~*~*~*~.::.She.::.~*~*~*~

She leaves with a memory of her innocent eyes, totally lost in a world of beauty.

She makes the sunrise with her warm glowing smile

She moves so smoothly, i feel happiness surrounding her,

Like a queen of enternal ecstasy she is.

I feel tenderness in the air, when she is around, i feel enlightened with the scent of passion and lavenders surrounding her.

I feel breezes of vanilla flowers arousing, playing music on the strings of my heart, creating love beats in my soul and echoing joyous melodies of heaven in my mind.

She, when she talks i feel my pulses and shivers through my body, that responds to the most beautiful sound of angels god created. My lips dreams of her soft pink cherry lips thats moves in a dancing charm.

~MAX~




Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2006-12-12 at 01:53

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Amanda K
youdo write with love. you do feel the words and what's greater make others feel it . a very romantic moving piece.

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2006-12-17


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow!A great love poem!This is beautiful Max!*storm of applause*Well written!Wow!and *bookmarked*of course!

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2006-12-12