| aftercare
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2026-07-23
I love the comparison between the poem and the scab
unusual, for me it makes it raw and fleshy
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| Occidental Bulls
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2026-07-20
very good indeed
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| Glorified Memories
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2026-07-19
are we interconnected ? are memories interconnected ? because I made up my mind about it too
history and memory are not the same
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| daze
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2026-07-19
your force me to find new ways to understand
the meanings, sometimes I go in the wrong direction
sometimes it is not a matter of difficulties but a matter of finding easy ways
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| MY BOOK LATEST NEWS!
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2026-07-19
good one! you did it...
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| winter
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2026-07-18
very good, thank you
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| world wide apart
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2026-07-17
it's true for us ! and that's already a beginning
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| C H E S S - its brother & sister
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2026-07-15
indeed
to make more bodies, one needs at least two bodies (male and female)
but to make more mind, you cannot mix 2 minds together and expect a new mind to appear
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| Beef
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2026-07-15
Glad to read you again !
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| REMEMBER?
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2026-07-15
in remember, there is the word member
i am member of this club, after a while I quit
now, I am a re-member again lol
i am re-clubbing
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| My God is the Sun
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2026-07-15
people in Belgium love the sun for travelling and holidays but they come back to Belgium for work where it rains a lot..so how do you explain that, it should rain only during the nights !
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| where it came from
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2026-07-14
that it can leave the room
without losing its centre,
but not so much
that it forgets where it came from.
if it is metaphorical, what does it mean concretely ?
losing its centre? its balance as human?
and why a man would loose his balance getting out of the room ?
too much possibilities don't allow me to fix my ideas or may I say, I miss the context...
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| GONE ARE THE REGRETFUL DAISIES
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2026-07-13
genes are gones
by metamorphosis
love can be painful too
when you love someone who is ill
or hurt
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| The Poor and Damned
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2026-07-11
You talked about my style, but I love your style too, some phrases end up unfinished, it's up to the readers to imagine the end, that's how I get the message
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| is time an illusion ?
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2026-07-10
karma is about morality and morality depends on your beliefs but causes and consequences can be mechanical following the rules of physics, time is real like mechanic is real but if you say that time is unreal you must be more real than time to say that ?
what is more real than time that goes by? eternity when time is dead ? I don't think so
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| if God was the answer given to my 6 years old son before he stops believing in Santa Claus
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2026-07-08
IT'S GOD'S LOGIC ONLY IF GOD EXISTS
human sciences don't make such hypothesis to explain the malnutrition and poverty on Earth !
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| C H E S S - its brother & sister
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2026-07-07
Body Chess? where is the mind ?
the rules are simple, take the ball and shoot it into the goal of the enemy
c.hermann c.hesse
Chairman Chesse
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| TO KNOW TO THINK THEY KNOW
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2026-07-07
the first victims of the overconfident persons are not the tolerant people who bear persons like that but the overconfident people themselves by trying things that exceed their abilities, right ?
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| ULTRACREPIDARIAN
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2026-07-07
very thoughtful text
may I add:
there was in France a very famous actor in the mid fifties (Jean Gabin) who sang a song: what I know is that I don't know but that truth, I know it for sure
and the philosopher Socrates said: learn to know yourself (connais toi toi-même)
today's philosophers (far-off of the golden age of the Ancient Greeks, when philosophy was a serious thing) have an opinion on everything...?
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| the philosophy of stealing
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2026-07-07
if I may add
by the way
it is not because you have a job that you don't steal ! you can do both ...someone who gets an honest job is not always an honest man but can be a (pathological) thief who doesn't want to be on the run after the risks he took !
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| by their fruit
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2026-07-07
like Adam and Eve
how were they known ?
by their sin, by their fruit ?
a sinfruit
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| A Poem Written After Filtering My Facebook Friend List
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2026-07-07
i have been scraped off from Facebook, the team says, I am not a true profile
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| THE RED TEMPTRESS
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2026-07-06
very good indeed
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| The Flag of Love
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2026-07-05
very good
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| An Artist’s Eye is Like a Camera
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2026-07-04
very good indeed
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| seasonal
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2026-07-03
very good indeed.
