| An Ode- His lighting of a cigarette
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2008-04-06
Wonderful poem with wonderful ending.
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| This Winter is too Cold...
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2007-01-24
Yea, too cold. As cold as death's hands. Beautifully written.
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| Love and Hate
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2007-01-11
Love reading about love and hate. It's rhythmic dichotomy is superp.
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| Hecate's offspring
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2007-01-11
This is breathtaking. It really pulls a reader in the pool of emotion and imagery. Wow! Great read !
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| Framed reality
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2006-12-08
'I'm writing lies,
but have truth to tell
cause' I wear a rainbow coat
and it suits me well. '
this last stanza struck me strongly. the whole poem is a wonderful craft of emotion and imagery.
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| Saga and Blue's Love Cake **(coolaaron's challenge)**
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2006-12-01
I would have ethereal pleasure if i got it to taste. The divine cake made of love. Thanks.
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| Bliss Baby
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2006-11-29
'O my silver cascade' truly, your words are moving and all inspiring. Great poetry, dear poet NK Osho.
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| honey our paperdreams don't have enough space to burn between these hands of mine and yours
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2006-11-25
very symbolic and deep. wonderful.
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| The New Dew
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2006-11-23
'Like a lone glistening dew'
This is superb.
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| Venetian whore
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2006-11-19
' maybe we were united for a higher purpose? '
True. We often unite for a higher purpose. This is a wonderful poem indeed. I loved every word.
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| I Will Think of You Tonight
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2006-11-19
What a sing song emotion. It's a perfect love song. How much I enjoyed, I can't tell. Simply superb.
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| Children of the underworld
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2006-11-19
'Maybe my hands are colder, but your heart is kinder'
Wow, and wow for this another wonderful creation.
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| Running naked on the street
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2006-11-19
This is wonderfully said and crafted into a poem.
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| Velvet Sensations
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2006-11-19
It sent a velvet sensations through my skin while reading. Very well wrought.
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| Death's smile
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2006-11-18
What a light but poignant piece. Angel, I loved your writing.
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| The Ocean
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2006-11-18
This is a superb write.
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| A duck named Chuck-A Limmerick
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2006-11-18
This is an healthy humor. Well done.
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| Pillar of Salt
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2006-11-17
Absolutely captivating. And congrats for being among editors' choice.
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| Visit to my rest!
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2006-11-15
quite cool and soothing emotion. wonderful.
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| How to Bow !
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2006-11-13
Your verses make me remember Tagore's Gitanjali. This piece is so powerful. You do it exceptionally well. Wonderful read this one as usual.
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| Disillusioned suicide
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2006-11-11
I loved this one too.
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| When the dove fly
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2006-11-10
simple but graceful flow of words. loved this one.
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| Amanda
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2006-11-10
Nikki, it's awafully beautiful. I loved the line: feeding us with lies.
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| Humming for Rhythm
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2006-11-10
It's awful.
'But I still don't know the colour of your eyes' Loved this.
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| Souls
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2006-11-09
Oooh! It's a good go, it's a good read. Bravo.
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| buns
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2006-11-08
Very sharp and brief. Powerful piece. Bravo.
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| in the miracle
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2006-11-08
This is fantastic write. I moved me, Kath.
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| when roses
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2006-11-08
This is a superb poem , Kath. I read it and enjoyed to the full. Namaste from Nepal.
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| Forest Bliss
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2006-11-07
Great, great read it is.
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| Breaths
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2006-11-07
Indeed, breaths are something that enable us going and that make us realize that we exist. Wonderful poem, Almaz.
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| How To Finish A Poem
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2006-11-07
wonderful read Sage.
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| How To Finish A Poem
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2006-11-07
wonderful read Sage.
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| Innocence
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2006-11-05
Oh, I love this one. It is simply wonderful. Please accept these friendly words from this friend from Nepal, Silene.
Mukul
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| Hello my new frined
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2006-11-05
There is soft tender feeling in your words. They reflect your humane soul. Tatanya, where do you belong to? You are most welcome to the Bay.
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| transparent tones
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2006-11-05
I has an unbroken flow.
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| Explore
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2006-11-03
No need to be long. You have done awfully well in it.
Mukul
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| Falling off the Edge
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2006-11-03
You've caught the moment of falling down of tears so superbly. Wonderful work.
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| Falling off the Edge
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2006-11-03
You've caught the moment of falling down of tears so superbly. Wonderful work.
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| Third Chapter, Third Verse
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2006-11-01
Very powerful piece.
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| Preface
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2006-11-01
myra,
this is simply wonderful write. I read it with full pleasure. I loved your style. Your spirituality. Namaste from NEpal.
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| you're too grey and this town has failed
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2006-11-01
Summerbreeze,
This I found a wonderful write. Please accept a friendship from Nepal. Well done.
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| You are my world
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2006-10-29
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of yours.
Thank you for making me your friend. Please submit your pieces to Pen Himalaya.
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| Forsaken Insomniac
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2006-10-29
Yes, quite powerful.
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| Some day you'll be faitful
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2006-10-29
This is fantastic in terms of depth of feeling and expression. Each line is well wrought.
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| For all the times
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2006-10-29
This is a beauty.
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| into my eye
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2006-10-28
It's fantastic too. Could I be your writing friend?
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| Maybe tonight
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2006-10-28
Not may be, definitely it's a fantastic poem.
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| Now go on
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2006-10-28
Wonderful portrayal of pain.
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| I'm sorry about the weather
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2006-10-28
Great comparison. Great write.
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| I'm sorry about the weather
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2006-10-28
Great comparision. Great write.
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from Nepal 