| Religious Rant (don't read if easily offended)
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2006-09-20
Wow... finally someone who understands!!!!!! If only my parents thought that too...
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| STUFF IK A BOB 3
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2006-06-10
I feel honored to be associated with "laughing uncontrollably" and "Danger Zone"!
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| The Misunderstood Hell on Earth
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2006-06-01
I am so glad I don't have Darth Mader!!! I personally think you should have done more on Mrs. Wood, but it still ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why do we waste our time being taught by people that get paid less than plumbers, anyway?!
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| Robot
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2006-06-01
That robot sounds just like me...
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| Boy Recycling Machines
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2006-05-31
I love this!!!! It's so true!!!! Well, not for us... but anyway, the rhyming turned out awesome too!!!!! I LOOOOOOOVE IT!!!! Can you say bookmarked?!
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| The Runner
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2006-05-21
Did you use one of those online translation things? Those things never work! It's still an awesomely awesome poem!
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| Porch Swing, 8:09 PM
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2006-05-21
Wow... awesome imagery! "We drink each other in through the straws of the moonlight" it's amazing!!!!!!!!!
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| Tony
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2006-05-21
I thought baloney was B-O-L-O-G-N-A... bolo-g-na!!!!!!
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| In An Alternate Universe and A Better Time, You Didn't Flip Me The Bird and Apologized Instead
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2006-05-21
Yet another wonderful song... are you gonna start a band or something? That would be an awesome band!!!
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| Another Dream (Part 1)
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2006-05-21
Have you ever considered writing a book? I think it's a gift to be able to remember your dreams so well... I forget mine the moment I wake up!
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| Gasp
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2006-05-20
I still have to try that stuff... is it good? I'm still insane without it though...
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| Slave to Narcotics
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2006-05-14
Wow... very depressing but really good anyway!!!! Have you ever considered being a song writer for a career?
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| The Best Queasy Feeling In the World
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2006-05-13
Wow... the flow was amazing and the words are so true! YAY, QUEASY FEELINGS!!!!
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| Scared About the Future
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2006-05-11
No fair! I don't have anyone to not recognize me!!! You must introduce me to everyone!!! I love the poem, by the way! It shows exactly what we're going through with a perfect rhyme scheme!!!
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| To my friends
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2006-05-11
I feel so.... befriended...?
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| PAINTBALL
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2006-05-11
Are you sure it wasn't just red paint?
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| Of School (and the tragedy of those afflicted by it)
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2006-05-06
The parts about English and Yearbook are so true, and I love the pledge!!!!
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| Contemplating a Bug
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2006-05-05
*gasp*!!!! NEVER kill a bug!!!!! It has a life and a family of it's own! Think, what if a giant hand suddenly came down from the sky and squashed someone you loved... or YOU!!! It's still a good poem though!
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| Some Weirdo Story I: The Rockin' Roots
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2006-05-05
Is there a radish in the band? Or-- oh, oh! A POTATO!!!!
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| ...And Three Hot Guys Who Like To Burn Stuff (aka why chocolate and marshmallows are bad for you)
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2006-05-04
That last line is one of the many sayings I live by!!! This is such an awesome poem!!!!
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| Broken
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2006-05-03
Gah! That was so good!!!! Why can't I write music that good?! I love it very muchly!!!! It sounds like a song that should be on the bestseller list-- or whatever it's called in music!!!
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| In
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2006-04-25
It definitely has alot of emotion in it, and I LOVE the end!!!!
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| Revenge
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2006-03-23
Okay... I'm terrified... hide me! This is an awesome poem!!!!
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| OMG!!!!! I am in love!!!!!!
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2006-03-22
Once again, I feel bad because I'm am such a bad poet... You're really good with the rhyming in this poem and it is "laced with emotion"... VERY cute and VERY good!!!
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| Sickness
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2006-03-22
Me likey the poem!!!
Me no likey the flu...
At least I'm okay
and it happened to you!
Ha!!! I rhymed, but not as good as you did... I'm such a failier (or however you spell it...
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| Tea
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2006-03-22
I personally like tea with honey in it... it seriously helps my throat after a long hard day of being hyper! And it also calms me down like sort of what you described in your poem... but then comes coffee.... MWAHAHAHA!!!!
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| Old One Eye
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2006-03-06
Ahhhh!!!! I love it!!!! It's very... mysterious and interesting... in a good way, of course!!!
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| Best days of your life
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2006-02-08
What does ignoramous mean? Does it mean to ignore a moose? Oh well, I'm too lazy to look it up... this was a really good read for me! It really made me think (not the kind of thinking that makes my head hurt, either)! Haha! Down with bossy people!
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| Time
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2006-02-08
Ouch! Headache, too much thinking! Not that the poem was bad, quite the opposite, in fact! I loved it! The rhyme scheme (or however you spell it) was really good! I also really liked the format... you definitely have alot of talent! Alot more than me, anyway...
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| GTINAOAABAAAINSISABIAA(First Letters)
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2006-02-04
Ladies and Gentlemen, the story of my life! This was pretty random and going whichever way but somehow it made sense to me... but of course I sould be the one in a mental hospital... But no matter if you're insane or not this was a really good poem!
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| Forever
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2006-02-03
That would definitely make an AWESOME song!!! I would listen to it over and over and over and over and-- well, you get the picture...
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