Another cinquain


My Final Plea

Nothing
will mend the scarred
incisions you left here.
Crucify your selfishness, set
me free.




Poetry by Amanda Manmohan
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Written on 2006-07-18 at 02:58

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Troll
i cannot write a decent cinquain to save my life. you just blew me away with this, it is fantastic!!
2006-07-28


Alexander
Amazing Amanda:D Thank you for sharing it:)
2006-07-19


Malin Johansson
a good one here Amanda!!!
Regards
2006-07-18


haseen whel
hummm lovely poem here indeed!!!kissess
2006-07-18


Arti
Thoughtful write. I love the cinquain as a form, and this is a beautiful one.
2006-07-18


Onyeka Nwelue
One point made. The poet is the poet. I like your guts, Amanda. No scrutiny. A great poet, indeed.

Nice.
2006-07-18