This is basically how I write all my poems. Here's my example, I used the song Bang Bang, made popular by Nancy Sinatra and Cher. It's an oldie but goodie. Here's what I wrote to the tune of that song. Please let us know which song you are using. I'm not sure how this section works so I will put my Poem to that song in next? lol thank you for bearing with me
|
LacyxDevine64 years old from USA
|
My poem to the tune of the song Bang Bang, I shot you down
And Then
I was 9 and you were 10
We played games in the chicken pen
I would cluck and you would laugh
We'd roll around til we had to take a bath
And then, you left town
And then, I thought I would drown
And then, I felt like a clown
And then, they took you far away
Years went by and we grew up
With different flavors in our cups
I lived high and you lived low
I think I saw you once at the picture show
And then, you came back around
And then, I saw you in my town
And then, I couldn't stand the crowd
And then, you came back to town.
I held my breath and I counted to 10
Before I dialed your number again.
I know now what I knew then
My love for you was never thin
And then, you said Hello
And then, I became jello
And then, I blurted I love you
And then, you said you love me too
Decades now have come and gone
My love for you is still as strong
Our babies have already grown
Somehow you still make me moan
And then, our hair went gray
And then, I smiled every day
And then, I loved you more and more
And then, God took you away
Poetry By LacyxDevine
Read 203 times
Written 2022-02-01 16:26
Save as a bookmark (requires login)
Write a comment (requires login)
Send as email
Print text
D G Moody
I loved this - humming to Bang Bang, it works so well; and all the time sad but sweet.
2022-02-03
Ann Wood 
I love it and I hear the song in person from my gorgeous friend LacyxDevine. You are three in one, artist, poet and singer my dear friend.
2022-02-01
one trick pony
This is delightful, I was smiling all the way though . . . until the last line, which stung.
But love is love, and eternal, and that is what I read in your words and song.
2022-02-01
LacyxDevine
This sounds a whole lot better rolling off of your tongue if it's Sung.
2022-02-01
|
|
D G Moody |
|
|
Ann Wood |
|
|
one trick pony |
|
|
LacyxDevine |