Mini Rose Poem Series


Timeless Rose

Like rain, beauty falls from the heavens

You show strength in times of adversity

A rose so worn by time itself

Yet radiant by spring's showers

Petals that hold care and promise

No force can alter your infinite glow

You're truly are a timeless rose 





Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2007-03-27 at 03:51

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nature
THIS IS A BEAUTIFULL PEOM
YOU ARE TALENTED
2007-04-03


Contina Savage
I like "Timeless Rose"

Keep on writing...
2007-04-01


Amanda K
a timeless rose is such a sweet metaphore.so musical and full of melodies. excellent job
2007-03-31


yoonoos peerbocus
wonderful ,a rose usually is ephemeral but you have given it immortality
2007-03-29


kid
This is a nice and lovely poem. i like it
2007-03-29


ardent.March
What a wonderful idea to do a mini rose series, I will have to read them all! :)

This one is beautiful! I love mini roses, I love this part:
Timeless Rose

Like rain, beauty falls from the heavens

You show strength in times of adversity

A rose so worn by time itself

Yet radiant by springs showers

Petals that hold care and promise

No force can alter your infinite glow

You're truly are a timeless rose

hehe : all of it:)
2007-03-29


Amy Buchanan
Thank you for sharing, I agree roses endure time. They have been cultivated for thousands of years. I think thousands of years from now people will still have a passion for the beauty of roses. So well put.
2007-03-28


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
This is so..... speechless.

BOOKMARKED!

Look forward to the rest
of this series.

L.
2007-03-27