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2007-10-26
This is a great write!!!
I'm goin to have to read more of ur work!!!
its great!!!
keep up the great work!!!!
Take care!!
M.
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| our song..<3- dont matter by akon..
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2007-05-21
I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!
lol....
hope ur doin well...
lata...
M.
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| My Garden
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2007-05-15
wonderful job!!!
keep up the wonderful!!!
M
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| 5-13-07
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2007-05-15
so sweet!!
hope the best for the 2 of you!!!
good luck with everything!
lylas!!!
keep up the great work....
M.
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| Suicide Note
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2007-05-09
sounds like something i would write...for real...like write it and then commite suicide.
well done!
M.
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| what did i do..?
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2007-04-27
This is very good! i like it alot!!...
i can really relate to this!!!
keep up the wonderful work!!!
lata!
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| watching over me.
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2007-04-26
Very deep,
you did a really good job on this one!..
keep up the work! :D
M.
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| abusive relationships
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2007-04-16
Great job!!!
That is soo sad!
Keep up the wonderful work!
lylas!
lata....
M.
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| Ignition Of Us, Our Bond, Our Love[Happy Anniversary Thomas]
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2007-03-30
Great poem! very lovely! hope you guys have a great time!!!...keep up the wonderful work! and happy Anniversary!!
*hugs*
M.
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| In Your Black Hour Of Need
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2007-03-27
Wow!...this really good!!! i dont know what to say about it. my life is so messed up i dont know what to do anymore. anyways...keep up the wonderful work Liz!...love you like a sis!
M.
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| Only One[Ours Is A True Love Born]
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2007-03-21
lovely!! great job L.!!! keep up the wonderful work!
*hugs*
M.
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| the times you
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2007-03-15
sorry that you had to deal with that jerk!...anyways...great poem!...keep up the great work!
M.
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| THANK YOU, MY LOVE.
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2007-03-14
~*~AWW! sweet poem! you 2 are great for each other!!! keep up the wonderful work!...and best wishes for you and T!!!~*~
M.
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| blameing you..
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2007-03-13
wow! this is big time hate poem!.....keep up the wonderful work!
M.
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| scars and scabs.
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2007-03-13
this is a sad poem!. y are all ur poems sad?! lol......anyways. this is a really good poem! i like it!....keep up the great work! lata!
M.
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| How will we feel?/That is how we will feel
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2007-03-13
Very lovely!....i loved both of them! and having them together like that is even better!
*hugs*
M.
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| THE MISSING GIRLS
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2007-03-12
im about in tears! this is so sad!!! what is happening to this world?! so abusive in so many ways! you did a wonderful job on this! with puttin the words together! hopefully everything turns out for the better!
*hugs*
M.
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| I'll shed the Tears[Inspired by Zoya]
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2007-03-12
wow! great poem!!!! its sooo sad that all these girls are missing! and everything! i'll have to read Zoya's poem! keep up the wonderful work!
*hugs*
M.
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| Love turned to hate.
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2007-03-12
i love the line "i'm more than you'll ever be" !!!.....keep up the wonderful work!!!!.....you have GREAT poems! hope to see more and more soon!.......lata!
M.
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| The five senses
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2007-03-12
hmm... im not sure what to say about this one. its really good! i like this one alot!....you are a wonderful poet!...keep up the wonderful work!....
M.
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| Never Will Belong There
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2007-03-12
I WANT TO STEAL THIS FROM YOU AND GIVE IT TO MY MOM! lol....besides the part that says "As you said I moved out 5 years ago so i'm no longer your responsiblly....." but yea.....anyways....this is a very good poem! i love it!!! keep up the great work!.....
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| unloved in the world.
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2007-03-09
I SO RELATE TO THIS POEM! i love it!!!....keep up the wonderful work!....
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| suicidal..
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2007-03-09
WOW! i loved it!....you are a wonderful poet!....hope to see more poems of urs up!!!....lata!....
M.
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| hate
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2007-03-09
Hey! welcome to the bay!!! i love this poem! keep up the wonderful work!!...love ya sis!....
M.
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| Cries for help
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2007-03-07
great poem sis. keep up the wonderful work
love you!
M.
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| Stronger Than Death [My First Sonnet]
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2007-03-06
GREAT SONNET!!!! i loved it!!! thomas is a wonderful teacher! lol...i miss you!!!....hope to talk to you soon!! or at less hear from you!!!!... keep up the wonderful work!...love you sis!!!!
M.
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| No
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2007-02-28
wonderful write!! keep up the great work!!!
