| two robins
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2025-08-15
I think it means lovely poetry from you. I “see” this piece and its question at the end has me thinking..
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| When The Room Fell Silent...( RIP Kip❤❤❤)
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2025-08-15
So sad to read this, a loss for Poetbay. Zoya was always generous with her encouragement and friendship.
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| Word Cloud
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2025-04-01
I really enjoyed this and the weather concept, you may touch down on Poetbay anytime.
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| March
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2025-03-16
As you always do, I am there. The final stanza seems of realism, hope and memories. Much enjoyed this piece.
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| Reflections IV
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2025-03-16
Lawrence has put it so well. Forgetting is the hardest, but you’ve taken from that and built on it.
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| Reflections III
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2025-03-16
Good, is a good place to be and “ in my view” is really what counts, bravo.
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| Well-being in alive seeing
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2025-03-12
I always enjoy your work and this resonates with me, just what I need.
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| Days Move Along
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2025-03-12
There were some hilarious lines here:” as a tortoise on Valium” I was smiling through this read, even though it’s seems as though there is a deeper meaning.
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| A Bit Perplexing
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2025-03-08
Guilt? People are strange and clearly you recognised that .
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| HAPPY WOMENS DAY BY ANN WOOD
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2025-03-08
And the very same to you Ann!
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| Reflections II
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2025-03-08
The fact you got there says a lot about you and your resilience and you probably wouldn’t be writing for us all to read and enjoy. It’s International Women’s Day today, so go you!
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| No Worries
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2025-03-01
Go you! Keep your independence as long as you are able. You have a great mindset. You don’t have to explain yourself to anyone, but the fact you did is just you being nice and informative.
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| THE PAST
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2025-02-24
Your words are suitability marked Ken!
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| peanut seller
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2025-02-03
Sad observations, but you did see.
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| THE DAWN HAS BROKEN
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2025-02-03
Let’s have more of these days Ken, I’ve seen one or two lovely sunrises.
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| V
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2025-01-31
Enjoyed this and the final line…….excellent.
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| FREE FORM POETRY
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2025-01-24
This piece tells of the joys of PoetBay, the choices we all have, whether it is to read or write. Keep doing both Alan.
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| What Is This Moment?
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2025-01-24
I liked the momentum of this, the content is a little familiar!
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| 10-01-2025
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2025-01-14
A lovely Haiku, I like the colour.
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| WHILE ON THE OUTSIDE
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2025-01-14
I’m with you inside and outside Ken. Long may your mind remain youthful.
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| Being dis-covered
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2025-01-06
I read your work and feel a calm. Love the line,” The waves of experience rise and fall.”
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| Smash me please
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2025-01-02
The title drew me in, I wasn’t disappointed, I feel the longing and the ending fits the piece perfectly.
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| Almost Diamonds
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2025-01-02
I missed this, love the analogies, much enjoyed.
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| Another Year
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2025-01-01
We have nothing if we don’t have hope.
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| HAPPY NEW YEAR 2025 BY ANN WOOD
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2025-01-01
I wish you a very Happy New Year Anne.
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| [this bird has flown]
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2025-01-01
Just beautiful!
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| HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR
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2025-01-01
A very Happy New Year to you too Ken.
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| New Year
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2024-12-30
You set the scene beautifully, I’d be very happy with food, the final sadness seems it maybe tinged with grief.
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| SEESANS GREETINGS
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2024-12-24
Thanks Ken and the very same to you.
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| Happy Christmas everyone
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2024-12-19
Have a fabulous Christmas Alan, keep writing in the new year.
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| a poem for Lou
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2024-12-08
A fabulous tribute, I love his voice and Walk on the Wild Side reminds me of good times back in the day. The final stanza made me smile, in a good way.
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| The Quiet Conqueror
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2024-12-06
Just love the analogy here and sometimes I need the power of perseverance.
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| awakening (haiku cluster)
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2024-11-21
Five lovely Haiku’s, it’s very apt here at the moment, I’m shivering. My favourite is the fourth, I have the visual.
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| TWO ODD BODS (Additans)
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2024-11-12
Somehow the most unlikely friendship's are struck and survived, well portrayed Ken.
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| Gardner
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2024-11-09
So sad, his legacy lives on. It always feels lonely somehow, when a mainstay in life departs. The four sided hat was just him, my father used to wear a beret, strange what stays with us.
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| TRUMP - WINS - NOW THE NIGHTMEAR BEGINS!
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2024-11-06
Hear hear Ken!
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| The Saddle
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2024-10-28
I enjoyed this, I wonder how we got to where we are, the reflection. You've lived a life and it's yours to own. I'm with Alarian, get that life story written for us to enjoy, you have all the skills.
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| THANKS FOR READING
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2024-10-22
You keep writing Alan and we'll keep reading. Consider yourself a writer!
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| jester’s truth
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2024-10-20
A great piece, it unfortunately made me think of war which made me like the final two lines even more.
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| A POEM
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2024-10-16
Hi Ken, you're so right!
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| My bay
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2024-10-09
I like the idea of a mermaid on the bay! I'm sitting here enjoying your show.
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| Your Heart
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2024-10-08
Impressive, good you gave yourself a challenge, it paid off.
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| moth in my empty room
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2024-10-08
This is just beautiful and painful at he same time. I am so sorry for your loss, take care of yourself.
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| verse on a hill
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2024-10-05
I love the rise and fall of this piece and it feels tinged with sadness and perhaps a what might have been.
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| News About My Father
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2024-10-04
As long as you are at peace with yourself your decision will be the right one.
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| Disconnect
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2024-09-13
Because it defines you? Not wanting to let go? Age and too much thinking maybe?
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| DOUBLE VISION
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2024-09-07
I have to smile at this, as I've just visited my optician today and informed my right eye needs "refurbishing" good luck for your forthcoming left! Great title.
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| Desert
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2024-09-07
Drawn in by the first few lines, then enjoyed the unpredictability of the rest of the piece through to the descriptive fitting final two lines.
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| Passing
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2024-07-25
A beautiful emotive piece.
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| Fourteen More Lines on Whisky
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2024-07-16
Unfortunately I have whisky overindulgence in my youth, haven't touched it since, but as Lawrence mentioned, Islay comes highly recommended by friends of mine. The last two words are just right.
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