...first it was 'Sometimes i feel i am the rain' by Zoya, then came '...a leaf' by kip, then '...the flower', again by Zoya, i also saw '...the sun' by Marie and more on the 'Sometimes i feel...' pieces, i present, as suggested by Zoya Zaidi...


...Sometimes I feel I am a bee...(as suggested by Zoya)...

Sometimes i feel i am a bee,
And you're the flower that in my path
i see,
Your succulent self brightly poised
atop the peak of a rose filled shrub,
Waiting for your pollen grains to be devoured
And scatterred by an eager me

Sometimes when the busy bee in me
is trodding the sunny sky,
The beauty of your pinkish hue
still clothed in the drying drops of the rain,
The subtle vulgarity of your exposed petals
hidden beneath the vast translucency of the misty air
calls out to a yearning me

Sometimes when the unfiltered rays of the sun
permeate the gases in the air and fall upon you
making glossy your pleasant petals,
My eyes halt their prowl,
A prolonged rush through my petit body
And i choose not to look any farther

Sometimes,
While I fly through the sky toward you,
And the sweet freshness of your scent
has filled every inch,
The clinging leaf beside you loses his sheepish smile,
For I the bee has seen a rose,
Whose graceful style has caught his eye.





Poetry by kip
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Written on 2006-02-01 at 14:50

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Zoya Zaidi
Sometimes I feel I am the candle* off your honeycomb,
Of the wax, you lovingly made essence of your home...

For the rest, dear kip, go to my page-
My answer to your 'honey bee' is posted there already!

(((((hugs for the brilliant write)))))

The game is still on...!

xxx, love, Zoya
2006-02-02


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Maybe Zoya can write Sometime's I feel I am the Bee Hive in response.
I would love to see this series continued.
Liz.
2006-02-02