| e-lationship
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2007-04-09
I couldn't agree more ! Good write, thanks for sharing. We wait in anticipation for ANOTHER..... ;)
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| You
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2007-04-08
The same sun that shines on you is today shinning on your daughter in London . It is an absolutly beautiful day here , enhanced by your beautiful tribute to your daughter. Happy birthday Soni..
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| Starless
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2007-03-25
Waiting for round 2 of this one, its one of those poems I feel has been posted before its conclution. or is just me simply wanting more?
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| Star fisherman
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2007-03-24
As a fisherman Dan I always try to catch the unobtainable and the improbable. I too am a dreamer, I too would love to catch my dream. I hope your fisherman will return to try to catch another. After all , it's just what dreamers do. Bravo Dan Bookmarked
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| The Loved One
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2007-03-23
What an absolutly beautiful tribute to your dad, Outstanding , your love shines on through almost obliterating the obvious sadness in the poem and giving it great balance. Thankyou for sharing regards Steve
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| Good Morrow Mr Rat by M.A.Meddings
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2007-03-23
Nice work Mike. Real food for thought ! Yuk nibbling someones toes.
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| My Garden
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2007-03-10
The natural world seems to have an endless abundance of things to write about and you have captured your own little piece of it beautifuly, leaving the reader in no doubt about your passion for it. A well composed, expressive piece of poetry.Thanks for sharing regards Steve
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| The Rose
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2007-02-11
Nice one Dan. Beautiful words for a beautiful subject. Especialy liked the way you arranged the poem to look like a vase for a single rose ,excellent!!! Regards Steve
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| Two Lovers . . .
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2007-01-12
Dan, this is great toilet humour. I think they should have a special section on the bay dedicated to it. You even had the blame it on a friend scenario at the end LOLOLOLO:0 WELL DONE. Regards Steve
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| never more
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2007-01-12
Sounds like you've got a problem with you're locks! If you ring my glazing company the secretary may be able to help !!! (I think you know who I mean) Sad write. Regards Steve
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| Blueness
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2007-01-11
There have not been that many poems on the bay that I can truly say that I identify with . But I have been here, and I have thought these thoughts and I know the imagery here is real, I have lived that moment. A fantastic poem . Thankyou for sharing it,
regards Steve.
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| The desperate solution
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2007-01-08
OUCH ! Real pain, compitently conveyed with just a glimmer of hope that leaves you waiting expectantly untill the poems crushing conclusion. Raw.
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| And Who Is Cooking Your Breakfast Now? by M.A.Meddings
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2007-01-08
Are you my brother? lolol .Great 'welcome to the world of mums ' poem. Well done Mike. Regards Steve
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| Friend I Call Depression
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2007-01-03
Depression is not a friend . It decieves and distorts true perceptions. Can you truly say that you would introduce it as your friend to your loved ones,in the knowledge that they in turn might think that any friend of yours is a friend of theirs? There is enough love coming at you at this moment, from many directions, for you not to need this bagage.All you have to do is look . All depression does is cloak your view. Thinking of you , stay strong. Regards steve
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| No angels in the sky
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2007-01-03
Great emotion , great descrption, great poem . Regards Steve
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| The Winner
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2006-12-29
Good for you . Nice write, Regards Steve
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| Reflections in the New Year
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2006-12-28
You know that! well written powerful text. Thanks for the sharing, Regards Steve
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| Onions And A Christmas Tree
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2006-12-19
I hope not !!!!! Thanks for the laugh. Regards Steve
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| I Once Was
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2006-12-19
I enjoyed the way I didn't get the obvious until the end. Nice style,
well done, regards Steve
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| One Special Night
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2006-12-19
Congratulations on joining the dancing with Angels club. A great experience put to the pen with skill by your hand. Well done regards Steve.
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| Humbuggery.
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2006-12-15
I thought that was realy funny ! Hope that was how it was meant to be and not just me laughing at others misfortunes.
as usual! Still you can always look forward to getting out of your tree.
Either way good write. Regards Steve
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| winter wonderland
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2006-12-02
You paint a fantastic for the mind to see, and heart to feel.Nice one.Regards Steve
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| Wind Of Change by M.A.Meddings an entry to Zoya and alienas elements challenge
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2006-11-29
Realy enjoyed reading that Mike. Thanks. Regards Steve
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| Leaving the bay
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2006-11-29
Trust me. Byron Shelley and Keats all had their critics. You cannot reach the top without taking a few knocks, and it should make you a stronger person on your way to getting there. Think about it , see you soon . Regards Steve
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| Bernard Matthews (a vegetarian's view)
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2006-11-29
Quite a 'bootifull' poem !
