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Kshiti Dubey

29 years old from India


The latest comments that Kshiti Dubey has written.

She's still here

2022-01-18
This poem is beautiful and heart breaking at the same time. Thank you for sharing.


Warrior

2021-12-23
You are a strong woman with extremely strong ethics Vaishnavi. I'm glad you're on poetbay and like me, you too will have a safe place for letting emotions and creativity flow. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.


TIME TRAVELING

2021-10-20
Hi Ken!
This was a wonderful poem and quite true. Books enable us to not only go back and forth in time, but also transport us to fantasy worlds as well (this coming from a Harry Potter fan).


COW AND A PIGEON

2021-10-20
This was a wonderful read! Reminds me of Dr. Seuss!


WE LIKE YOU AS YOU ARE (inspierde by Kshiti Dubbey poem)

2017-06-12
Ken! It's been a while since I've got back on poetbay and this was a lovely surprise! :) And every line is true! We should like ourselves as who we are and only then will others like us back. If they don't then they aren't important.

This is a lovely and beautiful poem!


FATHER OF THE FLOWERS - OF ALEPPO

2016-08-26
In the midst of all the wrong things happening in the world, it is necessary to keep the good in us alive. Only then can we, one day rid ourselves of all the wrong happening in the world. Wonderful write Ken. :)


With A Sigh

2016-08-26
How wonderful it is to fall in love! Such a beautiful poem. :)


UNDERSTANDING

2016-08-23
This sums up all kinds of people. Good write Ken! :)


SO I'M A REVOLUTIONARY! POINT BEEING?

2016-03-29
Words are more effective than guns any day! :)


BRUSSELS AIRPORT - SELFIES!

2016-03-22
Unfortunately we've come to a time where we find people filming calamities or accidents rather than helping people out. Their self-worth is dependent on how many likes they gather on social media.
You have depicted that so well in your write. :)


I don't know her name

2016-03-22
I saw a scene play out right in front of my eyes. It made me wonder what series of events led him/her there in the first place. Well written!


FOUTCHA - REAR VIEW MIRROR - ADVICED!

2016-02-11
This is such a wonderful poem! :)

We humans never do seem to learn from the past. We keep pushing ourselves into the same ditch again and again. You've expressed this in a very effective way through your poem.


LIVE AND LET LIVE (WORLD WAR ONE)

2014-03-20
War is a sad game that the rich play, and its the poor and innocent who die.
I liked the text a lot. I could literally see the scene play out in front of my eyes.
And for some reason I imagined the officer to be this fat stout man with a permanent frown on his face.
Good write and well done! :)


Freedom

2012-10-09
I love the way it rhymes. It's true that when freedom is taken away the strong become weak, and it is freedom which brings out the true colors of an individual.
Applauds!


Sleepless eyes.

2012-10-09
Very well written. I sometimes feel sorry for the soldiers who might be living with the same regret of having their hands stained with the blood of all the people who they have killed.
Applauds!


You're on Your Own Now Kiddo...

2011-08-22
losing someone you love is a very hard thing to go through. this piece of writing touched me and i wish i could go and hug that little girl myself. :)


Cost Of Innocence

2011-08-22
It's sad how the world solves it's problems only through violence. The so called leaders only look at what they're gaining, not how much they are losing. Other people have to pay the price of their decisions or whatever grudges they hold against someone. The emotion is very clear in your poem and it forces people to think about the topic. I really like it!


Little girl in a big girl's dress

2011-04-29
This one was more like a story. It had my attention from the start till the end. But I think the guy in this needs a good spanking for treating the girl that way :)


Rivulet of crystal.

2011-04-26
I agree with mayamiko. You paint with your words. It was as though I could see a silent movie playing in my mind :-). I liked it a lot.


Pilloried penance.

2011-04-26
It's a very nice poem. I like the message it gives out, of never giving up and to keep trying no matter what the obstacles may be. I loved it. Kudos to you and Galateus


Har raste se pyar huaa jata hai....

