Kaede

2011-06-03
If I were him, I would be flattered.
You wrote something! Yay! X)

2011-03-16
I like this a lot, and I particularly like the first and last two lines. It makes a lot of sense. Too much sense.
I hope you get to sleep eventually.

2011-02-23
I only understand bits of this, but for some reason the last line reminds me of Pele. X)

2010-12-17
Woah.
Major intense gustaring by this poem
Dang.

I agree with Nick about it sounding like Ayn Rand.
I am also a huge fan of the "short description of your text"

2010-06-28
love.
(It reminds me both of a fantastic song and an amazing book.)

2010-06-23
ahhhh this is a miserable story,
but quite an excellent sestina.
(I like the way 'crush' changes meanings.)
=) Thank you for posting it

2009-07-21
much smileyness =) =) =)

2009-07-12
Okay, I love this guy, and your prose is not so poetic that it seems unproseful =) --the poetry is a fitting kind of undertone. You should write a story.
Actually, in my opinion, this could qualify as a story, but you know what I mean.

2009-06-28
amen

2009-06-15
sweeet =)
I want to hear this.

2009-06-12
=D this is quite possibly the least enigmatic poem of yours I have ever read, which adds a lot to the feeling of openness it gives me. Morgan forbade me to 'say everything', so I'm going to stop and let him comment. =)

2009-06-11
this is sweeeet =)
and soothing
a wonderful scene

2009-05-28
I think I'm going to cry

2009-05-26
holy crap Morgan
this is deep
and amazing
and I have so many favorite lines its not worth listing them
I hope you don't take my praise for granted
because I don't praise you to make you feel better
but anyway I have bookmarked it
and I hope the tempo setting means there is music to this

2009-05-22
Notre Dame! =D
excellent write
(I actually think the disjointedness adds to the effect--it makes it seem more like a string of thoughts)

2009-05-22
now I feel like a failure, because I'm always the last one to comment and other people have already said what I want to say. However, your oneword pieces are incredibly well composed and engrossing, though I agree that this one is a bit scary. nice job!

2009-05-20
I agree with both previous comments, and add that I like where you decided to use ellipses and where you did not.

excellent job

2009-04-24
this is heartbreaking...
so sweetly sad and powerful

2009-04-12
I really enjoyed reading this.
these are interesting ideas that flow well and... well... tell a captivating story =)

2009-04-11
hmmm....=)
What if my comments were really unhelpful and said nothing?
If I just rambled on and on because I feel like writing a poem like this but you already did and yours is cool and if I wrote another like it I would just be copying you?
Would that be okay also?

2009-03-27
Please don't fade away!
Alone is not forever
also, I hope you don't believe either of the lines in the second stanza are true

2009-03-24
=) very sweet, and very well crafted

2009-03-04
I agree with TubaGiant- this reminds me of There Was a Girl
It is beautiful and interestingly soothing- I think it's the repetition
I like reading it
it makes me happy

2009-02-24
this is absolutely breathtakingly stunning. wow. I don't even know how to describe the extent of how much I like this. write more!

2009-02-19
This is completely amazing, and I didn't need the note at the top to start reading the second part faster =).
I think there is a typo in 'Lift relief when the depart' though

2009-02-10
AMBIGUITY
I really like the style of this piece, if not the story it reminds me of...
I am curious about your intended meaning

2009-02-10
visually and audially stunning!

2009-02-10
this reminds me a bit of 'Gently' in content
well composed and easy to relate to

2009-02-06
this makes me smile =)

2009-02-05
vivid, violent, and vastly intriguing
I like it

2009-02-05
I have considered this
and found it to be absolutely true in regard to myself
which makes me quite sad
but I like this poem a lot

2009-02-05
I HATE THIS SICKNESS. My voice keeps coming and going. Ms. G apparently doesn't think there's a problem though...=)

2009-01-18
beautiful sorrow

2009-01-02
the rhythm of this poem is incredible. I like it lots, even if the message is not so good...

2008-12-22
=(

2008-12-16
Kithe- I like it.
Let it be known that this villanelle is awesome.

2008-12-15
These are all quite good, but for some reason I REALLY like the first one.

2008-12-11
a beautiful villanelle.
you won't be lonely forever-
you deserve so much more than that

2008-12-08
...I can't think of anything adequate to say about this...
it's beautiful. calming. safe. soothing. Thank you for posting it

2008-12-07
This is beautiful and I like it lots.
I'm so glad you two are happy.

2008-12-05
ooh the lines fix themselves when you try to comment :)
this is dismal and scary
but expertly crafted, as usual

2008-12-03
I thought you said this was bad...
I hope I misheard
I love this
and the moon

2008-12-01
so do I

2008-11-30
For some reason, I really like this

2008-11-18
intriguing...
when comes part two?

2008-11-13
It is wonderful to be hopeful
I am happy for you :)

2008-11-11
SONNET!

I'm sorry you are caught this way
We will be there when you need us
things will improve...

2008-11-10
agreed.
at least you feel as if you're helping...
I'm not sure I can say the same about my efforts

2008-10-12
This is the saddest poem I've read in a very long time. I like it, but It makes me feel like crying.