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2010-05-31
A most poignant write... very moving and well done. A great use of short lines here, which is not really so easy to do successfully. Loved it!
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| A Candle in The Window
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2010-02-17
superb, absolutely supeb meter in this lovely poem! Bravo, most excellent! I loved it!!
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| Phantom
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2010-02-11
A short but brilliant poem by a true master....
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| Within
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2010-02-09
ah, most excellent, indeed! a fine write concerning the fay folk and their ilk, short but most ably and well done... I loved it!!
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| Mohawk River Ghazal
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2010-02-03
A very finely penned poem... it made me smile broadly!!
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| Am I Now Insignificant?
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2010-01-28
This really DOES move along rapidly and spins a sad and all to common tale, indeed! A great write. (But I do hope and pray that not a single word of it is true!!!)
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| night
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2010-01-28
This is a very good write. It is hard for most people to get short lines to work properly, however you have done a very fine job here! I enjoyed the write a great deal!!
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| Seeing Ghosts
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2010-01-16
A fine and most excellent poem, succinct and just wonderfully put together! loved it...
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| A Wall
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2010-01-12
A most excellent and superb Pantoum here. You have such a deft hand for one so young. I did, indeed love this!!!
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| Canticle
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2010-01-12
Sesnsational and most splendid meter!! You really do understand what poetry is and what poetry can do...it is nearly impossible to teach this, but you have it.... loved this short and powerful poem.
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| I begin to see
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2010-01-06
Oh, a very different kind of lover's lament.... most thoughtfully concieved and fine penned, with a great punch line.... loved it!
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| Free
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2009-12-25
A most lovely write, yet so ineffably sad! Again, very fine write!
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| True Love
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2009-12-17
well, I spit up my morning coffee when I read the last line.... funny, funny stuff... loved it.
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| funny the things
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2009-12-07
A most marvelous snap shot of an memory that seems unrelated to anything else... a fine piece indeed!
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| Welcome
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2009-12-07
on, this is a most lovely poem, indeed!! I really enjoyed it! (where I am winter has begun in full force and it is plenty cold!
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| The Good New Days
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2009-12-02
Most succinct, you followed one thread of thought all the way through the poem, excellent! My only suggestion is that you single space the stanzas, as that would only add to its cogency. I loved it.
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| The Blackbird Of Derrycairn by Austin Clarke
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2009-11-25
Oh, this is, indeed, a great poem, although I confess to being unfamiliar with the poet! I certainly loved it!
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| It's Just A Day
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2009-11-24
Short and not your usual brilliant write... but I did like it...
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| Let Me Go
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2009-11-23
A tried and true lover's lament penned with a good deal of passion.... once again you write with an experience beyond your years.... loved it!
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| That's All It Needs
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2009-11-23
A curious, but most splendid love (?) poem. Extremely well penned, it would seem by someone way beyond your years. A great write and I loved it!!!
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| TIMBER!!
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2009-11-23
Oh, the last line speaks volumes! A very wonderful, if different love poem! Most excellent and I loved it a ton!
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| Dreams XVIII
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2009-11-23
Ah, a most startling and interesting dream!!! Loved it!
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| Old Love And New
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2009-11-20
Oh, this IS a most brilliant write! I loved, loved it loved it!!!
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| My Shell
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2009-11-19
A very sad and world-weary poem, very well done, however, I hope that not one word of it is true.....
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| The Tall Boy.
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2009-11-18
Oh, you really DO have a gift for desciptive writing, which is today a totally lost art! Just a very, very fine write! Loved it!
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| Drop dead gorgeous
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2009-11-18
This is ineffably sad! You have stuck the perfect note throughout, by understating everything and presenting things in a nearly matter-of-fact manner... excellent! I loved it...
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| To My Illusive Love
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2009-11-04
Ah, most certainly the very stuff of dreams and high romance!!
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| Hark!Observe Sméagol - givelendone's ear
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2009-11-03
Most well done! A great cadence throughout, excellent subject matter... I think Tolkien would have enjoyed this a great deal--at least I know that I did!
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| 5th November
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2009-11-03
oh, I love this! It is absolutely hilarious--superb and funny write!!
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| Your ruby ring
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2009-11-03
A most powerful and wonderful, highly nostalgic piece of writing here... with an excellent use of short lines. I loved it!!
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| Dust and ashes
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2009-11-03
A most fine and expertly done poem here with some really excellent meter throughout and fine rhyme as well!!
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| I'll Be There
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2009-11-02
a wistful and whimsical poem, with the first two stanzas exceptionally unique and very strong... a mos fine and romantical poem... I just loved it!!
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| Margins
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2009-11-02
Ah, my goodly Ms. Blue, a Druid, indeed! A fine and most cogent, succinct penning here--even though the poor Druids did not have a written language... a fine write!
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| I Don't Give A Damn, But I'm Warning You Anyways
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2009-10-28
A finely coherent penning! Many poems of this nature are literally all over the place, but you stayed "on message" very well indeed! a fine cadence and good rhyme!
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| Is It Just Me?
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2009-10-28
A highly romantical lover's meditation, hope, even prayer... most splendidly done here... loved it!
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| To Tear Down a Wall
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2009-10-26
A most wonderfully and beautifully, expertly done extended metaphor! This is just an extremely well done poem... I loved it, loved it!!!
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| The Misty Yearnings of My Soul
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2009-10-23
So wonderful soft and apt lines and, yes, so very highly romantical!! loved it!
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| He came from nowhere and made a stop at my house
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2009-10-23
A finely done and very romantical poem... loved it!!
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| Sanity
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2009-10-23
you have a few typos and tense errors, but very easy to fix... a very neat and nifty poem, I liked it a great deal!
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| Gnat Fishing
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2009-10-23
Nasty little buggers, indeed! Oh, this made me smile most broadly!!!
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| The Chase
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2009-10-22
done as a conversation with one's self... a nice write with a great deal of good sense in it...
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| A sad, sorry, love story
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2009-10-22
Ah, old, old lover's lament, but magically ever new and ever sad... fine write!
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| If The Past Didn't Happen
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2009-10-21
A fine write on a topic that not many of us think about, at least not in THAT way... we "what if" ourselves to death, but that is a mistake... again a very fine write.
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| Morning Shower
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2009-10-20
Ah, yes, a neat and most nifty haiku.... liked it a ton!!
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| The Gap
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2009-10-20
Oh, I did like this poem, indeed! It made me smile most broadly, and yet it is quite true as well. Loved it!!!
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| With Apologies To Thomas Gray
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2009-10-15
I think perhaps you owe GREAT apologies to Thomas Gray's classic... funny...
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| The Pond
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2009-10-15
A fine meditation upon one mystical moment. Well done!
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| The Fire
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2009-10-12
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant write, poignant in the extreme--I have so much emotion for you! It is difficult to seperate the poem form the actually terrible incident which you portray so well. (How are you now, and how is your family and town?) superb write.
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| I Mean Nothing.
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2009-10-12
Nicely done, I do understand the feeling completely...apparently the person it is written about is blind in one eye and cannot see out of the other one.... fine write...
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| The Rose
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2009-10-12
Very interesting and very different, you have a most astute poetic mind for one so young... you do have "the knack" which cannot be taught!
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