| Acoustically Speaking
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2007-02-04
very calming to read. I like it :)
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| backwards
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2006-08-17
Great stuff. you can really hear the flow even when you're just reading it. excellent write I like it.
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| Hey, if you get it..
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2006-08-14
Excellent mary everyone can probably relate to this. Glad you've wrote something where ya been!!!? ^_^ See you at school!
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| I can never fall in love again
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2006-07-29
This is truly excellent I love it, and I can relate to the feeling. It is hard to forget, even if its easy to put things behind you.
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| The Future Brings The Pastly Things
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2006-07-27
I really like this it'd be a great song.
The one change I think would be good is this:
As smoke will rise and dust will land
We`ll twist and turn
Nothing will be lost if burned
I think just 'Nothing lost if burned' would flow better and not lose any of the flow.
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| Waiting
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2006-07-27
Another great song I'd say. The first stanza is really good.
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| It's Alright For A While
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2006-07-27
This is a great song! I'd definateley listen to it. It sucks that it got killed, but its still awesome!
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| The Rain
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2006-07-27
Hm this is like my text remember when. Its nice to think back to all the little things of being a little kid when things are still new and amazing. I like this alot.
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| Random Stuff!
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2006-07-26
shwoa... nice.
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| Stupid
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2006-07-25
Wow this is a great poem I really like the style!
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| Your the only one
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2006-07-23
Zakman this is awesome I love it. ROCK ON.
For real this is just too good its scary.
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| Lovely Girl
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2006-07-23
Nice connor. Good stuff... go get em.
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| In An Alternate Universe and A Better Time, You Didn't Flip Me The Bird and Apologized Instead
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2006-07-23
Good song yes. How old this is I do not know, but I have a hunch I know who its about.
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| Midnight Riot
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2006-07-23
I know midnight riot's singer... even I realize hes foxy. its scary. cool stuff lucas. (yes I must pat my ego)
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| Robot
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2006-07-23
limerics are bitchin. I salute you tony.
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| Death Of A Warrior
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2006-07-21
This is amazingly good. I expecially like the last stanza.
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| scars
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2006-07-20
So forceful. Very frightening. I think it'd even be a good rock song... scary scary dude.
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| So Hold Me... (Song)
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2006-07-19
Great song. I'd listen to it definateley... nice accustic gitaur melody and yeah... huzzah great stuff.
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| Rainbows when you lest expect
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2006-07-19
Excellent poem. Its nice to have something light and feathery to read. Its true, nowadays everyone is too on edge and looking out for all the imagined terrors that they fail to see kindness when it offers them an apple. they can only see the razors that aren't even there.
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| What cant change...that really needs to
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2006-07-16
Nice poem, but there is never use beating yourself up. My guess is mine, if you feel like talking speak up. I think we've always gotten along ok so... yeah.
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| go away, stupid kid
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2006-07-09
noice... yeah... too many kids are like that. garrr. maybe add stupid before class. idk awesome stuff.
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| Forget. Me. Not.
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2006-07-03
Wow very good...
I miss you.
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| There Was A Girl:
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2006-06-23
excellent! lol I read the first 2 stanzas n i thought to myself 'god and I say I feel old' lol thought the rest was gonna be like blarg. glad it wasn't! oh, I gotta write something sometime soon! o_O
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| A Littie Girl's Fear
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2006-06-20
Very very very veeerrryyyy gooooood.
kinda like scary like shwoa eekness.
truly powerful stuff.
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| Boy Recycling Machines
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2006-06-04
^_^ Nice! Never grow old though. No fun just feeling old (WHY DO I FEEL OLD!!?)
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| In Too Deep
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2006-06-04
FIGHT OR FLIGHT!!!
Live by instinct or die, thinking too much is nearly as bad as thinking not at all! Great poem!
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| The Wonders of Ducttape
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2006-06-04
wow cute fun but still serious awesome!!!
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| In Too Deep
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2006-05-30
the last 2 lines of the 1st stanza dont seem to flow right, but still an excellent poem. Could be a cool song too!
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| Fly
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2006-05-27
yikes. This thing is a bit of a thorn, but still in its own way fluffy... like a cotton plant maybe. I liked it. Hope you'll find someone who doesn't fly away, but carries you to the skies!
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| The Satin Demon
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2006-05-27
Powerful! Great imagrey and such, nice change from good to evil... the cell line says its not neccecairily the choice most wanted, really great stuff.
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| Slumbering In My Shallow Tomb
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2006-05-27
great rhyme and theme and everything. excellent poem! ^_^
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| Wander
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2006-05-27
This is great. I think it'd be even better if you added more verses, maybe even if you make it a narrative poem. I really like it... maybe its just my obsession with wandering though. ^_^ awesome.
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| Love For A While
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2006-05-27
good song. like the tatoo line.
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| Apple
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2006-05-21
man... disney movies... rock on. great poem and creative theme. (to me I guess if others are like gr?)
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| Catch Me
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2006-05-20
its just as much luck as everything else on finding someone to lean on, but once you've got someone... thats just the most perfect thing in the world.
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| I Don't Know
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2006-05-20
lmao...
just plain bitchin' (the good kind of bitchinness')
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| Rain
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2006-05-15
Short and quick, it stings like a needle. Great write.
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| He loves You
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2006-05-13
gar! I want to know who you're talking about cuz I feel like everything is my buisness lol. Great poem.
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| Body Art
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2006-05-13
thats what people said when I wrote something along these lines.
Yes, powerful.
True or not, make your scars matter, whatever they may be from.
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| DEATH BY A BUNNY
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2006-05-06
Do not disrespect the bunnies... >_< bad, this site is not the jokeness to most of us here.
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| Have an impact
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2006-04-19
You speak truth my friend! Excellent words.
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| Where do we come from and where do we go?
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2006-04-19
Wonderful text! I can hear it sung in my head, and as a song it would be unimaginably excellent!
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| An Old Man
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2006-04-19
I think you should add those two lines, whatever they may be... and I think you may have reversed 'forgiven me' in the last two words, forgive me if I'm wrong. I liked it... it left me wondering, what could leave someone in such tension that relief would be so great.
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| Wrong Thinker
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2006-04-17
If you dont think others should think what you are thinking should you be thinking the thought you thunk? ^_^
wonderful read. A nice, fresh breath.
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| The River
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2006-04-17
wonderful! I read it rather quickly, and it ended before I noticed, so in the second after I obsorbed it it really struck home.
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| Cry, my beloved country!
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2006-04-07
This is amazing... kinda a creepy write! love it.
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| OMG!!!!! I am in love!!!!!!
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2006-03-19
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
How cute.
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| Taste of blood
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2006-03-18
What a wonderful take on a game that needs new life breathed into it!!!
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| Keeper of the Unkept
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2006-03-10
I didn't know neptune did that sort of thing... wow.
Excellent poem... god I wish I could write as often as you!!!
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| Diffrent?
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2006-03-10
Always be you, lest you be fake.
sho Mr. ?, does ye tink I be different? ^_^
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