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UnforgivenAngel

31 years old from UK


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Sometimes I feel I am the Rain

2007-01-19
zoya, this is amazing, thankyou!


My Buddy and Me.

2006-09-21
now that is so sweet, i love it.


I lied to make it all work, and it didn't

2006-08-06
wow, i shed a tear, this is so close to me, i completely understand it,yet another great write.


I'm glad I was strong

2006-08-06
im glad you can be strong, im proud of you, i hope you are proud of yourself. good write


Light at the End of the Tunnel!

2006-08-05
zoya, i've had an argument today with a friend about the meaning of life, my argument was that there wasnt a point, yet now i see i was wrong, thankyou zoya, great poem.


You Can't Take Away My Soul

2006-08-05
thats beautiful, truly beautiful, thankyou!


Makes Football; But Scores Naught

2006-07-05
wow zoya,i know you wanted my opinion but i really am speachless! (((hugs))) luv angel, xxx


I am not

2006-06-30
very good. :)


Follow me

2006-06-29
wow,thats really good,i love it. :)


Autumn Leaves

2006-06-28
wow,i love it.


My Good Luck Charm

2006-06-28
this is really good,thankyou.


I've becomed this girl I don't want to be.

2006-06-03
dont worry,drinking is fine and its normal to fight with your mum,you cant keep cutting yourself tough. wearing black isnt all that bad,i only ever used to wear black, i was a so called 'goth' or 'emo' its okay,i promise,i know what its like to hate yourself,to cut yourself,hiding those scars are difficult but i suggest you put foundation on them,it hides them really well. but i really hope you find what you want to be.

great write,i understand.


Stay away..

2006-06-03
this is good,a shame about the spelling mistakes,but still very good.


It still hurts

2006-06-03
wow,i love this,i understand,i feel the hurt. its a lovly write,thanks.


I loved you ...

2006-06-03
thats so sad,its very honest,thats whats so good about it,it makes me feel something,im not sure what but i feel it. great write,thanks.


Dear Mom; You made my life a living hell

2006-06-03
you dont argue anymore,thats a good sign, i understand it is truly hard to forgive someone for something they've done to hurt you when there suppose to care about you snd love you. but i do say that your mum does love you,and whatever she's done,may have been because she loves you but im not sure about what happend so i wouldnt know but yes,a great poem.well written,well done.


Why?

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.


Why?

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.


Why?

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.


Why?

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.


Why?

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.


You only came to me this morning

2006-03-31
wow,i like this.
(((hugs)))
love angel. xxx


Lost in Cyber Space (To all my friends on the bay!)

2006-03-26
zoya,how cauld i not forgive you? it was just a mistake,im sure everyone would be happy to resend there messages.

(((hugs for a clumsy zoya)))
lots of love,xxx,caz.


Santa Clause

2006-03-26
haha,great,im scared of santa now,joking,great poem.


Bathroom poem

2006-03-26
haha.lol.funny.


poem

2006-03-26
oh,love it,so true.


roses

2006-03-26
i wasnt expecting that when i clicked on the name...so much anger,in such little words.


love

2006-03-26
i hope things get better,yet another great poem.
(((hugs to make you feel better again)))


dad

2006-03-26
wow,you put alot of emotion in this.
(((hugs to make you feel better)))


Evil Unknown

2006-03-21
...no not your end, just what you believe it to be,its not the end,just find something that makes you happy and focus on that, great poem,there's alot of emotion in it,great.


Noodles Fossilized

2006-03-21
wow.noodles,really were found? wow,amazing.


MIND AND HEART

2006-03-15
wow zoya,its powerful,im always stuck with stupid dilema's,what to follow? i love this... *bookmarked*


8th of March (An Introspection)

2006-03-08
im glad you showedme this or i would never have noticed it,thankyou.its very tue,thanks again.


Is it a Nightmare; Or Is it True?

2006-03-08
wow.you suprise me more and more with your poetry,this is such a tragic story,you tell it well.
(((hugs)))
love caz.


I knew I was bad

2006-03-07
there's just something about this,im not sure but it makes me think of something,altough im unsure what it is.i like it.


One Last Wish

2006-03-04
this means an awfull lot to me,its the worst feeling to be parted from a love one.i just may have to bookmark this one too.


Pain

2006-03-04
'Whenever the wind blows
I still feel the pain'

thats unusual,its good.it kind of suggests tough that the pains not constant,that the pain comes and goes,very well thought about.this is definately bookmarked.


Get Lost...NOW

2006-03-04
you say what you mean,i like that.


Abused

2006-03-04
i've got tears in my eyes,this girl was so brave.wow.


Beware not to tell the truth!

2006-03-03
wow,i never realised things were really like that.i always thought the truth was so much better,harder to tell but better in the long run.but oviously not.i like this poem,im going to have to bookmark it to remind me about people in kenya.thankyou.


Never Give Up Half Way Through!

2006-03-03
sorry,i forgot to rate. oh and i forgot to say.its important not to give up half way through,when things start looking up,dont give up.


Never Give Up Half Way Through!

2006-03-03
wow,things have to get worse to get better and it seems things are getting better for alex and i hope they do,i hope alex things do get better but once again zoya,great poetry.


Woman Burning Bright!

2006-03-03
you are amazing with imagery you really are.
from angel.


MISTY VALLEY

2006-03-03
yet more great imagery.i love it.
(((hugs)))
love angel.


Nocturne

2006-03-03
i struggle to really read poems,i mean i do read them but i sometimes struggle to really understand and i truly understand this one,i mean i can nearly feel the fog and hear the silence,its just like 'wow'.

(((hugs)))
love angel.


Betrayed

2006-03-03
everything you write is so brilliant,its amazing,i feel that this means so much.thankyou for recomending it to me.


Pictures in my mind

2006-03-01
great *bookmarked*


WHO AM I?

2006-02-20
beautiful.


THOUGHTS

2006-02-20
as i started reading this i felt a sense of freedom.

its puts amazing images in my mind.

thanks,angel.


The Pacific Bay

2006-02-20
great imagery,loved it.

from angel.