2011-04-26
Pyar ek aisa ehsaas hai jo jab ho jaaye toh sab kuch khaas aur aacha lagne lagta hai...har mamuli cheez nayab lagne lagti hai... mujhe aapki kavita bahaut acchi lagi :-)


Impostor

2011-04-23
Everybody has had a feeling of not fitting-in at some point or the other in their life I guess. It's what makes us human; the feeling of wanting to belong. And your poem is a good interpretation of that feeling. :-)


QUIET TIMES

2011-04-23
Wow! For a moment I actually felt as if I was there! It's simple, sweet, short and beautiful. :-)


Longing

2011-04-23
A very nice one indeed amandeep. And I agree with StanCooper that "Longing" would be a very apt title


I'm Here and You're There

2011-01-12
I like the lines --

I'm here and you're there.
There just doesn't have a clue.
I'm here and you're there.
How lucky there is, to be with you

Your poems have a very nice rhyming scheme.
Thanks for sharing them with us.


Internal bleed.

2010-12-22
Wow! Tis' a strange feeling when someone hurts you. You really do feel as though you are internally bleeding. I like the way you write, a beautiful and intelligent poem.


Loud faculty.

2010-12-14
You are an amazing writer! I love reading your texts.


Remember Me

2010-12-11
Wow! This is so lovely! I loved reading it.


A new chance.

2010-11-28
Everyone deserves a second chance. I'm bookmarking this one.


Spiritual bouquet.

2010-11-23
I loved the flow of the poem. 'On the musky day that we did see', I felt as though I was watching a scene go by my eyes.


Wonderful Way[Sonnet]

2010-11-15
This is well written and cheerful. I like it very much!


Debbie.

2010-11-14
This is really good! The first two lines got my attention and after that, I stuck to the entire poem.

Kshiti


Light of love

2010-11-14
This is written very beautifully. It paints a picture in front of eyes.


Don't Wake me Up

2010-11-11
It's short, sweet and well written.
I liked it very much...:)


Death by Ridicule

2010-11-11
I love the last line! The poem was very expressive and beautiful. You give me a lot to learn from, in terms of language and how to express myself.


I am coming home...

2010-10-30
A beautiful poem, which is very well written. Applaud.


The Mysterious Mystery!

2010-10-30
A lovely poem.....Applaud!


AWAITED FRIENDSHIP

2009-02-14
Wow! these are some very intense thoughts you've penned down there! Good work!


Life, the Great Teacher

2009-02-10
I love how you say so much in just a few words. Cheers to such a poem.


Khyal mera dil ke kisi kone me...

2009-01-21
I liked it...accha laga, par I think you should translate it too for the people who don't understand hindi.
Kya aap hamesha bichadne aur door ho jaane ke kavita likhte hai?


Tickling Butterflies Of Joy

2009-01-20
its beautiful and inspiring


The Riches of Nothing

2009-01-17
Your poems leave me speechless and in the end, I cant think of stufff to write over here!


Waves Never Stop~Wind Never Ends

2009-01-17
Wow? Your poems inspire me. Sometimes I ask myself, why dont I get such ideas?!


No Matter Where You Go

2009-01-06
This beautiful work of art just made my heart melt and tingle.
Congrats on such a wonderful poem.


Amethyst Rocks

2008-12-31
Quite a long time since you've written a poem but you still haven't lost you're golden touch!


juuta...

2008-12-23
aatank ek aaisi bala hai jis ka shayad hi koi hal ho.
aatankvadiyo ke na koi apne hote hai bas sabhi paraye.
Sarhado ko todhne ke bajae woh unhe masbuth karte hai.
26/11 ke attacks ne saari duniya ko sharminda hi nahi, gussa bhi dila diya.
I liked your work.


sard subah

2008-12-23
shayad ye pehli baar ho ki kisi ne hindi mein ek kavita poetbay par likhi ho. Aap ki ye kavita shayari aur kavita ka mael lagta hai.
Mujhe bahut pyaara laga


Twilight's Dance

2008-12-23
I must say this is quite a beautiful piece.


A Safe Haven

2008-12-23
My!My! It's like I could imagine everything in front of me.
For a moment I forgot everything. This is truly a mighty great work of art.


Guardian Angel

2008-12-23
Its short and beautiful.
I'd give this a full rating.
Hats off :-)