| Lovely July
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2025-07-16
Nature always seems to come to the rescue, doesn't it? I try to make a point of really seeing the pond and woods behind my house every day. Hidden in there is consolation, wonder, and a soft assurance that everything is going to be okay.
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| WORDS
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2025-07-16
Enjoying the end-rhymes interspersed throughout the poem. Analogy of the white-space in contrast to the words on the page and the comparison of the poet to a jeweler, as craftsman, is effective and holds your poem together to the end.
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| POETRY DISPLACEMENT
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2025-07-16
I love the cadence and rhyme of ''There's no rewind on a poetry mind.'' Seems to me you still have one--a poetry mind, that is.
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| Frames
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2025-07-16
Impressive vignette. Progresses rapidly down the page, drawing the reader into the actions and observations of two creative people and their reaction to one another and to their craft.
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| In a Desolate Landscape
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2025-07-16
Compelling images, especially ''a lone sharp star.''
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| Ankle Deep
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2025-07-16
Skillfully composed. Thoughtful and throught-provoking. Sometimes it's difficult when someone seems to want you to do something about their sadness.
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| Peace In The Rain
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2025-07-16
Skilled structuring. Nice rhyme scheme. I'm partial to rainy days, so always gravitate to poems about it. Nice work.
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