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| Building new things with old things
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2026-07-03
Sorry Rik, but I am not sure I understood what you meant to be understood
what is OLD MONEY ? Money made by people like Onassis or Citizen Kane (Hearst)?
when was created the Forbes' list and how long is staying the old money vs the new money...I am curious to know if people very rich today will stay very rich in 50 years (in the same Forbes' list) ? things move so fast...they yet have the money for not working during 100 years and yet they disappear from the list...
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| deign to entertain
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2026-07-02
it looks like but that is my personal opinion it is written with an ...an old-fashioned writing style would be more precise, obsequious, precious, in an mannerism style, I can see the old mansion from the entrance gate if you don't mind
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| by the time i reach the corner
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2026-07-02
j'aime bien la traduction en français mais pour le patois wallon, je ne peux pas t'aider
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| Gone
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2026-07-02
I can't find such superlative words to describe the quality of your poem
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| by the time i reach the corner
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2026-07-01
very complex imagery
and sophisticated sentences...
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| Emergence
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2026-07-01
enigmatic but not in the words in the meaning
What is not written now?
What is it that you don't write?
vague because there is a lack of discernement
and the author cannot say more ?
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| Where The Moon Dwells
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2026-07-01
made me think of Indonesia and the monsoons
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| Meaning of
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2026-06-30
at first read, for my level in English and the lack of knowledge in the colloquial statements, it was difficult to understand
now I'll cheat and need an AI to get a good translation, hope the AI doesn't transform the original
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| random thought
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2026-06-29
sad, he is not with us anymore
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| I WERE USED TO FANTERSY THNIKING
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2026-06-29
I like to decipher your poems
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| Too Many Forty-Sevens
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2026-06-28
sorry to ask you but what does 47 means in the context ?
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| Are you pointing at me?
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2026-06-26
Vague posts and vague poems is not very precise as definitions, indeed, what do you call "a vague post or poem?"
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| Participant Observation
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2026-06-26
what a memory it must be...but a tough life though ? for me, I think
i tend to make others' lives, dreams
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| truth al fresco
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2026-06-25
truth is hidden by noise indeed
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| TRAITS I DO NOT WANT
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2026-06-24
very good
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| Intelligent creatures
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2026-06-23
about crows
how physicians looked like crows during the great plague
so are they announcing bad news ?
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| bookends of his frame
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2026-06-23
I was puzzled by your introduction a biological dad, may I know more about?
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| The Laboratory
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2026-06-23
something new for your age ! that's the sentence I was missing for my personal comprehension !
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| Inslumnational Underground
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2026-06-23
inslumbering: insurrection by dreaming that's what your title made me think of
slumbering insurrection: revolts thru dreams
now after reading the title, I read the text
i love the mix of steel and flesh and the metaphorical you gave to the rest: the trigger, that could find its way to psychoanalysis
I found it dement but so real, attack on mind !
definitely booked !
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| disinhibition
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2026-06-23
the last three phrases like notes in a song
" Nor shady craft to cheat their readers fine—
It is the only place where truth can beat,
A prison wall around that fragile shrine."
has bluffed my face
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| Wayward
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2026-06-22
yes, it made me uneasy
truth for everybody or just for some ?
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| Angel Dust Over Shitville
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2026-06-22
I still wonder, does shitville exist for real ? I love your sensational style ! even when I don't understand it, I like to read it to retake what Sameen said about one of my poems
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| Dear God
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2026-06-22
exactly, all the moments are important and some are memorable, there is no final judgment, no final victory or defeat (Bill Clinton)
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| Last Call
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2026-06-22
I hope your poems will make you successful, For me you deserve it, you've put so much effort into it, you are competent, capable, clever and you had something new to these field
cheers !
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from Belgium