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Daybreaker

47 years old from Sweden


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Words

2008-12-27
Such beauty Arti!

I'm in awe.

"bipolar sky" Wow


Future Dreaming

2008-12-27
Such a sincere beautiful poem!

Love it!


Stone Skies

2008-10-29
The five last lines are superb. That's what it's all about. And you nailed it.

*BOOKMARKED*


And Your Light Went Out

2008-10-21
What a beautiful ode!

Remembrance is everything.


Dying

2008-09-22
Beautifully. Really nice rythm.


Flames of melancholy

2008-09-22
WOW!

This is mezmerising, painstalking beauty.

I have longed for this, and I didn't even know it.


The Vase

2008-09-22
Pure beauty dear Kathy!

The last lines are PERFECT!


Beauty

2007-12-25
Such a true and heartfelt poem!

Zoya at her best. :)

Hope you are doing fine!!!

HUGZ


Elation

2007-12-25
Lovely heartfelt feelings.

I could almost see you smiling in front of me. :)


We Are The Lighthouse ~ Poetbay's Hope

2007-12-09
Yes, a lighthouse it truly is.

I've been hiding in the dark, and what joy to come back to this!

HUGS to you Kathy!


September 28, 2000 - The Day of Nightmares

2007-09-20
My Dear Kathy!

It's always a mystery when the devil walks the earth.

Beautiful write, followed by a million hugs.


A better time

2007-09-20
Such a beautiful cliff!

Where the f**k is it? I've been trying to find it my entire life.

;)


A beautiful world

2007-09-20
WOW!

What a flow, such delicate words...

Speachless...


There Is A Fountain

2007-08-16
Dear Kathy!

How has it been possible for me to live without your words?

This is truly beautiful. Love radiants out from the screen.

I'm glad to be back!


The Two Wolves Within

2007-04-27
Yes, those Cherokees knew wha they were talking about!

And Zoya has spread another wisdom! =)


Heart in a Jar on a Shelf

2007-04-26
This was truly indescribably good.

Especially liked this stanza:


There's something about this hole in my chest

It itches, it talks, it won't give me some rest

It says to me: "Fill me with stone! Fill me with stone"

Talks like every one else with muscle and bone


Imminent love psychosis

2007-04-26
Yes, you truly have a point here! Recognizible and beautiful.


Inside The Storm

2007-04-26
Oh yes, that's what it's like.

Heartfelt description and a good rhytm.


Little Voice

2007-04-26
Oh, how griefstruck you leave me Dear Kathy.

But hopeful yet.

A beautiful write.


Eyes to Eyes

2007-03-07
Yes, this surely flows like cream. :)

A whirlwind of letters and emotions. Thanks!


Mixing up

2007-03-06
What a beautiful ode to your love.

When reading the first lines I recognized myself as the part that causes swirlpools and shallows.

And then it all becomes beautiful, shear beauty.


When You Look At Me Like That

2007-03-03
Oh, what a magical ode! :)

And it's true you know. It's just like that!

How are you my dear Kathy?


Love-From Infinity to Eternity

2007-02-17
Beatiful words as always!

And Love Oh Love, where art thou?

;)


When Love...

2007-02-16
A heartfelt contribution to love.

But what is love?

And what do we love and why?

Just some friday night thoughts from D. Daybreaker. :)


returns again

2007-02-07
gives me an image of circles that always surrounds us.

life as one gigantic circle.

dust to dust.

good write!


My burlesque queen

2007-02-07
WOW!

This was awesome! The words just float, transcends into my mind.

Bookmarked!


Dance of Unity

2007-02-07
Well, you know i adore this form. Short and intensive!

GREAT RHYTM!

*stomp my feet and dance the beat*

:)


The pasts of the future

2007-02-04
This is a brillant text! You really capture several aspects of everyday life and the expectations that we create. A straightforward text, this is how it is. And it is!

The rhymes are great and the

"today is so black"

just sends me to a place I really don't want to visit.

Thank you!


maybe

2007-02-04
I like your texts. They are still, and express a feeling of thoughtfulness. Soothing.

Maybe "washing" is a better form in the last line? what do you think?

Thank you for a delicate read!


Shell Seeker

2007-02-04
Wow! This was really good my friend!

"How do I stop this rushing to shore?
Will the next wave bring me a cure?"

Beautiful! Pure magic!


if I told you

2007-02-04
"bending me into incognito."

what a beautiful sentense.

the poem makes you wonder what you are about to say...

beautiful poem! thank you!


Sentimental Serenade

2007-01-29
Oh my, the softness of the words just amaze me.

It truly is a whisper. Let us all stop talking! Let's whisper! =)


Make love, not war, Mr President!

2007-01-29
Very well written and some excellent points!

Nice to see an expression of critique!

Thank you!


Who Knows Where the Journey Ends...

2007-01-19
A tribute to life! And a beautiful one!

Sometimes I wish I could know where the journey ends, or at least where it will take me. Curiosity keeps me worried, yet alive.

A beautiful image as well!

Thank you!


The Pain of Love

2007-01-19
Yes, do we reach the other side of love? Ever...

beautifully grasped.


My fragile angel...

2007-01-19
Yes, this was truly beautiful! So romantic, yet sad.

Thanks!


Sunbeams' Trance

2007-01-14
As you now, I'm quite fond of these shortliners myself!

A great read!

Thank you soo much!


I am an Island

2007-01-14
Wonderful words and a great flow.

Natural disasters are horrible. And to make that feeling of horror, into your own sad thoughts, that sad day.

It, like the sea, overwhelmes you.

Beautiful.


The Workoholic's Dilemma

2007-01-14
So true in deed!

Unfortunately I have to say that I recognize myself in your words.

Greatly captured.


Higher Then The Clouds/Lower Then The Dirt

2007-01-11
Yes, isn't it horrible!

Some people just don't know how to keep you smiling! =/

Great captured!

PS: then in line 1 and 6 should be than. =)


Daybreaker (The end of the world as he knows it)

2007-01-08
Wow!

Great song, and as a former speaker already said: Really wish I could hear it!

Obviously I myself identified with this song a lot. Not just cause of the title, but for the themes as well.

Thank you!


I Love Her

2007-01-05
Absolutely beautiful. How difficult it must be! But what strength!

I hope your daughter feels better soon!

Great write!


where angels sleep

2007-01-02
A very beautiful write in deed.

But not just soothing, it is sad as well.

where angels sleep - angels that do not watch over you.

Excellent write.


Ol' Couch

2007-01-02
Beautiful. Yes, the old things are so precious. They carry life within.

Thank you!


Where Do The Words Go?

2006-12-25
Excellent expression of thought!

And oh yes, I do recognize! ;)


Rain and Pain

2006-12-23
Nice play with words and their meaning. I really enjoyed the read.


Clouds of Change

2006-12-23
Sad thoughts expressed beautifully!


Skinner's rat

2006-12-15
This was really good, everyday boredom just appeals to me. =/

Especially liked the lines:

"he's paid his dues
he's sure of that
though long forgotten why
but he will continue to entertain
until the day he dies"

oh, what rythm! =)


A contrast of want and need

2006-12-15
This truly starts the thinking!

Great work!


Joy Comes In The Morning

2006-12-15
Oh, what a splendid write! And some insights to the relations on the bay, in deed. :)