| Smiling kisses (makes your mind go wild)
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2009-06-04
this is lovely, well done x
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| If your a poet you will know
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2009-06-01
i'd like to say that there's potential in this piece, but there isn't.
there is so much more :) x
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| Strike
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2009-03-16
i love how you've turned something so simple into a work of art :) excellent xx
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| fall from grace
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2009-02-27
this is wonderful, and i hope you didn't fall too far.
x
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| //Sincerely, your boyfriend's ex.
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2009-02-21
oooh good stuff :) i like the last two lines, they round it off well. x
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| My Always Valentine
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2009-02-19
this made me smile :) its lovely, so honest and heartfelt.
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| Eraser
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2009-02-16
gorgeous, and obviously a subject that gets a lot of thought from you.
i love it x
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| Read my soul
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2009-02-16
this is wonderful, i see so much love here. x
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| Murder
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2009-02-16
So short, but I enjoyed it immensely. Dark and abstract, I see why you titled it so.
Beautiful x
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| Such Is The Passion.
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2009-02-14
this blew me away, the language itself is amazing. i adored every word.
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| Cracks in the Mortar
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2009-02-14
the rhythm of this is exquisite, and such a wonderful poem for a wonderful subject to write about :) x
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| You're the One
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2009-02-10
this comes straight from the heart and I love it, particularly the last verse. lovely :) x
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| One kiss
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2009-01-25
immense, beautiful and brilliant.
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| Journey of Destiny
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2009-01-21
i love this, it just flows so well.
beautiful.
x
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| the long game
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2009-01-14
i really like this
im not sure why, so this is a fairly pointless comment,
but i really like it :)
x
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| An angel or not
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2009-01-06
i think i appreciate short poems more than anyone :P but a poem could be one word, or a billion, with just as much meaning. x
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| I'm alone, I'm free
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2009-01-06
i loved the last two verses especially.
this is wonderful :) x
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| And She Was Free At Last
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2009-01-06
this is very simple and still hits exactly the spot it was meant to.
i loved it (: xxx
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| Memories
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2009-01-06
i love the way your poems always rhyme so beautifully, but the words dont seem forced at all, they just flow, as if nothing has had to be changed.
its lovely (:
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| WAR
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2008-12-24
this is beautiful, and yet its so terrible to think that these things are true, that they really happen.
i love this poem, i love how short it is and yet it says everything that is needed to say.
x
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| I'd die to see you smile
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2008-12-22
its er, just a poem (:
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| Restrictions and desires of a teenager
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2008-12-05
beautiful.
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| In times that await
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2008-11-29
im not going to analyse your poem, 'cause it annoys me when people do it to mine. poems arent thought about, theyre just written from the heart.
this one shows where your heart is, and it certainly warmed mine.
x
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| Inside the mind of a mad man.
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2008-10-13
this will be the new Hannibal I'm sure of it :)
write a book, please :)
xxx
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| she was never a queen
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2008-10-01
the imagery is wonderful :) i love it x
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| fixed
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2008-06-26
:)
thats all i can say.
xxx
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| your number one with a bullet
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2008-06-26
short but beautiful. i love it :)
xxx
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| Saturn's Rule
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2008-06-16
You do have a macabre imagination =P
But you do it very well.
This is really well written, I really enjoyed it :)
X
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| Occult
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2008-04-25
Brilliant, beautifully macabre with a psycological twist :)
xxx
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| Denial
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2007-05-04
This poem is beautiful, and yet so sad in so many ways. I think you have wonderful poetic potential, keep up the good work :) love gemma xxx
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| Journey of Self
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2007-02-23
I thought this poem was excellent :) its shows real character and passion, and of course, tells the tale of a "journey of self-exploration". I hope your journey ends up where you want it to,
Love Gemma
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| Passion
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2006-12-12
wow :)
SUCH a well written poem, you are really talented!
continue writing, don't stop!!
xXxGemmaxXx
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| Fathers day
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2006-11-17
wow sabrina, I hope you've shown this too your dad :D
If i know him, he'll be really happy :D:D
a very well written poem hun!
xXxGemxXx
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| 7
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2006-11-05
This poem is so deep and yet so common, which is a talent i've seen in a lot of your work.
well done!!
xxxxx
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| A Gun At His Head
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2006-10-20
The poem is a story that was in "Chicken Soup For The Teenage Soul." That book is my bible.
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| Would you really laugh?
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2006-10-04
Its really good honey, but drowning is kind of a personal joke so I dont think anyone else is gonna get it :P
But this is a beautifully written poem. really its fantastic and so true. If someone did really drown, would we all laugh?
xxxx
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| Am I In Love?
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2006-10-04
wow its really good honey! I love it.
Its simple, but effective, and that what i like about poetry. It can be just a few words long, but have so much meaning.
love you, see ya at school!!
gemma
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| I Mourn my friend Joshua, Mexican-2006
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2006-10-02
If it helps, I know how you feel.
a little while ago, a friend of mine who was just 16, killed himself.
i cannot even begin to explain the pain i went through. for months i rejected everyone. all i wanted was dominic.
But one day, I thought to myself, He would not have wanted to see me like this. so my spirit rose, and i mourned him in a comfortable, but still extremely upsetting way.
i still cry sometimes, but thinking of them is the way forward.
many respects and hugs,
gemma
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| Buzz buzz little bee
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2006-10-02
wow big sis its so cute ^^ made me smile anyway lol i love it its great!!
love you forever,
ur lil sis,
gemma
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| Your Eyes
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2006-10-02
wow this is beautiful. How'd you come up with this? just inspiration I guess :)
love,
gemma
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| If only...
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2006-10-01
Wow this is great sabrina!!
love ur lil sis,
gemma xxx
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from England 