*hugs*
Mitzi
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| losing you
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2007-02-26
great job!! it brought tears to my eyes bc i can relate to this RIGHT this min!! anyways...keep up the WONDERFUL work!! peace and love!
M.
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| For those of you that care....
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2007-02-25
congrats!......i wish you the best! and keep up the wonderful work up!
M.
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| death, please welcome me.
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2007-02-17
i could relate to this poem in my darkest moments of depressoin!! great job!! keep up the wonderful work!!!
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| LOSING SOMEONE YOU LOVE
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2007-02-17
WOW!! this brought tears to my eyes!!! if i ever lost any of my brothers (i have 4 brothers) i would feel the same!! i almost lost one of mine bc he was bein stupid when he was driving and his car almost blew up...but yea..it didnt. thank GOD!!! but anyways...wonderful work!!! i loved this poem!!!
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| Turn Me On by M.A.Meddings
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2007-02-17
Great poem!!!! i loved it!! keep up the WONDERFUL work!!!
*hugs*
M.
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| Laying down
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2007-02-14
This is very good!!! you did a wonderful job!!! keep up the wonderful work!!....
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| Forder
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2007-02-08
Very sweet!..wonderful poem! i loved it!!!
mitzi
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| Waiting for you
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2007-02-08
Welcome to the bay Chris!!! wonderful poem by the way!...keep up the wonderful work!!!
*hugs*
Mitzi
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| Then I woke up...
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2007-02-08
This is very deep!!...i feel the pain! im not sure what to say!...lol...great poem! i loved it!!.....
Love you sis!
M.
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| You Say Words But Do You Mean Them?!
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2007-02-06
this poem brought tears to my eyes bc i and soooo relate to this poem right this moment!!! he told me i was his one and only yea what the fuck ever! lol....great job sis!
love you forever and ever!
M.
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| Fallen In Love, and happy.
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2007-02-05
2 days ago i could relate to this poem!...but now i cant :( oh well..anyways..this is a great poem!!!! keep up the wonderful poem!
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| In Love
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2007-02-05
Great job!!...keep up the wonderful work! :D
M.
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| Lost Love
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2007-02-05
Wonderful poem!!!...keep up the wonderful work!!....
*hugs*
Mitzi
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| A tear begins a smile
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2007-02-02
WOW, thats all i can really say...lol...this is wonderful....you did a wonderful job on this!...Thanks for sharing!!!....oh and this will help me go the right way...maybe if i just keep on reading it i will understand it more and more and then it will really help me!...:D
*hugs!*
Mitzi
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| Praying for Them
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2007-01-31
whos the friend sis??? plzzz tell me!...i wanna be able to pray for him....well anyways...this is a very sad poem! but a very good poem!...well i love you!!!!!!!!!
*hugs!!!*
Your sis forever
Mitzi
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| For my true love
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2007-01-30
I kno what and how you feel sis!!...i feel the same way!!....my life was all messed up and everything until the day Chris (my chris) came into my life!!....Great poem!! well written!!....keep up the WONDERFUL work!!
Love you forever!!!
Mitzi
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| The Icing On Life's Cake[We Are]
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2007-01-27
WOW!! i can so relate to this one!!!! i loved it!!! it is very very good!...keep up the wonderful work!!*bookmarked in faves.!!*
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| Passionate [night]Daydreams
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2007-01-27
Great job L.!!!! loved it!!!! *bookmarked!*
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| I loved you then,now,and forever
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2007-01-27
WOW! great poem!!!...keep up the wonderful work! :D
Mitzi
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| Heart Aches [tanka]
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2007-01-27
great job!....i feel the same way (but for chris :) :( ) keep up the wonderful work! :)
*hugs*
Love ya!
Mitzi
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| Raped
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2007-01-25
WOW!!! im not sure what to say about this one sis!....its a master peace!!! wonderful job!!!! keep up the great work!!!!:D
Love ya 4ever!
Mitzi
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| Divorce
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2007-01-22
hey chris,
I know how you felt/feel......my parents been apart for 10 almost 11 yrs...im 12 almost 13....i dont remember how it feels to have my real parents together...but they didnt really love eachother...i kno have 2 step parents a wonderful step dad and a wonderful step mom....i love both of them very much.....but i always wish that my real parents where together its so hard for me...my mom is raiseing me the way i dont want to be.....i live with my real mom and step dad....my mom was never there for me when i was a baby.....it was my real dad and i wish very much i could live with him but the only way to do that is to go to court and i think about it all the time...but its just to hard to pick between parents.....but anyways....great poem!...i loved it! :D keep up the wonderful work!!
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| To Write from the Heart
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2007-01-21
very true!...thanks for sharing!
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