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Zachary P. B.

30 years old from USA


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I Have A Crack Where A Crack Shouldnt Be by M.A.Meddings

2008-01-10
haha, good wit in a very bouncy form.


Wishes

2007-09-07
that was amazing. i liked the line "innocence committed suicide at his touch" it struck me especially. this is really good, arti. i feel connected to it.


"We are the winds of change..."

2007-08-09
it's a poem that's carved into the earth... i like it.


First Date (co-write with Lastromantichero)

2007-08-09
sweet, kathy. glad to see things are well with you.

z


Can't Say/Can Say

2007-08-08
cool.


Sunday Chapel Romancing by M.A.Meddings

2007-08-08
inspiring... it's been a while, poet. i'm glad i found myself reading this.

z


she makes him like her

2007-05-05
i like it, i like it alot. brilliant write on romance, rob.


Insomnia

2007-04-15
i like this poem, it's a true nature on insomnia. i don't sleep, but i don't think it much of a curse. i really like the imagery you have here, well done.

z.


In The Warmth of You

2007-03-27
i like the poetic effect and strength it has on me that you put enchantment on its own line. it has a very good rhythm to it. good job, kathy. it seems like a lot of the bay is feeling love in the spring season.


In Your Black Hour Of Need

2007-03-27
very good write here, compassionate.

z.


Cherished by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-26
beautiful, is the only word i can come up with that meekly equates to the warm feeling i have inside after reading this poem. wonderful.

z.


Annoying Telephone Frustration[Tanka]

2007-03-26
too true. when i speak to foreign friends, it happens a lot. you are quite expressive in such a short poem, good job.

z.


Barefoot Days, Green Grass Ways

2007-03-26
i like it. i like it a lot.


For you I feel

2007-03-26
it's been a while, malin. i like this write, a lot. i've missed you, how are things?


As You Sublimely Captured Me by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-16
what a true thought here... quite the clever writer on love, michael. you definitely are a hero.


The Tulips All Have Died.

2007-03-09
that's a beautiful thought - how that moment lives and changes and dies... i think now i know, before i couldn't fully understand your poetry, because i hadn't experienced death or loss. this is really good.


Here You Are. Here I Am. Here We Were.

2007-03-09
this is excellent... i loved it. the brokenness of it all just seems so humane. really good.


Testosterone Antics by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-08
haha.. how clever and witty. excellent job.

z.


Alive by M,A.Meddings

2007-03-08
how alive you are indeed - excellent write, michael.


Only the Strong

2007-03-06
i like this... i gather strength from it. good write, betsy.


Confession by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-04
a beauteous write, michael.


When You Look At Me Like That

2007-03-04
how clever and true. good job, kathy.


Broken

2007-03-01
breaking away from the molds society gives us is necessary to be able to find who we are...

wonderful write, sara.


things go wrong.

2007-02-25
things go wrong, when we try to be truthful. i wish people could really see.

good write, sara.


Amaretto di Amore

2007-02-10
i like amoretto, it's strong though, fiery going down. although, technically, i shouldn't know that...

i hope you're not running from anything and just enjoying in small doses? i used to do the former, so i can empathize if you are.

good poem, z.


Needless to say. . .

2007-02-08
it's such a beautiful song... good job on the poem, it reflects your inspiration well.


WORDS

2007-01-29
ghalib's couplet must have been amazing to have inspired such thought and art, i want to read that now.

good job.

z.


Awaken your Senses

2007-01-29
i can imagine this... i like it, arti, i like it a lot.

hope all is well where you are.
z.


After Tea by M.A.Medding

2007-01-29
you remember the way it could be, but i think that is the way it should be. on sundays remeber to breathe, dear friend. i'm so entranced by this, bookmarked.

z.


Mignonette

2007-01-20
i cry out, thanks for awareness.


Oceanspanning Haiku

2007-01-20
i can imagine it.


She was drinking a beer. . .

2007-01-19
wow, i like it. quite realistic.


Heartstream

2007-01-18
wondrous. it kept my blood pumping.


Sentimental

2007-01-17
i think your linguistic skills are excellent, and your grasp at life enviable.

but i'm just a kid.


I am an Island

2007-01-13
i know the feeling all too well. don't fall under, breathe.

z.


A Celestial Fountain

2007-01-13
i think i have eternal youth, what an amazing fountain indeed.

what art.

z.


wingless

2007-01-12
i see a broken spirit in the midst of the wing shards.

good one - z.


annotation

2007-01-11
such subtext, but bluntly stated. thank you for the footnote, i wish more people in the world read it... hard times these are.

z.


Heart failure

2007-01-11
hope this is release so that you start feeling better.

i worry.

z.


Sleet Parade

2007-01-09
there's more to it than that, i think...

excellent write, caila. you always captivate me - z.


Darkened Soul

2007-01-09
soothing. hope the friend does better.

z.


And Who Is Cooking Your Breakfast Now? by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-09
if time will allow
i could besmirch
a name like chance

but chances are meant to be taken, seen, live...

excellent as always - z.


This Love by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-08
i come back from a sebattical to sweetly soothing bliss. excellent michael.

z.


eclectic epiphany

2007-01-07
twas such a write. beautiful and magical and alive.


A few of my favourite things..

2007-01-07
what an excellent idea, here you are madame:

running around outside in a thunderstorm, dancing and kissing with your love.

painting on an afternoon day, and allowing yourself to create something.

the rare "amazing song" that epitomizes everything you believe and care about.

nice naps under shady trees in the warm summer.

snow angels, hot chocolate, and of course reading by the fireplace.


Poor Ophelia...

2007-01-06
i feel like i've lived this, making it more than shakespeare, but life. i think that's what you're getting at. how abstract. - z.


Trivial Flare-Ups

2007-01-06
so real. i like it. long time no read, what goes down under caila?


Humanity

2007-01-06
we all know we're going to die, but none of us believe it. profound.


Only for YOU

2007-01-06
long time no read. excellent as always though.


Standing Ovation

2007-01-05
reminds me of something i lived once... intriguing sense of deja vu.

nice to read you again - z.