| THE BRIDGE
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2007-02-18
short and simple, but with a good point=)
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| A Question For You
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2006-09-12
so sweet! hope she said yes!:)she must have...
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| heart attack
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2006-09-12
I know this feeling, and thank you for expressing it with your brilliant words..:)
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| silence
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2006-09-10
Another great poem from you my friend=) So many thoughts in just a few lines...Its just great..:) Silence is louder than any sound...
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| Rock`n`roll medley of Cr4ky (coolarons challenge)
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2006-09-09
I love it, I really do!!=) the way you have used lines from rolling stones, pink floyd...it makes it great and different...!
ramble on;) hehehe....
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| Starforce
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2006-09-09
who says that veird is something bad?;) I`m veird....hehe...I really like the poem...you express yourself so well!! =)
Veldig bra!!
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| Jazzy Blues
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2006-08-30
I love it!:) It really makes me smile=) Its just great....yeah!
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| My body is a temple (HAIKU)!
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2006-08-26
I think this is powerful writing:)!!
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| carousel
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2006-08-15
this is great! life is a carousel....I like the way you have written this, the way you have put it together:)
I guess we just have to hold on to this carousel of life, even if it is tempting to let go and fly away to the moon...;)
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| The Dreamer's Game
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2006-08-14
what a great poem, I love the "pictures" you are using=) Really good...*
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| status quo
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2006-08-14
well written! great!=)I like the title too..;)
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| grown
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2006-08-14
Yeah..I like this...both the poem and the "message" here...
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| 2. L'enigma
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2006-08-14
I could not understand the first one there, but it looked beautiful!:) this is just great..a beautiful poem
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| 1. She
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2006-08-14
this is just great....:) very well written!!
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| Happy Birthday for Kid!!!!
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2006-08-14
this one was cool! I really like it!=)
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| I sit here alone
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2006-08-14
Hope you wont wait much longer...very sad poem...but well written**
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| A Humans Mind
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2006-08-13
it really is.....!!=) and this was a piece of facinating poetry too! jodajoda fine greier det her:)
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| Writing a poem (pen fighting)!
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2006-08-13
this was nice!! really sweet..and so true;)hehehe...
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| Secret Garden
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2006-08-13
Short poem but oh so nice=) I want to go there....
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| Metallic
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2006-08-13
I like the way you compare the world we see today with this metallic forest..and I can understand your interpretation too...because in my eyes it`s not far from the truth...I like this poem:)
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| Probably possible
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2006-08-13
Great poem!=) jepp enig med under her, det skiller seg ut fra mengden så absolutt!=)
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| Molly
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2006-08-12
Oh wow...I dont now what to say really...its just great, even if that is not the right word..I just love it, and I will have it bookmarked so can read it again and again....=) I love every word of it..
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| I dont wanna have a heart
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2006-08-11
Very powerful! You express yourselves in a different way I think... very good=)
Kjærlighet er no drit mann; men vi klarer oss ikke uten heller....;)Likte tittelen din!
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| Smile Like you Mean It (Working Title)
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2006-08-10
This piece had so much meaning, and as mentioned; your use of big words so to speak lifts the whole thing to another level...It is so sad, and if you have experienced this you have my symphaty..:)
But thank you for sharing your thoughts:)
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| Quisling My Friend
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2006-08-09
Very good! Okei..den var for våre engelske venner... men jeg liker det! det har en veldig fin flyt generelt, og det slår meg som noe annerledes, veit ikke helt hvordan men det gjør det..jepp... kommentar slutt
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| Raven
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2006-08-09
Very mysterious...I like it!:)
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| Come Home Soon
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2006-08-09
Really nice poem:) Your friends are lucky*
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| A letter to the war kids
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2006-08-09
This is so well written....Its just great...I really like it:)
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| Happy Holidays
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2006-08-09
What a nice poem:) So much joy..I like it:)
Marching bands rocks! :P hehe....
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| A million journeys
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2006-08-09
Good:) Deep... Stå på ;) hehe... Great choice of name by the way;)
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| musings...
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2006-08-09
What a beautiful poem you written:) So many thoughts.....It made me kind of sad to, because you are so right you know! About everything....Man in the moon..I just love it:) Thank you for sharing your thoughts with both me and others:) I like the whole idea of a man in the moon...*You my friend are an excellent poet..
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| Dan's toilet monoloug!
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2006-08-09
lol....Funny and neat:)
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| Words of truth
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2006-08-09
Very good poem!:) And very true I must say...Veldig bra!:)
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| Question upon Question
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2006-08-08
Great poem and so true... :) Fint og spørrende, det liker jeg:)
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| conversations with the man in the moon
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2006-08-08
Very mysterious...I think this is a fantastic poem, even the title is great:) Thank you for sharing this!
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| Teardrop
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2006-08-08
Very sad,but very beautiful...
Vakkert dikt! Jeg ble veldig trist av å lese det, noe jeg syns er bra;) Hvis du skjønner... Uansett... Keep up the good work!
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| OSCAR
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2006-08-08
Wow I must say this was a neat way of bringing out your point!:) Fine greier:)
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| selfishness, pity, hope, determination
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2006-08-08
I agree, a very good flow! In the beginning it seems kind of mad, I feel like the mood changes towards the end...I don`t know if that is done with purpose, but I think it adds something to the poem!:) It becomes very strong...
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| Shawna
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2006-08-08
Touching...very nice*
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| Don't fear the reaper
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2006-08-08
I think this is very good...Kind of sad...
The song is great;) Anyways..I like this poem!
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| Freedom.
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2006-08-07
Very good!:) You express yourself very well..:) You`re good at this...*
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| Hunger
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2006-08-07
Sånn siden jeg oppdaget at du er fra vårt kalde norge så kan jeg ta det på norsk;)hehe... veldig bra!! du har tonnevis med talent!flotte greier!:)
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| To a star
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2006-08-07
Love it..really..it is beautiful...
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| Feelings
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2006-08-07
Words of visdom....
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| Robot
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2006-08-07
:) Poooor robot..funny poem! I liked it:)
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| Siren
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2006-08-07
I think that this was rather original! Comparing yourselves with the rubber boots and all...I liked the poem!
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| Solitude
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2006-08-06
Some people give up in the end...thank you for your comment:)
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| Paranoia Window
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2006-08-06
I think you are absolutely right...
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| The Undead Anthem
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2006-08-06
Yeah! I like it!:) Spooky...I would really like to hear this song;) I think Danny Elfman would have loved this one;)
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| Why don`t we try shocktreatment?
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2006-08-04
Thank you!:)
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from Norway