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| Come on Join The Barmy Army by M.A.Meddings
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2006-11-26
I wasn't aware that the Aussies had a barmy army 'cause at this point in time you couldn't possibly be talking of England winning the ashes.Could you? Admire your patriotism though. Regards Steve
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| life lessons
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2006-11-26
Great philosophy, and if you live by it you won't go far wrong. especialy liked the last line:) Thankyou . Regards Steve
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| Birds on a Wire
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2006-11-23
I see what you mean. What a wonderful observation Regards .Steve
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| I believe
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2006-11-22
Good poem ,good subject good flow. Well done, Regards Steve
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| Lamplit Dreams
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2006-11-22
Very rare . A poem you can taste, see,smell, and hear without trying! tremendous write . Bravo Regards Steve
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| Cuddle ~ by BlueyedSoul and Saga
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2006-11-21
All I can do, is smile at this poem, and simply, softly.Say "yes". Steve.
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| Bring It On Boys! Bring It On! Yeeha!
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2006-11-20
Good ol' george bush ah. its a real shame he lost the election . Don't you think? Nice one . Loved the content. Regards Steve
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| away
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2006-11-19
It's funny how the simplest of verse can say so much. Nice one . Steve.
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| Split Dimensions
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2006-11-18
Fed mine cold turkey some 27 years ago. But who's counting ? Got rid of the bastard though. Never looked back. (much).Enjoy your youth, you are only here once, and remember . at the start of every demon there is a fork in the road. It's up to you to choose whether to hold his hand , or fuck him of up the road on his own, and take the other path. The world according to Steve. Final quotation number 1
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| I Am Standing So Close To You a cowrite by M.A.Meddings and Blueeyed Soul
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2006-11-18
ARE YOU TWO HAVING A LAUGH???? Not good enough !! I'ts BEAUTIFUL, and I'm sure you know it. (wish I'd wrote it ) Regards Steve.
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| No greed indeed
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2006-11-16
A great poem about how people tend to wipe their feet on things with 'welcome' written on them. Sad but true ,enjoyable read. Regards Steve
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| The Wedding
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2006-11-14
Quite a special wedding gift youve given them here. Regards Steve
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| Pillar of Salt
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2006-11-14
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM . It truly gives something to aspire to. Steve
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| Philip Michael by M.A.Meddings
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2006-11-13
Very touching, very true. Regards Steve
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| What are you worth?
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2006-11-09
Worth my weight in gold ! I'd chop my arm of to pay some debts. But then who would write and tell you how good you are ? (probably everybody ) Great poem ,regards Steve
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| Call not for me
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2006-11-09
This friend of yours must have been some bastard. Powerful stuff ! Pulls no punches. Wel done Regards Steve
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| A pair for every occasion
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2006-11-08
Hi Cheryl. Great fun ,great twist. Took me a minute to sus why there wasn't a frilly pair. Thanks for the smile, Steve.
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| shades
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2006-11-05
Fantastic ! I love this original piece. Regards Steve.
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| All at sea
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2006-11-02
I think this is a fantastic poem, I love the brutal truth within it. If this poem was a film , there wouldn't be a dry eye in the house,with that ending. superb. Steve
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| Don't give up! (This Funeral blues, for everyone)
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2006-11-02
Dan , I believe people are like ships. All are on a journey through turbulant waters, and all of them in the end are abandoned, sunk or skuppered. However sad this may sound. Rejoice in the fact that on all occasions, the crew survived and went on to something better. Be strong .you'r a great captain for your ship. Regards Steve
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| into my eye
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2006-10-28
beautiful work. I took me completely away . EXCELLENT. regards Steve
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| With tears in my eyes
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2006-10-22
a friend of a friend ,came past today.
he touched me although,he's now passed away.
A leaving that's left with immeasurable grief.
For his friends and his family he just wants relief.
But tears that are shed on the memories of friends.
Ensure thier immortality, love never ends
So remember his laughter,and remember his face.
For it's him that will greet you,
when you enter this space.
Thinking of you . Steve
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| The Painted Lake
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2006-10-05
It's good to see someone drawing inspiration from the same well as me. Just goes to show, us fishermen, and women, arn't as daft as you may think. Great imagary, great piece.
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| Haiku-Dance free
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2006-09-22
Conjours up memories of happy days spent on the beaches of Hawaii. So simple. Yet, so awsome.
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from UK