Truth Speaks in Mysterious Ways

Darkness incarnate and
Silence complete,
This is your heart,
A pleasure to meet.
Lost in the folds
Of your deeply different mind
I can only rejoice
For here I am able to find,
Some different view of the world,
Some critique as yet unseen,
I revel that I can hear your views,
Giving me a new way to lean.
Grateful am I that you are here,
With the strength to judge the world without fear.

Sonnet by Xuxa
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Written on 2006-11-17 at 05:27

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i like it a lot! this one is very good, and it is easy to read because the rhyming and flow if it! =D

Neil Chalcraft
another very nice one, nice and flowing, easily read, well done!

Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
great flow, rhythm and rhyme. intriquing thoughts. well done!

keith nunes
a superbly cool piece turned from an angle we don't always see from. hot shit!

A very astute view point from a very yellow duck lol. but really Matt that was very good. Hand claps all around : )

~Aaron Rowe