When you are trully in love with some1, don't give up. There are many ways to bring together two hearts others than being distant or far. An open and sincere talk is one.


1) Before the Decay

Before the decay
B4 one feels the dismay,
I want to give it a shot.
I wish it survives.
The love I have for you is higher than desire
Darling, precious
It was neither you nor I
Believe the matter just needs a while
Before you break the bond and stab the dream
That we both've worked hard to make it real
Let not a silly word causes a wound or
a mischief creates a deceit
Don't destroy what I think is greater than anything .
For I have faith that says
True love is uneasy to find
And some do spent their whole lives seeking for one
listen, apple of my eyes with your heart and try to understand
Give me an ear and forget the fear .
If I made you upset lately,
Know that I didn't mean .
Things just need to be declared and
And They will never change if you remain there.
Come closer
Come remorseful
Let us renew our oaths
Give it a thought
For the sake of our passion that years stood strong
We need to reconcile and remove the pile.
So come up and let's make it up




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2006-06-03 at 20:58

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sabereh lotfian
Yay,let's make it up .beautiful ending!!!!
I specially liked where you said: Let not a silly wod causes a wound. most of the time the deepest wounds are caused by simple silly words & a happiness by a pure wish from depth of a clear heart that you can easily see through:)
Thanks for sharing:D

Best wishes & love
~Sabereh
2006-12-20


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
communication is the strongest link in relationships... too often things go awry just because of miscommunication... a good point you get across here... love has its up and downs, and when downs are around, theyre not a reason to give up... a strong expression on your thoughts about love... well done... :f xx
2006-09-14


ebanieluver
I really like your poems, I havent read all of them but the ones I have read are really great. They are insightful and relatable. I cant wait to read more.
2006-07-18


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
this is beautiful.

liz
2006-06-07


Teala
Very unique and witty--great job!
2006-06-06


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Amanda

As a romantic poet myself i reallyappreciate this beautiful text

of course i guess he will be round now with a bottle of wine and some flowers well done welcome to the bay rgds mike
2006-06-05