| Into The Summer
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2022-02-05
I really liked the first and last stanzas. They set the scene/mood and wrapped it together with striking language. Impressed me as being sensual, pensive, and artistic. Nice submission.
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| Wishful Moods
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2022-02-04
Your selection of words is really creative. I especially liked
Trapped on the backs of eyelids like paper lanterns and silk screens. Enjoyed reading this.
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| Taking Control
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2022-02-04
Thanks for sharing your meditative travelogue. It is one of my favorites of yours. Bookmarked.
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| First Kiss
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2022-02-03
I like how each scene was framed individually and then presented in progression until you reached the closing line. Enjoyed the format and the tone. Thanks for the poem.
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| Postcard from the past
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2022-02-03
There’s a certain rhythm about this poem that feels like a poignant heartbeat. So genuine. Well conveyed.
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| JOHNNY DINKLE
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2022-02-03
Quite creative and fun.
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| you and bashō
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2022-02-03
This poem is like a butterfly that whispers me a secret.
Just my immediate feeling and impression. Wonderful.
(Yes I know it’s an odd review)
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| Happy 72nd heavenly birthday to my dad Ilia by Ann Wood
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2022-02-03
Very touching and very well written.It was a gift to have read it
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| caprice
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2022-02-03
The last line perfectly provides a pay off to the building coyish
seductive tone.
(Hope I interpreted it correctly!)
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| Hunting Season
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2021-08-15
I love poems that challenge me to ponder their intent and their meaning. I’ll gladly read this again and absorb it. Well written also.
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| Joy beyond reason
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2021-08-15
Thank you. This poem brings me back to the essence of the spirit and clears my mind and soul.
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| This waking life is but a dream
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2021-08-14
Though provoking and well constructed.
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| ImyIwy
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2021-08-14
Delicate and sweet. Emotionally touching.
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| Kejab
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2021-08-14
A serious topic wrapped in humor is a great way to get a message across. Well done.
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| Iris Of Midnight
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2021-08-14
Very nice crafting of words and phrases that send to create a tone that is abstract and meaningful at the same time. Applauded
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| ten memorable moments, reviewed
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2021-08-14
Subversive humor with a serious point. Much like life. Applauded
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| Missed Wish
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2021-08-14
You expressed your inner dialogue vividly and I enjoyed the rhythm of the piece
Thanks for it
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| My Days
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2021-08-04
A brilliantly shared self reflection.
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| The Gleaner
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2021-08-04
It’s rare that one can convey things so organic such as nature,memories, etc., and package them in such an effective and well crafted format !
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| Goodbye July, hello August 2021 by Ann Wood
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2021-08-04
Such a warm and welcoming poetic commentary.
Enjoyed this. Thanks
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| shanty town Otherworld Part 1
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2021-08-04
I appreciate that you invite us along with you to see the despair and feel your emotions and thoughts. I also like the back and forth rhythm that never let the reader feel settled.
Thank you for this poem
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| With apologies to Noel Coward
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2021-08-03
This is subversively humorous.
And like the title!
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| As Best As
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2021-08-03
I like the cadence. And the end punctuated by mischief and a wink
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| IN THE DUMPS
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2021-08-03
Inspiring. Nice format also.
Thanks for this poem.
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| In The Pages
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2021-07-18
There’s s something mysterious here that makes me want to read it again I will.
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| APPRECIATE OTHERS
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2021-07-18
From the heart straight to the pen.
Gave me a dork of optimism.
Thanks
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| Every Single Way
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2021-07-12
Hmmm. I like how you took chances by shifting the tone towards the end
Nice
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| Almost there
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2021-07-12
You must be talking about the football match.
Well said. Even as an American I felt the disappointment
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| In This World
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2021-07-12
A very peaceful contemplation.
Thanks
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| our intention and so gentle . . . this rain
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2021-07-11
They are both very sensual and paint with delicate brushes. Took my mind to on interesting voyages.
Thank you.
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| Lessons
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2021-07-10
I like how you compartmentalized the way that you described your struggles but you presented yourself as a whole person who experienced them Hope that makes sense.
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| The Awakening
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2021-07-09
Raw and honest. Extremely well written with a pace and a cadence that fit the perspective, mood, and message. Bookmarked
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| Factory Reset?
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2021-07-09
There’s a certain sway and rhythm here that suggests both physical and emotional love. At least that is what is to me. Very provocative
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| The extraordinary in the ordinary
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2021-07-08
I always love your creative way you shape words and images.
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| COMPASSION ?
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2021-07-07
Thanks for such a needed message
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| HISTORY IS A PUZZLE
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2021-07-07
A creative way to describe history!
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| In Which a Conversation Commences
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2021-07-07
Hmmm. I’ll have to reread this one. It’s worth it.
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| [01 Jul] - Community poll | Posting limit? (HOLD)
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2021-07-07
I’m in favor of three a day. Poems that is
In deep appreciation of all my fellow writers!!
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| Uranus, The Magician
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2021-05-07
Wonderful pacing and presentation. When writing this, at no time did my hands leave my wrists. See the magic has inspired me.
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| Truth Is Just
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2021-05-05
I like the way it’s structured and brought full circle.
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| unconditional love is empowering
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2021-05-04
Thanks for a poem that lets the readers into such personal expression.
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| The Rose of awareness
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2021-05-03
The structure is compact and ordered yet describes such a freedom of being. And I like the way you’ve shaped it. This is not an easy thing to achieve. Much appreciated poem.
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| on the other side of travail
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2021-05-02
Love the imaginative structure
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| is your spirit still heavy
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2021-04-30
Tender expression of mixed emotions. I appreciated it.
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| PLANET ZONG (Changes Additans)
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2021-04-30
Now this is quite a planet!! I enjoyed this.
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| planet lynn
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2021-04-29
This made me smile. It seems to suggest mischievousness.
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| The tyrants bore
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2021-04-27
Spinning in my head
like a Catherine Wheel of tension
These are lines that are inspired and covey such a crushing emotional image. Wow
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| Song of the dandelion
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2021-04-27
I enjoyed the innocent spirit and the insightful closing.
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| Soft words from a broken sky
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2021-04-27
Bookmarked. Beautiful pastiche of senses,words,and phrases. Took my outside myself and into another world. Thank You
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| Cart Horse
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2021-04-27
Well crafted,imaginative,soothing. Nicely told.
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