| Open Notebook Resting on a Porch Rail |  | 
		2025-04-17A friend informs me that today is National Haiku Poetry Day...
 
 
 
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	| To a Robin |  | 
		2022-10-14Thanks to arquious for alerting me to the "robinny" look of my vest!
 
 
 
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	| Kabul |  | 
		2021-08-25Masterful haiku!
 
 
 
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	| ImyIwy |  | 
		2021-08-15What a little gem--a sparkling dew drop!
 
 
 
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	| ME MATE COUNTED ME BOOKS |  | 
		2021-08-13Books still count--but for reading, not counting!
 
 
 
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	| ten memorable moments, reviewed |  | 
		2021-08-13Talk about saving the best for last, eh?
 
 
 
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	| Kejab |  | 
		2021-08-13Yes. Do it!
 
 
 
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	| THE LINCOLN BRIGADE (Work Completed) |  | 
		2020-11-12Let's hope so!
 Thanks for an optimistic write!
 
 
 
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	| Christmas 2020 |  | 
		2020-11-12Very clever!
 
 
 
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	| Happy 16th wedding anniversery to myself and TomWood by Ann Wood |  | 
		2020-11-12Such elegant sadness!
 
 
 
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	| Remembrance Day, 2020 |  | 
		2020-11-12Somber, with words well played.
 
 
 
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	| 'TRUMPATON' TRUMP YOUR TIME IS UP (Work Completed) |  | 
		2020-11-10The fourth stanza provides a strikingly original, vivid, and memorable image!
 
 
 
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	| Poe is Lost |  | 
		2020-10-31Great read, for one who gets hopelessly lost, and very quickly, in a corn maze. I can't force line 25 into the tetrameter; but what the heck. I enjoyed this!
 
 
 
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	| Heart |  | 
		2020-10-30What a fine meditation! Line 30 i find especially memorable. I often wonder how much poetry, like  comedy, is a desperate defense against depression.
 
 
 
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	| commander in chief (haikus) |  | 
		2020-10-30Very successful attempts! Seasonal politically as well as  calendrically.
 
 
 
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	| Happy Halloween everyone by Ann Wood |  | 
		2020-10-30Halloween as an element of world culture?! An interesting and slightly spooky thought...
 
 
 
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	| THATS THE RUB |  | 
		2020-10-30It would be consoling to believe there is a Grand Scheme in which the world's current fascist mood has its place.
 
 
 
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	| A Near Fatal Disaster |  | 
		2020-10-19Gets to the essence of "catness"!
 
 
 
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	| THE NEW ORDER IS DISORDER |  | 
		2020-10-19An order devoted to disorder: this nicely captures our plight...
 
 
 
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	| leaves |  | 
		2020-10-19Let us all remain children--in some ways at least, certainly including autumnal joy in leaves!
 
 Fine write, Peter!
 
 
 
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	| LIVEING ON THE ISLE OF THANET KENT U K |  | 
		2019-06-21This brings the geography to life! I especially like the chocolate similes. Well done!
 
 
 
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	| to be determined |  | 
		2019-06-21And now, day by day, we shall have less of day...
 
 
 
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	| TWO BABYS BORN THIS DAY! (Addians)(Exstra Line) |  | 
		2019-05-06Quite a study in contrasts!
 
 
 
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	| Bye |  | 
		2019-05-06Clever conclusion!
 
 
 
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	| NEVER A DAY WITHOUT WIT! (A Work Completed) |  | 
		2019-05-01Well may we poets sing the praises of wit! If not we, then who?!
 
 
 
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	| Miriam l... The Chosen |  | 
		2019-04-19Fine write, breathing new life into an old story!
 
 
 
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	| UNFORGETTABLE! (ADDITIONAL STANZERS) |  | 
		2019-04-15Much food for thought in this one!
 
 
 
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	| Words said Out Loud |  | 
		2019-04-14I read a remarkably clever ambiguity: which couple does the of latter half of this "sonnet" describe? Wonderful!
 
 
 
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	| Bee lines |  | 
		2019-02-13Clone becomes drone, serving his queen: nicely wrought, Chris!
 
 
 
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	| Whitney #2 |  | 
		2018-11-27Sun/moon, heart/soul: well played, and oh so romantic.
 
 
 
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	| Singing stillness |  | 
		2018-11-27"Boundless is the core": a brilliant close!
 
 
 
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	| No Day Without You |  | 
		2018-11-27A pleasant surprise ending: I should have guessed it!
 
 
 
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	| DEPRESSION - AND THE POET! |  | 
		2018-11-27All emotions are grist for the mill of poetry: good one!
 
 
 
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	| Royal Free 2014 |  | 
		2018-11-27Ups and downs: c'est la vie. Resignation, SO well expressed!
 
 
 
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	| The Failure of Angels |  | 
		2018-11-23Music as our salvation: A most attractive fantasy, this!
 
 
 
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	| Still |  | 
		2018-11-23Hauntingly romantic. If only others would feel as we want them too! Or maybe not...
 
 
 
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	| Ancient Music |  | 
		2018-11-23Always a good laugh! Thanks!
 
 
 
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	| THE KIDS OF FLORIDA! |  | 
		2018-02-22I like the "beat" of this march--and of this poem!
 
 
 
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	| THEM! (A Responce Work) - ((Now With Adishannal Lines)) |  | 
		2018-01-29A timely, much-needed scream! (I can't help but think of the 1950's sci-fi classic "Them!" about giant spiders.)
 
 
 
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	| Walking the Dog |  | 
		2018-01-04For me at least, the astronomical details bring this to life.
 
 
 
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	| The Kiss of Torment |  | 
		2017-12-28A sad but timely warning!
 
 
 
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	| POETS AND POETRY! |  | 
		2017-12-28So the only way to go wrong writing a poem is not to write it, for fear of what others will think?! Intriguing!
 
 
 
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	| The First Time |  | 
		2017-12-28Nobody but you could make it a pleasure to read about pounding a nail into one's finger bone!
 
 
 
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	| Done, and Cannot be Undone |  | 
		2017-12-10"Recommends"?! Intriguing little poem.
 
 
 
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	| Elements |  | 
		2017-12-10Nice to see a formal verse; well done!
 
 
 
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	| JUST - WHY ONE DAY A YEAR? |  | 
		2017-12-06Indeed!
 
 
 
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	| HOW FAR BACK ARE WE GOING TOO?! |  | 
		2017-11-15Our so-called president assures us that smart people pay no taxes. We pay only because we are stupid. What a sterling example! What a true patriot!
 
 
 
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	| our nature |  | 
		2017-11-11By night, the splendors of love; by day, nothing clouds and crickets: I hate when that happens! And both happening to linger on the same chilly beach seemed so promising!
 
 
 
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	| Chapter 17 |  | 
		2017-11-08A most interesting perspective on perspective. The suggestion seems to be that at least for this woman, the self-critical faculty is winning out over vanity?
 
 
 
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	| Where am I? |  | 
		2017-11-06I like the brevity and careful word choice, especially the spare, off-balanced rhymes. Actually, the subtle, back-stepping rhyme scheme is blowing my mind the more I study it. BRAVO!
 
 Being lost is much more pleasant in poetry than in reality.
 
 
 
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