| La la la (8)
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2010-05-05
well dun i luv it *applaud*
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| The cheated Wife
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2010-05-01
an excellent text cohen love the format and structure and also the story it shows the pure rage adultery brings out in humans
MIK
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| The Tangerine
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2010-04-30
i can see how this all ultimately boils down too dont judge a book by its cover
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| Creation
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2010-04-30
an amazing piece and kind of describes the code i live by
MIK
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| Should I smile?
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2010-04-18
this is amazing ryce
keep up the good work
MIK
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| Just a little dream ... with big realizations
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2010-04-09
all i can think of when i read this is 'the frayed ends of sanity'
keep up the good work ;)
MIK
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| Metal Poetry: Rhyme with a Reason
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2010-04-01
i cant help but notice that the title is a modification of a lyrical quote from metallicas master of puppets
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| shells
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2010-04-01
simply outsatnding taryn i like the metaphor of so many hearts given away freely, this is good stuff!
MIK
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| Think it's funny?
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2010-03-25
i love for you for who not what as all people should
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| That Picture
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2010-03-24
do you want a photo of me ;)
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| W.T.F.
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2010-03-11
this is an astounding piece of work
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| Paradise of the Mind
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2010-03-05
you capture the essence of the human mind superbly
MIK
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| Will You?
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2010-03-05
to answer this question
i would with undying loyalty stand by my girl, if it meant i had to die for her to live so be it. so yes i will be there for whatever emotions women are experiencing great text too keep up the good work
MIK
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| Bully's
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2010-03-05
we are like minded
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| Leaving School
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2010-03-05
amazing pure and simple
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| IT HURTS
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2010-03-04
constuctive critiscism melissa not out right put downs just how a text can be improved this text doesnt nedd to be :)
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| HI
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2010-03-04
oh well done *reaching for applaud*
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| Life's Full of Surprises
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2010-03-04
this is brilliant john john how can it not feel right it expresses greatly friendship and trust superbly written
MIK
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| Being A Teenager
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2010-03-04
sounds like me good write keep it up
MIK
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| Judgement Day
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2010-03-03
holy hell this is undoubtedly the best poem i have read in my 16 years on earth truly astounding and signifies human nature so very well... keep em coming
MIK
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| IT HURTS
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2010-03-03
i hurt every day
i hurt myself and others :(
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| She sits alone
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2010-03-03
read this again its gets better the more i think about it
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| toe nail time
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2010-03-03
theres a D in handsome
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| the toe nail
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2010-03-03
er... yes you are arent you ???
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| You and me
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2010-03-03
Brilliant as always
MIK
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| She sits alone
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2010-03-03
ive being waitin for another text for a while and you didnt disappont
best regards,
MIK
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| What He Thinks
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2010-02-26
you said you didnt love me sorry to hijack your txt emma
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| What He Thinks
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2010-02-26
surely if he doesnt trust you he doesnt love you ?
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| My Best Friend
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2010-02-26
your my friend too ! ;)
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| A REAL MAN
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2010-02-23
this sounds like your describing me unfortunately i have no one to reveal my heart to :(
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| Where Am I?
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2010-02-13
how can i be lost if i got nowhere to go?
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| Killer Koalas
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2010-02-12
you have a good sense of prose and lexis
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| Philip !
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2010-02-11
I JUST LOST!
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| My deminished Life.
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2010-02-11
a truly astounding first text ryce keep 'em coming
best regards,
MIK
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| Positive Piece Of Mind
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2010-02-10
melissa why cant you write one comment and then leave it,
an excellent text emma
best regards,
MIK
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| Unknown Territiories
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2010-02-10
an excellent first poem please write more!
best regards,
MIK
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| Melissa 'Biggins' Ormond
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2010-02-03
thats you!!!
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| Captivating Dream
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2010-02-01
avatar?
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| Outsiders
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2010-01-18
i know the real u
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| End it!
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2010-01-18
you are a truly wonderful writer gifted with the ability of transferring your mind to the page keep writing and welcome to the bay
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| Angel
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2010-01-18
this is astounding and true
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| Paranoid
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2010-01-13
this is gud
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| Teenaged vessels; erradic.
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2009-12-15
Love the ending
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| The empty shell
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2009-12-05
i always look forward to when you write because they are so captivating :)
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| The Feather (erotica)
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2009-12-02
omg i cant stop reading
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| Vanilla IcE Cream...[EROTIC]
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2009-12-02
that is amazing
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| sophie -.-
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2009-11-16
"sluttish little hooker" lol harsh but so true
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| not sure yet
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2009-10-15
FINISH IT!!!
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| Emotional Massacre
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2009-09-25
well dun =)
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| What Do You Want Me To Do
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2009-09-23
i luv this poem =]
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