| The Rat
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2012-10-15
Excellent! Evokes feelings and memories of places,some of which are better left unexplored.
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| Falling Asleep Reading P Chu-I and Finding This in the Morning
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2011-08-19
Well written! Captures the style of that time and place.
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| River of silence
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2011-08-19
This is just excellent!
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| Forgiveness
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2011-08-19
An inspiring writing,(for those moments of darkness)
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| Lady Izumi
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2011-08-18
Magnificent! As always.
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| To Motherland
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2011-08-18
I was shocked dismayed and confused,that a child of Mother Russia would spew forth such hatred for our blessed land.Then as I pondered your foto,and read some of your other work,I feel I understand. A pity.
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| The Vision of Christ
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2011-05-26
Beautiful and inspirational words
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| Hit me with your best shot
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2011-05-23
I like your writing.What I most like about it is that I don't know why I like it.
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| Your Own Legend Is a Leaf
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2011-05-23
A naturally flowing piece. Very full of the feelings of nature. I am not conversant with Mr.Momadays' work,but some of the Inuit people are.
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| Rot
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2011-05-23
Yes,arrogant,self-important,and profligate. A hereditary sense of entitlement. Excellent,(and prophetic) piece
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| Country Fog
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2011-05-23
Very graphic.Excellent imagery!
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| Carvel Cake in April When My Birthday's in March
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2011-04-25
Not only is your writing clever and inventive,but now has become appetizing as well.
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| The Crossing
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2011-03-16
I believe this work is universal in that it speaks to me,a primitive cretin,bereft of all but a soul.
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| Le Lacrima del Fiore
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2011-02-06
Penetrating and,(painful)
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| Prose Poem
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2011-01-13
Very poignant observations. Gives one hope'
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| Save the rich !
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2011-01-10
Whatever ideas you have I'm with you.Please don;t think of socialism.I'm tired of waiting in line to use the shit-house and eating rotten turnip soup. Othewise,"Up the proletariat"!
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| Satan's whore
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2011-01-10
My Mama would have loved her.
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| Denise Levertov's "A Tree Telling of Orpheus"
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2011-01-09
Puts me in mind of a half- forgotten Druidic saga.Expands and reveals in the several readings.
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| The Last Dissenting Angel
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2011-01-09
A tragedy.Surely.Well-crafted piece.
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| Forever Never Felt Better
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2011-01-08
Beautifully written. You've been fortunate to have known these feelings.
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| Sakura Love
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2011-01-07
I'm sure the Japanese cherry lossom has never been used more tenderly'
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| SOUP!
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2011-01-01
Well said. Haut' cuisine of the proletariat.
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| Sage is Courage
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2010-12-31
Wonderful allegory
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| You Make It Easy
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2010-12-31
Lovely verse,from a guy in love.
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| Lake Durant
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2010-12-31
A very descriptve,(tranquil),scene.
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| Somewhere Else
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2010-12-31
You are a most imaginative person. This one is stunning!
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| Little Toys
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2010-12-31
Blessed are the little boys,who have a "normal" childhood. Another nice piece of work my friend.
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| Haiku Haiku
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2010-12-30
Very good example of the genre.
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| Still
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2010-12-30
Very nice! You made the silence deafening.
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| Hawk
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2010-12-30
This feels like allegorical mystery.
I like your stuff.
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| Mu2ic Man
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2010-12-30
I like this one too! You create the scene and the mood as one.
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| The Mermaid (Villanelle)
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2010-12-30
Beautiful. Feels like the Lorelei,or Sadko
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| Old Man, Winter Park
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2010-12-29
Good thoughtful piece on many levels.
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| Mirror Mirror
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2010-12-11
That ruthless master, time. Cleverly written!
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| The old oak Tree
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2010-12-11
A sweet memory,beautifully brought back.
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| Nocturne
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2010-11-20
Wow! Your mastery of the language is wonderful. I was able to experience several different emotions while reading this.
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| Cliche.
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2010-11-20
Excellent! Wonderful to overcome the hum-drum,the mundane.and convention.
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| Crude
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2010-11-12
Something that must be cried out over and over as we slowly return to the tree,the bush,and the banana.
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| The essence of truth
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2010-11-09
Cannot be said rnough. Well done!
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| On the Delo hills
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2010-11-05
Portraying the glorious beauty of nature.
Captivating!
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| A Portrait
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2010-10-31
Different visions,different Gestalt.Singular--Inventive
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| The WAVE touched me!!!
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2010-10-30
Graphic excellence!
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| Brain Child
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2010-10-27
The capture of tender and precious moments
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| Absurd
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2010-10-27
Very tender sentiment
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| Everywhere I Go
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2010-10-25
Wonderful phrasing.
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| Another Goodbye
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2010-10-25
With great feeling.
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| To you
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2010-10-19
Very moving,but I know not why.Excellent!
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| I Drank Your Wine
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2010-10-19
Hey! You are good! Very engaging.
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| Beautiful light
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2010-10-18
Written with true poetic style. I like your work
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| Flower of wisdom
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2010-10-18
Classic, almost "Confucian".
I enjoy your "take"
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