these are my feelings, these are no words of poetry, words of heart...I want to say thank you Kathy and M.A Meddings, and i tell my love HOLD

Dear Kathy...

 September can you hear?

Her cries echoing in my soul,

my soul that's hungry for her embrace,

for her eyes,

the smile on her face,

September, can you answer me?

acting strong yet so weak,

/even my tears run on my cheek,/

when i hear her saying,

"i love you, when are you going to be here?"

and i cry and scream within my heart,

do i tell her next september?

next year?

or do i mourn that we are apart?

all i do is that

 when she cries and asks for me,

i cheer her up, "i love thee"

i love thee

i love thee.








Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2008-09-04 at 15:51

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Max this is absolutely the most caring, loving, and tender poem. Thank you for the dedication for as you and I have communicated about long distance love, we have a understanding of the love and the pain that comes with the waiting and yearning to be together. And, dearest Max, it is worth every minute, for when the moment comes when you are united with the one you love, it is heaven on earth. I send up my prayers for you and your sweetheart. I hope that September 2009 brings you the thrill, the joy, the love just as September 2007 did for Michael and me.
Sincerely, Kathy
this is in my favorites. : )

Phyllis J. Rhodes
I feel as though I have seen directly into your heart.
There is so much tenderness here and it is conveyed with beauty and truth.

night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
The melody of these words reminds me of a song: Mocking bird hill:)