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Charlie

33 years old from England


The latest comments that Charlie has written.

THE U BOAT THREAT AND ALLOTMENTS (WORLD WAR ONE)

2014-04-09
Very evocative!


If only.

2014-04-09
I love how so few words can say so much.


The Heart of a Woman

2012-11-29
This is so beautiful. Really enjoyed reading. C


PRONOUNCIATION SAGA

2012-11-29
So very endearing! Brings a smile to the face. C


The world

2012-11-29
Really love this - life always goes on! C


Jake's Revenge

2012-11-29
This is so charming! C


an office day

2012-11-29
Having braved the tube in rush hour today I feel this poem is perfect in expressing what commuting is like! I also like the ending, leaves you with a warm feeling :) C


MAY YOU ALWAYS HAVE

2012-11-29
A nice simple and sincere poem :) C


Do not worry about a story

2012-11-26
Need to keep reading this to myself and remembering it! C


Humoresque

2012-11-26
Hear, hear. There can be too much superficiality in some social situations. But then nothing beats the chuckles with true friends when discussing said situations! C


Disbelief

2012-11-26
This really touched me. So clever, so emotive. C


the woman of my dreams

2010-03-25
This is such a sweet poem :) well, apart from the "enough to kill" part! ;) Charlie


A Brain Is Not A Muscle

2010-03-24
I really enjoyed this poem! And it gives a lot to think about - can we make ourselves more creative? Charlie


Have you got it in you?

2010-03-24
This is a very touching poem. Charlie


MY OVER ACKTIVE MIND

2010-03-24
This made me smile :-) So many of us have thoughts stampeding through our head when we'd rather be counting sheep! Charlie


Our glassy essence

2010-03-24
This poem intrigues me, there is such beautiful imagery. Charlie


That Picture

2010-03-24
I love this! There is nothing nicer than looking through old photos and reminiscing... well, apart from making new memories and taking new photographs maybe! :-) Charlie


The Secret of Heated Oxygen*between life and death*

2010-03-24
Such a lovely little poem :-) Charlie


A pig in the Lounge

2010-03-23
I love the acidity of this poem, and completely understand where you're coming from! Charlie


To Sleep

2010-03-23
Haha, I love this haiku!Thank you for sharing it! :-) Charlie


Scars

2010-03-22
So short and simple, yet so powerful. Thank you for sharing this. Charlie


What exactly would you do?

2010-03-22
This poem demonstrates to me just how powerful and emotive lust can be! I love the rhyme you've used :) Charlie


When there are only two ways to go

2010-03-22
A very thought-provoking poem, thank you for sharing it. Charlie


Personal Psychoanalysis

2010-03-22
I really like the pace of this poem, it was a pleasure to read. Charlie


The Egomaniac

2010-03-22
This poem made me smile! We all know people like this and you have perfectly and intelligently summed it up in three simple lines. Charlie


Death has many faces

2010-03-22
Such a touching and haunting poem. Charlie


Family.

2010-03-22
This poem clearly shows just how much we sometimes yearn for things to just go back to how they were before. Its sad that it hardly ever happens that way. Charlie


It's not ok.

2010-03-22
Wow, this is so incredibly powerful and eloquently described. Thank you for sharing it. Charlie


Nana

2010-03-22
Such a beautiful and bittersweet poem, thank you for sharing it. Charlie


You Will Make It Through

2010-03-22
This is a very emotive poem, I really enjoyed reading it. Charlie


I Smile When You're Not With Me

2010-03-22
A short, sweet and simple poem with so much emotion! This is something, I am sure, that everyone can relate to. Charlie


Fire and Ice

2010-03-21
Such a beautiful poem. Charlie


Winter

2010-01-22
What a lovely poem :-)


The volatility of love

2009-08-26
Wow, this is a simply breathtaking piece. So vivid, thank you for posting it :-) Charlie.


A lonely tree

2009-08-26
Wonderful piece, thank you for posting it! Charlie


You're Here

2009-08-24
A very sweet poem that illustrates perfectly the comfort loves brings :) Charlie


Internal Darkness

2009-08-24
A wonderful poem. I hope you find your light :-) Charlie.


The Day I Fled...

2009-08-24
Beautifully written, and very touching. Thank you for sharing, Charlie


A Single Tear

2009-08-22
This is a simply breath-taking poem, and is said so precisely and with such force. Wonderful. Charlie


To The Light

2009-08-22
Yet another beautiful and astounding poem. Thank you for posting your work for all to read! Charlie (:


Jonah

2009-08-21
Aw, such a lovely poem! Congratulations :D Charlie


Despite it all

2009-08-21
A lovely short and inspiring poem! (: Charlie


A Path

2009-08-21
Yet another breath taking poem! Thank you for sharing :) Charlie


Today is Ordinary

2009-08-21
An absolutely wonderful poem! Too often we take things for granted. Charlie


Short Corn

2009-08-20
I live in England, and am shocked to hear this! Unfortunately it seems all to fitting in the modern world...Great poem, though I am sorry it had reason to be written. Charlie


Thirty-Seventh Honeymoon

2009-08-19
This is such a heart-warming poem! It makes me smile as I read it, and fills me with hope for forever lasting love :-) Charlie.


The Bus Ride

2009-08-19
I absolutely love this! Its an everyday fantasy, that leads to the endless "what ifs" (: Charlie.


Up the Creek Without a Paddle

2009-08-15
Nice sentiments, and very true. I really like the rhyme. Everyone has the right to write about what they believe, or do not believe in without negative judgement from others. Charlie.


Being

2009-08-15
I love the fast pace of this poem. Its concise and to the point, and I like the humanist view, being of that ilk myself. However, I disagree with "most gods stir up wars" ; it is people who start wars, even if it is in the name of a god. :) Charlie


A Frog's Kiss

2009-08-15
Lovely :) It reminds me of when I used to go camping of how dewy and fresh everything was in the morning! The picture matches it beautifully too. Charlie