Whenever the one you love touches you, it will forever feel new.


48) His Touches

Your touches will always feel new.
Your fingers will forever be my adorable friends.
Will feel them with every beat that my heart sends.
Will need as long as my body does exist.
As your fingertips caress my lips,
Then I die for a kiss I can't miss.
Your touches will never feel old.
They will go with me even to grave, who knows.
Dearly remembered and cherished.
Amazingly no other feeling can perish.
What I think as you touch my eye.
How I breathe as you tingle my hand.
Your touches are out of the world.
When I live them, they replace the pleasures of the world.
They are as rain drops softly to shower my torn soul.
No transcription, or therapy can do me good.
For your touches is my remedy for good.
And when my day turns bad,
The first thing I think of is lying between you arms;
To taste the touches of you my love.
So thank you for making your fingers the boats,
That drives me to your touches' shore.
Where I can eat the sweetest fruit.
Accompanied by a weather so cool.





Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2007-03-20 at 06:28

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
oh yes... definitely... this is superbly described... the feeling to be in his soothing arms... his touches, the breath to carry you through everything... this overflows with romance and that calm regenerating energy that is love... just beautiful... here i go sighing again hehe :) "For your touches is my remedy for good" -this to me englobes the core of your poem... how healing it is to be with him, and have his love showered on you daily... i can't help have a big smile on my face to know you live it, 'cause you have a sweet heart, for sure :) *hugs* xx
2007-03-26


salem
wonderful one
2007-03-25


ardent.March
Wow, wish I felt this way when touched! Nice descriptions!
2007-03-25


Kathy Lockhart
this is such a wonderful read Amanda.

I was lost in its words,
drifting upon its flow,
resting in the images
that you penned just so.
2007-03-23


nature
BEAUTIFULL
2007-03-22


Will
I Loved the way this was expressed

Grand Write!!!! BM
2007-03-20


Yummy_guy
This is very beautiful and romantic poem

Love you, Yummy_guy
2007-03-20