Haiku for my writing class.


Burning Love

Fire will repay you
This fire burns for you, my love
Brighter than the sun



Haiku by Amanda Manmohan
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Written on 2006-06-17 at 02:16

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Emeka Chike Nwogu
Brief and beautiful poem. I like it. Keep it up.

Emeka
2006-06-24


Alexander
Powerful words my friend. Really power ful. Great write:)

Alex
2006-06-21


Teala
Very nice, revenge, perhaps??
2006-06-19


Love Knight
I am not a master at Haiku's. I a freewriter. But i know your haiku has been mastered.
2006-06-18


Lourdes
A stunning Haiku, perfect in form.
It glows in the colors of the fire your words paint.
2006-06-17


Malin Johansson
Brighter than the sun , Beautiful written haiku about love :)
Sunny regards
2006-06-17


Kathy Lockhart
nicely done Amanda, kept to the count and form!
2006-06-17


Pamela A Lamppa
A Very nice Haiku/Senryu. I hope you did well on this assignment. Nicely done. ~Pam
2006-06-17