| Miss me Mrs you
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2006-12-09
really nice, honey ^^ cute, I hope you'll become mrs me ^^
*kisses*
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| The innocent one
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2006-11-21
ooh nice and dark honey, me like... :)
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| Concrete curtain
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2006-10-15
this is very dark and some what mystical, seems like you've done it again honey :)
love you
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| Judge me not, we're all unique
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2006-10-09
I will follow Nepenthes here and say: "right on" and hell yeah!!!
hugs
peter
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| Just a Moment in Time...
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2006-10-08
really something zoya... such depth in all the words, and so perfectly combined...
love
peter
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| Life and Death
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2006-10-08
haha, shooort ^^ really good zoya =) so few words and yet such feeling... really love it :D
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| Mr Butterfly
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2006-10-04
funny and cute with a pinch of sorrow, love it honey
<3
peter
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| Buzz buzz little bee
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2006-10-02
really cute Sabrina ^^ I love it, so full of life and happiness, it brought a smile to my face... keep it up :)
hugs
peter
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| I care for you
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2006-09-30
really moving zoya, you never seem to end surprise me with how much you care...
hugs
peter
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| I just wanted you to see me
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2006-09-26
You can't help to detect a lonliness and feeling of sorrow in this poem, you write so well honey... but I hope that you do not feel like this...
love
peter
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| I would make a hellish angel
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2006-09-20
so cool baby!!! ^^ I love it =)
love you <3
peter
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| My Muse (Source of inspiration-Saga's Challenge)
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2006-09-13
zoya is back!! and her superb writing is with her!! a wonderful enchanting text, and of zoya lenght :)
good to have you back fried
((hugs))
peter
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| I'm crying because it feels like I'm dying
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2006-09-11
Nice honey ^^ you can write even when your sick :) hehe, hope you get better soon my dear, I miss you so...
loads and loads of love
yours peter
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| You only live twice
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2006-09-10
I really like this one baby, the rythem and the rimes it all fits perfectly...
I love you honey <3
peter
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| I feel your beating heart beneath the crystal stars
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2006-08-24
cute baby ^^ I'm honored love, my heart jumped when I read it :)
hugs
peter
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| 10) Thank You for Your words
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2006-08-21
I can relate, and I think it's so nice of you to write this poem to your friend, he will be glad to know that you are glad you have him, and as you are filled with happiness when you read his/her words he/she will be filled with happiness when she reads yours..
hugs
peter
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| 3) Dear God
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2006-08-21
beautiful... belief is a important thing, I don't know if I belive there is a god, but I belive that it's only good to belive...
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| Infidel
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2006-08-21
It may not be the best you've written but it's a damn good write, and I must say I love the ending... infidel... that word sticks, and it makes the poem strong, mayve you shouldl rename the poem to infidel ^^ hehe I don't know, just an suggestion :)
love you honey <3
peter
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| Pain
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2006-08-20
Nice baby.. I hope you're not talking about us... I don't wanna inflinct pain in your life... :(
love you <3
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| To be or not to be is not the question!?
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2006-08-17
Greate text, deep and moving :) keep it up ^^
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| Ten Days
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2006-08-17
don't be sad, long distance relationship might work, and if you want it and fight for it, it probably work out just fine... nice text and a meaningful content... keep it up ^^
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| Deeper
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2006-08-17
really nice ^^
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| My favorite saying
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2006-07-26
really nice honey :)
kisses
peter
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| c...m...ic.....i...n
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2006-07-24
it maybe short, but I like it, it tells me something, it gives me a feeling, I don't know if it's the feeling you are feeling but your text made me think...
keep it up
peter
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| You Can't Take Away My Soul
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2006-07-24
beautiful zoya!!
and of course no one can take away your soul, it's to speciall to full of love for anyone to carry :)
((hugs))
peter
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| Hello there stranger
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2006-07-24
really good honey, not really your usually stile but I like it ^^ your so skilled honey =)
love you <3
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| ALONE
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2006-07-03
oh dear zoya, everybody feel alone sometimes, but that is why you have friends, call on us when you need us =) trust me you've got alot of friends, you shouldn't have to feel alone ;)
((huugs))
peter
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| Temptation of the greener lawn
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2006-06-29
real nice honey =) love the last line, "Don't climb fences" and you know what I love you!!! =D
<3
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| Aun San Suu Kui
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2006-06-20
really beautiful! and how nice of you, this is but one poem that shows what a wonderful person you are zoya!
