My first triolet.


Maybe Sometimes I

Maybe sometimes I
can see exactly what you're trying to hide.
Maybe because I know all of your lies.
Maybe sometimes I
can see the real tragedy from the look in your eyes.
Maybe it's time to sever these ties.
By who's rules are you going to abide?
Maybe sometimes I
can see exactly what you're trying to hide.



Poetry by Amanda Manmohan
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Written on 2006-05-31 at 03:45

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Love Knight
are your poems based on real experience. Mine are for a special girl. I love them. i love how you show you are strong. write back. ok.
2006-06-19


Marte
this is a very nice one! :)
2006-06-01


Shas Ramlogan
Something about this poem struck me. Maybe its the full-on punchy language, the emotion, the flowing rhythm or just the beautiful way you have captured the sentiment. Great piece :)
2006-05-31