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Holding On

2025-10-20
You have more strength than you probably realise. Keep on hanging on, then you can climb up.


Insidious

2025-10-19
This piece speaks to me of self harming, as a former nurse I’ve seen this and the reasons behind the action are complex. The title is perfect and maybe for different reasons than my thoughts.


over-shoulder weather

2025-09-16
At first read, I had you leaving prison, whatever your personal prison maybe, almost one step forward two steps back. Then unsure, makes me think which s a good thing.


The song of silence

2025-09-15
I love this, I feel this is one of your best and really fits my mood right now.


one summer day

2025-09-09
This resonated with me for my mother and for myself and best friend, I love the simplicity coupled with nostalgia and Summer is my season.


Silver

2025-09-08
A beautiful piece, good choice volunteer, I remember learning his poetry at school.


Too Say

2025-09-02
So sad, but it seems like words of wisdom.


NO LONGER WAITING

2025-08-31
I love a surprise Ken, bring it on.


Fantasy Dreams

2025-08-31
Loving this and the final stanza is a perfect ending.


Three for the Mouse

2025-08-31
A trio of poems, I love them for the difference of their lives.


dead silence

2025-08-24
I “feel” the silence and it brings calm, a beautiful piece.


two robins

2025-08-15
I think it means lovely poetry from you. I “see” this piece and its question at the end has me thinking..


When The Room Fell Silent...( RIP Kip❤❤❤)

2025-08-15
So sad to read this, a loss for Poetbay. Zoya was always generous with her encouragement and friendship.


Word Cloud

2025-04-01
I really enjoyed this and the weather concept, you may touch down on Poetbay anytime.


March

2025-03-16
As you always do, I am there. The final stanza seems of realism, hope and memories. Much enjoyed this piece.


Reflections IV

2025-03-16
Lawrence has put it so well. Forgetting is the hardest, but you’ve taken from that and built on it.


Reflections III

2025-03-16
Good, is a good place to be and “ in my view” is really what counts, bravo.


Well-being in alive seeing

2025-03-12
I always enjoy your work and this resonates with me, just what I need.


Days Move Along

2025-03-12
There were some hilarious lines here:” as a tortoise on Valium” I was smiling through this read, even though it’s seems as though there is a deeper meaning.


A Bit Perplexing

2025-03-08
Guilt? People are strange and clearly you recognised that .


HAPPY WOMENS DAY BY ANN WOOD

2025-03-08
And the very same to you Ann!


Reflections II

2025-03-08
The fact you got there says a lot about you and your resilience and you probably wouldn’t be writing for us all to read and enjoy. It’s International Women’s Day today, so go you!


No Worries

2025-03-01
Go you! Keep your independence as long as you are able. You have a great mindset. You don’t have to explain yourself to anyone, but the fact you did is just you being nice and informative.


THE PAST

2025-02-24
Your words are suitability marked Ken!


peanut seller

2025-02-03
Sad observations, but you did see.


THE DAWN HAS BROKEN

2025-02-03
Let’s have more of these days Ken, I’ve seen one or two lovely sunrises.


V

2025-01-31
Enjoyed this and the final line…….excellent.


FREE FORM POETRY

2025-01-24
This piece tells of the joys of PoetBay, the choices we all have, whether it is to read or write. Keep doing both Alan.


What Is This Moment?

2025-01-24
I liked the momentum of this, the content is a little familiar!


10-01-2025

2025-01-14
A lovely Haiku, I like the colour.


WHILE ON THE OUTSIDE

2025-01-14
I’m with you inside and outside Ken. Long may your mind remain youthful.


Being dis-covered

2025-01-06
I read your work and feel a calm. Love the line,” The waves of experience rise and fall.”


Smash me please

2025-01-02
The title drew me in, I wasn’t disappointed, I feel the longing and the ending fits the piece perfectly.


Almost Diamonds

2025-01-02
I missed this, love the analogies, much enjoyed.


Another Year

2025-01-01
We have nothing if we don’t have hope.


HAPPY NEW YEAR 2025 BY ANN WOOD

2025-01-01
I wish you a very Happy New Year Anne.


HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR

2025-01-01
A very Happy New Year to you too Ken.


New Year

2024-12-30
You set the scene beautifully, I’d be very happy with food, the final sadness seems it maybe tinged with grief.


SEESANS GREETINGS

2024-12-24
Thanks Ken and the very same to you.


Happy Christmas everyone

2024-12-19
Have a fabulous Christmas Alan, keep writing in the new year.


a poem for Lou

2024-12-08
A fabulous tribute, I love his voice and Walk on the Wild Side reminds me of good times back in the day. The final stanza made me smile, in a good way.


The Quiet Conqueror

2024-12-06
Just love the analogy here and sometimes I need the power of perseverance.


awakening (haiku cluster)

2024-11-21
Five lovely Haiku’s, it’s very apt here at the moment, I’m shivering. My favourite is the fourth, I have the visual.


TWO ODD BODS (Additans)

2024-11-12
Somehow the most unlikely friendship's are struck and survived, well portrayed Ken.


Gardner

2024-11-09
So sad, his legacy lives on. It always feels lonely somehow, when a mainstay in life departs. The four sided hat was just him, my father used to wear a beret, strange what stays with us.


TRUMP - WINS - NOW THE NIGHTMEAR BEGINS!

2024-11-06
Hear hear Ken!


The Saddle

2024-10-28
I enjoyed this, I wonder how we got to where we are, the reflection. You've lived a life and it's yours to own. I'm with Alarian, get that life story written for us to enjoy, you have all the skills.


THANKS FOR READING

2024-10-22
You keep writing Alan and we'll keep reading. Consider yourself a writer!


jester’s truth

2024-10-20
A great piece, it unfortunately made me think of war which made me like the final two lines even more.


A POEM

2024-10-16
Hi Ken, you're so right!