((hugs))
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| Karmic curse
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2006-06-15
I like it, kinda funny in someway, and yet true...
many kisses to you baby =)
peter
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| Autumn Leaves
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2006-06-11
This is just wonderful, you say that Autumn leavse fascinate you, well you fascinate me ^^ hehe, really liked this text so well described and vivid...
((hugs))
peter
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| Crystal ball
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2006-06-09
honey, oh honey
you've done it again this text is wonderful
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| If I told you - forever
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2006-04-24
beautiful honey, nothing but beautiful...
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| Let Bygones be Bygones
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2006-04-17
Wow!! I really like this one, so vey honest and real to life, this one means so much to me you have no idea... wouldn't be easy if you just could say that to anyone and just start over without any ramifications...
(((so many hugs to you dear friend)))
Peter
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| My Secret
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2006-04-05
this texted moved me... deep in my soul I think my secret is the same as yours, but shhh... don't tell anyone :P =D
((hugs for a wonderfull text))
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| Fighting fear
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2006-03-23
really nice as always!!
But fear not, there are no wrong directions, the path you walk is yours to walk ^^
((hugs dear friend))
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| MIND AND HEART
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2006-03-15
a really powerful poem you've done it once again ^^ , and how I feel like you describe it, sometimes the heart wants one thing the mind another...
how to choose between them one can't have the right answer...
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| YEARS AGO, I HAD CHOSEN...
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2006-03-14
beautiful zoya =)
it brought a smile to my face... Optimism is important, but it's not always that easy to see the light... I think it's strong of you to try ^^
((hugs))
peter
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| 8th of March (An Introspection)
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2006-03-09
really good as usual =D
I was really shocked to have learned all those things you mentioned, and I really understand why you're angry and upset, you put the feelings you have in this poem with such a force that one can't escape beeing hit right in the face by it... the anger that tells me what is happening what is wrong... that anger is right... the poem speeks for it...
good work as usual
hugs my friend
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| Is it a Nightmare; Or Is it True?
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2006-03-07
Fantastic !!!! =D
You really captured a feeling, that I feel many times, more recently... I can say I was more than a little touched when I read it...
""Dance the frenzied Tandov* today!"
Blood-curdling cries rose sky high!"
really liked this!! so different, but yet you my dear friend ^^
I truly enjoyed this piece =D
((hugs))
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| Widows of Vrindavan
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2006-03-04
what to say... the text really makes a difference... it reveals truth that I (and I think many with me) don't know or is trying to not see, these kinds of texts are so important... make people see and you're on the way of solving the problem, maybe it's a long way but you took a step in the right direction and ... what can I say... you should be proud..
((hugs))
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| if
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2006-03-01
really nice :)
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| May she be better than me
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2006-02-28
so beautiful ^^
I love it!!!
*bookmark*
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| Your smell
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2006-02-25
love linger in the place where memories sleept... this text stays with me forever...
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| Shine on
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2006-02-24
really beautiful!! the finish line is awesome:
"listening to the airs inner voices
you made the right choices"
love it!! thumbs up ^^
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| Sweet Evil
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2006-02-24
really good ^^
so angry and yet so ironic at the same time, I like how you put the feelings together =) it's just sweet evil, I guess :P
=D
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| Tearing My Heart Out With A Thousand Knives!
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2006-02-24
I just love the way you use facts in your poems, it's so skillfull of you, I'm really impressed.. ^^
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| The pleasure of desire
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2006-02-21
I have to agree Finnman, this one is very erotic!! you write it really good, maybe you should write erotica ^^ haha :P
just kiddin, really impressive, the feeling in the words and the pics you create... so good =)
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| Young life of mine
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2006-02-20
really nice words!!
"Young soul of mine
this is you
Feel free to free me
This is time"
wonderfull!!
If your soul does not free you, you know were to turn, I can talk some sense in to her ^^ hehe
(((hugs)))
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| Life is never gray
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2006-02-20
Really good read ^^
I like the meaning in the poem and I totally agree =D
you go girl!! :))
(((hugs)))
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