| 9) Why, Love???
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2006-08-10
I love this write.Very touching, I admit.
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| The Lovers
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2006-06-10
I love it.
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| Love is an accident!
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2006-02-23
Oh! How lovely!
Cheers!
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| Its not that i want you
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2006-02-23
"For how long must i yearn
and close my heart to all"
Very expressive and impressive. The write brings out the difference of what is in the heart it its true state.
Wonderful.Just wonderful!
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| Cry, my beloved country!
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2006-02-15
I love your patriotic urge.It is wonderful.
God bless your country
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| Player
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2006-02-15
You are right Kat.These people exist and unfortunately are nowhere heading to extiction.
You could not have put it better.
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| ...Lost...
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2006-02-15
I hear you!
I identify with this.
Nice piece.
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| Alone in the Cold...
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2006-02-15
This is very nice. and so touching to the depths of ones soul.
Beautiful piece.
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| The one
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2006-02-14
This is beautiful,Kat.You have really described him briefly but without eliminating the passion
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| Enchantment of the first kiss (Valentine Special)
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2006-02-14
Zoya!This piece has succeeded to melt my heart and take me to the inner and outer space of love where the two in one are the only aliens in the strange space.This is just but beautiful
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| Numb
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2006-02-11
This is beautiful Zack.I totally agree with you.
Welcome to poetbay and enjoy
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| Betrayed
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2006-02-10
Oh Zoya...
Thy imagery is soul touching
Im beyond pain
more into confusion
from wounds left
behind,for remembrance
I LOVE THIS!
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| Nocturne
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2006-02-10
Wow!Im inspired,mesmerised...I am just recovering from the feeling of being lost in a world of two...with souls united..as one...
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| Nocturne
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2006-02-10
Wow!Im inspired,mesmerised...I am just recovering from the feeling of being lost in a world of two...with souls united..as one...
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| Procrastination-(Journey to the Sun)
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2006-02-07
this is really true.dont we set out to start and when we are to end we realize we never started?
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| Insanity Runs Between Friends
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2006-02-07
it is true that friends are all that..but remain to be friends.
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| Kind of Love
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2006-02-07
Wow!so passionate.
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| My friend?
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2006-02-06
Nice invitation.Can i answer "YES"?
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| memories
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2006-02-06
sometimes memories are treasured sometimes they are best left in old photos.Some faces are best left blurred while others should always remain clear.I concur with your piece.
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| Oh my mama
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2006-02-06
Mama's love and passion cannot be described any deeper.It is a very sad situation that you have depicted.i feel it.
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| I remember the days
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2006-02-06
This is so passionate.it has really moved me, just by reading it.
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| To ALL the poets here.
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2006-02-06
Thanx liz.i love your poetry and your style that is at times so intense...
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| Poisonous Love
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2006-02-06
Nice imagery and expression.
Good work.
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| What went wrong?
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2006-02-06
Must have been hurting the way things went wrong.Very sorry.
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| They say
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2006-02-06
It is true that some experiences leave scars that are difficult to heal.Very nice!Keep on.
Welcome on board!
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| Blow me
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2006-02-06
the longing and anticipation can almost be tangible.Great.
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| Sweet Passion
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2006-02-06
I love it.You had me lost for a while,which is good.Chocolate!!!
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| ...The Mind of a Smitten Man...
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2006-02-06
Exactly.You have hit the nail on...It usually has a sense of mixed hope,anticipation,fear and a lot of other stuff.I love the way you put it.
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| Let's Bring our Souls Together in Love & Harmony
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2006-02-06
I totally agree with you.Nice piece of poetry..for us all.
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| Baby Don't Worry
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2006-02-06
Nice description.The lady must be one in a million.Keep it up Justin.You succeeded in making the jail experiece well tied with love.
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| She faked it!
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2006-02-04
I can definitely see that you are not to be dared on topics to write about. Write on..will you?
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| This kiss
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2006-02-04
Your longing can be felt.Please write something about the reaction after the action...if it took place
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