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A Letter to Matthew

2009-08-07
Touching poem i must say and a really personal one. Don't worry he will come back just be faithful and pray to God for him has you have done in this poem.


Eccentricity

2009-07-21
This is a good poem about the disadvantages of being a good person. In everything we the are advantages and disadvantages. Nice write here its good


Demon's Corral

2009-07-21
lovely poem, and easy to read


Ethereal

2009-07-21
A very good descriptive poem which makes the reader wonder and think about this Ethereal. Very good poen here


Empathica Remnants Of Rotting Poet

2009-07-21
Such a sweet poem to read i like the ryhmes and the couplets. The third verse has a very deep meaning than you can imagine.


Bad Stuff, Good Stuff

2009-06-26
This a lovely poem u should make sure that ur good stuff weighs more than your bad stuff. Very simple poem its good


Twarted Tiger[Repost]

2009-06-15
interesting poem here and a nice story i like it


Fumes of the Grave

2009-06-15
A very good poem i like the use of language though hard.


Mother Nature and Water, the Elixir of Life

2008-06-02
You describe situations well and you went all around welldone.


A Journey to Love

2007-09-20
This is lovely it shows how much a female can love a male.


A Man's Heart (Co-Write Rik & F.i.in.e Moods)

2007-09-20
This tells youths about the ingredients of a sweet life and how in a special way to make heaven. This is a very fine collabo


74) Forgive Love

2007-07-31
touching moving and emotional


Journeying Trials

2007-07-31
this is a very good didatic poem if some reads this it might change the person's life and altitude.
You have written a very nice and simple piece


Wander

2007-07-11
cool poem there is an atmosphere of love in it short and beautiful


Verdant Fields Of Love a Cowrite by Katherine Lockhart and M.A.Meddings

2007-07-11
this is a lovely sonnet you guys are very good in cowrites i must say


Happiness

2007-06-12
I like the repetition and the way u wrote this poem the word are very simple and lovely


Dejavu

2007-06-12
Good poem i love the ryhmes and inserting a little theme about love makes it perfect


GRRRRRRRRRR!

2007-05-30
U should by a new one if it is loan just get it. My dad and i have always bee disagreeing on the issue of his ramshackle car he says there is no money to buy a new car and he would not take loans i hope that will not be your answer.

I love the topic of this poem


For ever And Forever by M.A.Meddings

2007-05-03
nakedness of the opposite is it that interesting. With due respect sir is it dat u were piping and the lady and if so is it right.
Lovely poem i respect it


A beautiful world

2007-05-03
Cool i like it is really a beautifull world all lines are the best


Way Back When (co-write with Michael Meddings)

2007-05-01
this is great i like the story i will read reread and read again. The way to go lol


As Do Thee Enchant Me Now by M.A.Meddings

2007-04-25
this is a good poem i feel it


Hells angels

2007-04-20
This is great!


Heat

2007-04-20
yah that is it the red colour i mean.
nice poem it is heaty


Cool Light

2007-04-17
Beauriful poem! the physical stucture is commendable .
Nice poems i respect it


His Gifts

2007-04-17
Cool! fast quick and smooth.


O Cruel!

2007-04-17
another good poem from u again. Indeed it is cruel


If You Could Really See

2007-04-11
This is nice a great poem u have written

If u could really see
that your poem is more than what u see


She Was Robbed

2007-04-11
Nice poem well i am sure she would get over it as time goes by. You have written a simple, comprehensive and pitiful poem. I respect it


The Englishman and The Rose

2007-04-11
this is very lovely. I like the way u write this poem i was exepecting a ballad but u link them with some nonliving things and that is really unique.


Softly I Come To You ( cinquain poem co-write with Michael Meddings)

2007-04-05
This is nice cool and beautiful. Love is important in once life if u dont have one i think u are missin is'nt?


The Missing Poem

2007-03-29
this is a straight foward poem. Sometimes a group of people or things are always complete but there will always be something missing. I this scenario it is a missing poem. But what about the Super Eagles?


Timeless Rose

2007-03-29
This is a nice and lovely poem. i like it


I am just a boy...

2007-03-28
In a way your poems are always unique. i like it.


Annoying Telephone Frustration[Tanka]

2007-03-28
This tanka though short has very important and vast meaning. I agree with the last two sentences


a path

2007-03-28
This is a very serious poem. And it gives the reader a deep thought.


My Sail...My Story

2007-03-26
This is great u used ur poem to tell us about life.
Omo i gbadun this poem o.
A poem very didactic poem


Deep Inside by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-23
this is verily and truely written. I like it


KINDNESS (acrostic)

2007-03-23
this is a nice threat. It should be read by everybody before he/she brush his/her teeth.
I completely concur with you. But sometimes when you show kindness to some people the tend to pay you back with evil.


Every tone they bring

2007-03-19
Very nice poem especially the rhymes u constructed this poem well i like it


Small Seedling Soul

2007-03-19
Nice poem short and comprehensive. I respect it


Only One[Ours Is A True Love Born]

2007-03-19
Nice poem simple and rhythmic.
This is what couples believe and assert when the first meet or in their early relationship. Later they start to fall apart.


Those Things You Do

2007-03-19
Surely the personae is really in love. Lovely piece of poem.


Love, Hate and Vendetta

2007-03-14
Nice u have spoken for us all. This is great!


10th, March Uprising Day

2007-03-10
Memory will long run for ever u have told and reminded your people who they are and where there are coming from. i like this poem


Alive by M,A.Meddings

2007-03-10
i swear any girl lady or damsel this poem is written to will fall for it. She will melt! yes she will. Try it.
This is a very good poem ful of assonance alliteration and ryhthm.
I respect it


The Signature of Our Souls

2007-03-07
wow this is very nice i like it.


searching

2007-03-07
We all search for some in life the prayer is that what we are searchin for should be searchable or seeable.
A well written piece. I respect it.


Murum Sarciendum

2007-03-07
Nice innovation i like it. This is really good


Harmonising Echoes[Co-write with KJC]

2007-03-07
This is a well written co write i like it. When we work in harmony things will get better.