Words can speak louder here, i guess.


2) Don't remind me of Him

Don't talk about him when am here
You know my friends how much it hurts when I hear
I hear that he's there in another land
That he's there with a new love
Though I always wish him the best
Raising my hands and asking God to bless
Bless his life with happiness so true
And give him all the support away from mourn
Yet I can't help but remember him folks
When ever he's a topic while you talk
For you have no clue how much him I do miss.
For you don't know
How strong was the passion in my heart's still kept
and I remain see him here among us
Recall his smiles and sense their echoes
I often feel his touch on the meadows
In which we walked miles
With no fatigue
With consistence, that was our fuel
And you keep reminding me
You keep bringing these pictures back
When I try badly staying away from the fact
That he's no longer with us as in the past




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2006-06-06 at 16:04

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
so very poignant the sorrowful longing that comes through the words here... and to be reminded when we're not ready to be is an added thorn... so well described and conveyed here... i have to say, to wish the departed all the best in their life despite the ache that is felt inside, as you express in this, takes a gentle heart that is selflessly beautiful... very moving poem... :f xx
2006-11-02


Zainab
Nice poem here
No time I was bzy
I tought to have a look of some of your poems lol! my buddy
Rate:4
2006-09-05



Feelings, such as depicted in your poem, even myriads of miles of land and sea cannot contain it; if you would empty the ocean and pour in those feelings, the ocean will be filled again. Thus, the last good-bye is only that of an absent of time, for before you know it the Sun will shine, and the greetings with feelings will begin anew. A truly amazing poem with amazing metaphors!
2006-09-05


ChiLLie
beautiful, just beautiful...
2006-06-27



I really felt the longing of your love through this poetry...nice flow!!! keep on writing here!!! kissess
2006-06-08


Teala
Sorrowful and full of emotions--great write!
2006-06-07


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
You have an amazing gift
the way you convey images here -
speechless.

liz
2006-06-07


Malin Johansson
A very sad but loving poem here...
I liked it
Rgds
2006-06-07


Lourdes
why is he not with you
is the thought your poem leaves me with ..
was he taken from you by force??
Its a good and expressively strong write, but it somehow annoys me a little.. that may be a good thing.
2006-06-06