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Feiyn

33 years old from England


The latest comments that Feiyn has written.

Why he'd be good at keeping secrets (for me)

2006-09-22
your poem hit hard and fast and expressed a ton of emotion. loved it.


Nikki Giovanni Spin-off (Paint Me American)

2006-05-12
I enjoyed your poem. Great job. My favorite part was

"I believe that... God is NOT the answer to every problem
Or question
And the Facism
Of Evangelical Christianity
Is not the only choice of religion
Despite what the 700 Club says."


Tactician

2006-05-05
written like you have seen many battles. Your poem is true, and sad. It flows into a story well


I Hate...

2006-05-05
Haha funny. I hate most of those things too.


Same Old Lane

2006-05-05
Wow! Great song. Very unique. Sounds like something Linkin Park would write (thats a compliment even though you might not know who they are or you may just not like their music).


Sunburn

2006-04-26
Haha I'm sure the brown crayon would have worked. I hope you feel better. Great poem!


Beat On

2006-04-19
Auh great poem and great subsitute line. Its perfect and now completely all yours! Great job!


Caring and Sharing

2006-04-11
a flowing sensation of passion


I Need You Today

2006-04-09
beautiful
touching
and an understanding of whats precious and what we hold onto.


Be With Me My Heart

2006-04-03
Beautiful and inspiring. And if you ever need an extra heart I can loan you mine. Its not very useful to me anyways.


You only came to me this morning

2006-04-01
beautiful poem!


Dumplings

2006-03-31
O Dumplings! I love dumplings with a passion (and hotbuns!) The best! Love your poem! Haha a poem about dumplings. The next time I eat some I'll probably think of your poem.


Lost in Cyber Space (To all my friends on the bay!)

2006-03-26
auh! How horrible! Poor Zoya! I think if that happened to me I would feel like crying! But I really enjoyed the poem.


Sublimation

2006-03-26
Your poem is seething passion and details. Excellent. Love your format! It added to the uniqueness of the poem.


Words of Fire, Writ in Heart's Blood, Over Surface of Water

2006-03-24
your poem was gorgeous and left a print on me that won't fade away. I even read it aloud to myself and it rolls off the tongue wonderfully.


Ganga My Ganga

2006-03-23
enchanting descriptions. It makes me feel like I can really see it. Loved it!


Noodles Fossilized

2006-03-22
Your poems really cool. Your poem is the only poem I've read that can make it sound good even including noodles.


The Smell of Fear

2006-03-22
Wow you're great at rythmeing ( I know I didn't spell that right. My spelling sucks!) I think your poem portrays an aray of emotions


Brothers

2006-03-22
Your poem is hilarious! I loved it.
"Just make them go away to answer all my wishes, but then again they are the ones that have to do the dishes!"


Recycle Me

2006-03-20
Oops didn't rate.


Recycle Me

2006-03-20
I love your poem! It incorporates what one thinks of "maybe if I could just forget" or "maybe if I had never met you". I know I do. I think that makes the poem really special.


Women of True Love

2006-03-20
A very powerful poem and very true! Also completely captivating.


Watching you watching me...

2006-03-16
I enjoyed this one just as much as your other one! A great poem! I love the idea behind it.


Beat On

2006-03-15
I love your poem but... there is a problem. I really think you should remove the lyrics from your poem in respect for the song and artist. The song's name is Always I believe. Great poem otherwise!


Friends... or something...

2006-03-15
Your poem shines bright with friendship! haha you are probably a great friend to have. Great poem!


8th of March (An Introspection)

2006-03-15
Wow. Your poem speaks its words loudly and bravely. After I read this I pondered this subject and to the books I've read about it. It makes me wonder what have I done to help this cause. Beautiful poem.


Watching you, not watching back...

2006-03-15
Your poem is really good and it expresses one sided love quite well. Great job! My favorite line is:
"Therefore I will be stuck watching you,
not watching back..."


WHO AM I?

2006-03-14
Beautiful. Very beautiful. (I'm running out of words to describe your poems, they're so good!)


Woman Burning Bright!

2006-03-14
That was an amazing poem. I love the strength that it gives off. Its very descripitive and it flows well. Your poem shines with excellence.


Nocturne

2006-03-14
I love your descriptions! Its an enchanting poem. A true work of art (or in some cases poetry).


The Awakening

2006-03-14
I think your poetry didnt make alot of sense or have a hidden meaning. I also didn't enjoy your last line. Are you saying that only people who ryhme can commit suicide?


Forever

2006-03-11
You write really well, and wow that poem/ song was great!


This Is You.

2006-03-11
That was an awesome poem. I love how you used faces to help describe the person. I hope you can help them whoever they are.


May she be better than me

2006-03-10
Your poem was very beautiful and I adore your last line.

" But when you slumber in the shadows... may you whisper my name."


Marked For Disappointment

2006-02-25
Your poem speaks the truth. I love how it radiates the feeling your poem is trying to describe so you actually know what you're talking about.


You Will Be Here Tomorrow

2006-02-25
Great poem, I really enjoyed it. One of my favorite lines is " their faces darken with rage and sorrow.
One pulls out a towel and wraps it
"You will be here tomorrow."
Its a good thing the poem doesn't pertain to you but you must have good friends.


Surrealism

2006-02-21
That was a really good poem. It describes the feeling of longing, and loss quite well.