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MIK136PARKS

27 years old from UK


The latest comments that MIK136PARKS has written.

La la la (8)

2010-05-05
well dun i luv it *applaud*


The cheated Wife

2010-05-01
an excellent text cohen love the format and structure and also the story it shows the pure rage adultery brings out in humans

MIK


The Tangerine

2010-04-30
i can see how this all ultimately boils down too dont judge a book by its cover


Creation

2010-04-30
an amazing piece and kind of describes the code i live by

MIK


Should I smile?

2010-04-18
this is amazing ryce

keep up the good work

MIK


Just a little dream ... with big realizations

2010-04-09
all i can think of when i read this is 'the frayed ends of sanity'

keep up the good work ;)

MIK


Metal Poetry: Rhyme with a Reason

2010-04-01
i cant help but notice that the title is a modification of a lyrical quote from metallicas master of puppets


shells

2010-04-01
simply outsatnding taryn i like the metaphor of so many hearts given away freely, this is good stuff!

MIK


Think it's funny?

2010-03-25
i love for you for who not what as all people should


That Picture

2010-03-24
do you want a photo of me ;)


W.T.F.

2010-03-11
this is an astounding piece of work


Paradise of the Mind

2010-03-05
you capture the essence of the human mind superbly

MIK


Will You?

2010-03-05
to answer this question

i would with undying loyalty stand by my girl, if it meant i had to die for her to live so be it. so yes i will be there for whatever emotions women are experiencing great text too keep up the good work

MIK


Bully's

2010-03-05
we are like minded


Leaving School

2010-03-05
amazing pure and simple


IT HURTS

2010-03-04
constuctive critiscism melissa not out right put downs just how a text can be improved this text doesnt nedd to be :)


HI

2010-03-04
oh well done *reaching for applaud*


Life's Full of Surprises

2010-03-04
this is brilliant john john how can it not feel right it expresses greatly friendship and trust superbly written

MIK


Being A Teenager

2010-03-04
sounds like me good write keep it up

MIK


Judgement Day

2010-03-03
holy hell this is undoubtedly the best poem i have read in my 16 years on earth truly astounding and signifies human nature so very well... keep em coming

MIK


IT HURTS

2010-03-03
i hurt every day

i hurt myself and others :(


She sits alone

2010-03-03
read this again its gets better the more i think about it


toe nail time

2010-03-03
theres a D in handsome


the toe nail

2010-03-03
er... yes you are arent you ???


You and me

2010-03-03
Brilliant as always

MIK


She sits alone

2010-03-03
ive being waitin for another text for a while and you didnt disappont

best regards,

MIK


What He Thinks

2010-02-26
you said you didnt love me sorry to hijack your txt emma


What He Thinks

2010-02-26
surely if he doesnt trust you he doesnt love you ?


My Best Friend

2010-02-26
your my friend too ! ;)


A REAL MAN

2010-02-23
this sounds like your describing me unfortunately i have no one to reveal my heart to :(


Where Am I?

2010-02-13
how can i be lost if i got nowhere to go?


Killer Koalas

2010-02-12
you have a good sense of prose and lexis


Philip !

2010-02-11
I JUST LOST!


My deminished Life.

2010-02-11
a truly astounding first text ryce keep 'em coming

best regards,
MIK


Positive Piece Of Mind

2010-02-10
melissa why cant you write one comment and then leave it,

an excellent text emma

best regards,

MIK


Unknown Territiories

2010-02-10
an excellent first poem please write more!

best regards,

MIK


Melissa 'Biggins' Ormond

2010-02-03
thats you!!!


Captivating Dream

2010-02-01
avatar?


Outsiders

2010-01-18
i know the real u


End it!

2010-01-18
you are a truly wonderful writer gifted with the ability of transferring your mind to the page keep writing and welcome to the bay


Angel

2010-01-18
this is astounding and true


Paranoid

2010-01-13
this is gud


Teenaged vessels; erradic.

2009-12-15
Love the ending


The empty shell

2009-12-05
i always look forward to when you write because they are so captivating :)


The Feather (erotica)

2009-12-02
omg i cant stop reading


Vanilla IcE Cream...[EROTIC]

2009-12-02
that is amazing


sophie -.-

2009-11-16
"sluttish little hooker" lol harsh but so true


not sure yet

2009-10-15
FINISH IT!!!


Emotional Massacre

2009-09-25
well dun =)


What Do You Want Me To Do

2009-09-23
i luv this poem =]