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Into The Summer

2022-02-05
I really liked the first and last stanzas. They set the scene/mood and wrapped it together with striking language. Impressed me as being sensual, pensive, and artistic. Nice submission.


Wishful Moods

2022-02-04
Your selection of words is really creative. I especially liked

Trapped on the backs of eyelids like paper lanterns and silk screens. Enjoyed reading this.


Taking Control

2022-02-04
Thanks for sharing your meditative travelogue. It is one of my favorites of yours. Bookmarked.


First Kiss

2022-02-03
I like how each scene was framed individually and then presented in progression until you reached the closing line. Enjoyed the format and the tone. Thanks for the poem.


Postcard from the past

2022-02-03
Thereís a certain rhythm about this poem that feels like a poignant heartbeat. So genuine. Well conveyed.


JOHNNY DINKLE

2022-02-03
Quite creative and fun.


you and bashō

2022-02-03
This poem is like a butterfly that whispers me a secret.
Just my immediate feeling and impression. Wonderful.
(Yes I know itís an odd review)


Happy 72nd heavenly birthday to my dad Ilia by Ann Wood

2022-02-03
Very touching and very well written.It was a gift to have read it


caprice

2022-02-03
The last line perfectly provides a pay off to the building coyish
seductive tone.
(Hope I interpreted it correctly!)


Hunting Season

2021-08-15
I love poems that challenge me to ponder their intent and their meaning. Iíll gladly read this again and absorb it. Well written also.


Joy beyond reason

2021-08-15
Thank you. This poem brings me back to the essence of the spirit and clears my mind and soul.


This waking life is but a dream

2021-08-14
Though provoking and well constructed.


ImyIwy

2021-08-14
Delicate and sweet. Emotionally touching.


Kejab

2021-08-14
A serious topic wrapped in humor is a great way to get a message across. Well done.


Iris Of Midnight

2021-08-14
Very nice crafting of words and phrases that send to create a tone that is abstract and meaningful at the same time. Applauded


ten memorable moments, reviewed

2021-08-14
Subversive humor with a serious point. Much like life. Applauded


Missed Wish

2021-08-14
You expressed your inner dialogue vividly and I enjoyed the rhythm of the piece
Thanks for it


My Days

2021-08-04
A brilliantly shared self reflection.


The Gleaner

2021-08-04
Itís rare that one can convey things so organic such as nature,memories, etc., and package them in such an effective and well crafted format !


Goodbye July, hello August 2021 by Ann Wood

2021-08-04
Such a warm and welcoming poetic commentary.
Enjoyed this. Thanks


shanty town Otherworld Part 1

2021-08-04
I appreciate that you invite us along with you to see the despair and feel your emotions and thoughts. I also like the back and forth rhythm that never let the reader feel settled.
Thank you for this poem


With apologies to Noel Coward

2021-08-03
This is subversively humorous.
And like the title!


As Best As

2021-08-03
I like the cadence. And the end punctuated by mischief and a wink


IN THE DUMPS

2021-08-03
Inspiring. Nice format also.
Thanks for this poem.


In The Pages

2021-07-18
Thereís s something mysterious here that makes me want to read it again I will.


APPRECIATE OTHERS

2021-07-18
From the heart straight to the pen.
Gave me a dork of optimism.
Thanks


Every Single Way

2021-07-12
Hmmm. I like how you took chances by shifting the tone towards the end
Nice


Almost there

2021-07-12
You must be talking about the football match.
Well said. Even as an American I felt the disappointment


In This World

2021-07-12
A very peaceful contemplation.
Thanks


our intention and so gentle . . . this rain

2021-07-11
They are both very sensual and paint with delicate brushes. Took my mind to on interesting voyages.
Thank you.


Lessons

2021-07-10
I like how you compartmentalized the way that you described your struggles but you presented yourself as a whole person who experienced them Hope that makes sense.


The Awakening

2021-07-09
Raw and honest. Extremely well written with a pace and a cadence that fit the perspective, mood, and message. Bookmarked


Factory Reset?

2021-07-09
Thereís a certain sway and rhythm here that suggests both physical and emotional love. At least that is what is to me. Very provocative


The extraordinary in the ordinary

2021-07-08
I always love your creative way you shape words and images.


COMPASSION ?

2021-07-07
Thanks for such a needed message


HISTORY IS A PUZZLE

2021-07-07
A creative way to describe history!


In Which a Conversation Commences

2021-07-07
Hmmm. Iíll have to reread this one. Itís worth it.


[01 Jul] - Community poll | Posting limit? (HOLD)

2021-07-07
Iím in favor of three a day. Poems that is
In deep appreciation of all my fellow writers!!


Uranus, The Magician

2021-05-07
Wonderful pacing and presentation. When writing this, at no time did my hands leave my wrists. See the magic has inspired me.


Truth Is Just

2021-05-05
I like the way itís structured and brought full circle.


unconditional love is empowering

2021-05-04
Thanks for a poem that lets the readers into such personal expression.


The Rose of awareness

2021-05-03
The structure is compact and ordered yet describes such a freedom of being. And I like the way youíve shaped it. This is not an easy thing to achieve. Much appreciated poem.


on the other side of travail

2021-05-02
Love the imaginative structure


is your spirit still heavy

2021-04-30
Tender expression of mixed emotions. I appreciated it.


PLANET ZONG (Changes Additans)

2021-04-30
Now this is quite a planet!! I enjoyed this.


planet lynn

2021-04-29
This made me smile. It seems to suggest mischievousness.


The tyrants bore

2021-04-27
Spinning in my head
like a Catherine Wheel of tension

These are lines that are inspired and covey such a crushing emotional image. Wow


Song of the dandelion

2021-04-27
I enjoyed the innocent spirit and the insightful closing.


Soft words from a broken sky

2021-04-27
Bookmarked. Beautiful pastiche of senses,words,and phrases. Took my outside myself and into another world. Thank You


Cart Horse

2021-04-27
Well crafted,imaginative,soothing. Nicely told.