wrote soem on war..pls read any time
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| Night and Day
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2007-01-05
you Portray the image of faithful and true lover..good one
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| In Pursuit of Happiness
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2007-01-04
this is truth....
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| The Path of Love and Truth (Christ's journey...)
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2006-12-21
its nice, but nothing new in to this...just replica of thought which inspire you....
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| Life is Never the Same
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2006-12-21
its full of truth, like this piece, i have seen this face of life....
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| Pain
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2006-12-04
Its sad but let me tell you now a days this is the destiny of a true lover. Fuel your art by pain
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| Sex Crave
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2006-11-27
it is quit hot...and made me take a break...and.........
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| Do you ever think of me?
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2006-11-09
Very good imagery and define relationship also, good combination of abstract and concrete. you have potential to be good poet...
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| I am
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2006-11-07
its a good poem, but i would like to suggest something,
"for me to write words from my head" instead of head i think word heart is better,
but overall poem is nice....
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| Oh rain Oh rain
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2006-10-19
all i can say is its superb, omly poetry can bring this rain, so write more and more poems
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| MY SIMPLE PRAYER
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2006-10-06
this is beautiful piece..good job
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| Rain
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2006-10-05
very good poem, last line is superb
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| Eternal
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2006-08-30
its very true..good poem
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| Morning...
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2006-08-20
good one dear..
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| The Elements- Fire
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2006-08-17
this is good, but it could be better if you put more philosophical aspect of fire in to it...anyway good poem
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| Solitude
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2006-08-10
in solitude we learn the lesson of friendship and humanity. good poem
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| The Wild Rose
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2006-08-01
good work...enjoyed it
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| Raindrop.
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2006-07-27
i love rain and i love ur poem...
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| Child Abuse
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2006-07-24
its hard to imagine what u have gone through, i wish u a future full of beautiful life and full of love
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| Child Abuse
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2006-07-24
its hard to imagine what u have gone through, i wish u a future full of beautiful life and full of love
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| Insomnia
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2006-07-10
there is one more Teala inside you who is always awakening....ever read Van Gogh's letter on Insomnia? good one..
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| Rain and Pain
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2006-07-07
its little bit abstract..but left something on our mind...
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| poems
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2006-07-06
they all r nice..good work
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| The Path
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2006-06-28
good writing, it reminds me Khalil Zibran and Osho...well done
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| Innocent
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2006-06-28
thts how one feels when become father/mother...good poem...
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| Aun San Suu Kui
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2006-06-27
though its a little direct but good thought
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| First Monsoon Shower
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2006-06-27
you paint rain beautifuly, personaly and heavenly...love this...
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| A drop of Rain
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2006-06-26
this is nice dear friend...i love rain.
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| just a lonly moment...
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2006-06-21
good one, i m also in love with pain...
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| Alone
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2006-06-14
good one, solitute brings poems.....
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