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The latest comments that Mirage has written.

O'Bayana

2011-12-12
Thanks guys! :))
This isn't just a poem, it's also an experience I had yesterday, connecting to a beautiful tree. It had tremendous surprises for me and my consiousness, when we shared a moment in time... That's how the poem was born. :)


BE YOURSELF

2011-12-11
Love this poem - so true!


Her Tree

2011-12-11
I truly resonate with your beautiful poem "Her Tree", because it's like you were writing about me... ;)
I wrote a tree poem today, after having a special experience connecting to a tree...


A Study in Spaces

2011-11-26
Meditative poetry. I like it.
*nice empty space*
(like the buddhist use to say ;)


Anything

2011-11-25
Yes - anything is possible!


Rock Springs Stream

2011-11-25
Beautiful! :)


Rose Hope

2006-11-01
Sweet! :-)

Good writing.


Just Talk To Him

2006-11-01
Great!
Flowing and true.

*Bookmarked*


Appreciation

2006-11-01
Don't we all long for approval...

"...the privilage to care of my giving heart"
I like that very much Malin :)

*LOVE*


Through everything

2006-11-01
Beautiful writing!

"There are no limits
no force strong enough
to destroy what love is made of"

So true and good for the mind to ponder over...


Seeking Happiness

2006-11-01
A full circle indeed!

To seek happiness from within:
so wise and good! :-)

"To stop and savour the moment that was,
And now I do exactly what I want to do.../
...Why did I lose all those years?
In pursuit of a mirage..."
EXACTLY Zoya:
The happiness-energy is in THE PRESENT,
inside at the core of our own heart!

A very good write filled with important realizations.


Ruins of Konarak (poetic erotica carved in stone)

2006-11-01
Amazing and so very beautiful!

Thank you for taking me there...

~~~~LOVE~~~


moving on

2006-10-29
A little beauty this piece!

I like very much to ponder
the invisible pain...

The end part hits me with sorrow...


Life and other magic tricks

2006-08-09
Life as a magic trick... I just love this piece; the picture and perspective is really a special one.

And I want to be at the edge too!, looking the magician in the eyes!

Bookmarked.


Life and other magic tricks

2006-08-09
ILife as a magic trick... I just love this piece; the picture and perspective is really a special one.

And I want to be at the edge too!, looking the magician in the eyes!

Bookmarked.


Soulful

2006-08-04
Love the saxophone
Soulful is a wonderful word!


You Can't Take Away My Soul

2006-08-04
So beautiful
So true!!
Effortlessly written, the whole piece it seems.


Wind of change

2006-08-04
Absolutely beautiful!
Especially the two last stanzas.
Just love it (-:


Insomnia

2006-07-09
I know how your feel - -

Why don't you try
to just relax your mind...
(After your've thrown out the zombie :)


Moon ray

2006-07-08
Just beautiful!
Yes, the moon is ever immaculate!


Watching other who lives

2006-07-08
A split soul...
Aren't they everywhere nowadays?

Good writing; you can feel the pain and see the tears when you read this poem.


ALONE

2006-07-04
So Time itself, is your enemy? Allow me to doubt it (-:

Yes... who knows your real self?
That IS the question...

Goood writing! Makes my mind turn on.


Sisters

2006-06-15
Lovely!

"I love us deeply " is such a powerful and very good expression, it should be used more often. :)


Savage

2006-06-12
I know, so true so true...

This so very poignant, sad and yet beautiful poem reminds me.., of how much joy the Native Americans has given me, through what is left of there culture in writings and other stuff.
I wish I were a Native American in a former life, before all this rape and enslavery started!


You should really be proud to be a part of that culture! Nice name by the way (-:


My toe..

2006-06-12
Aren't those cats just lovely!
Each one a personality of its own.

This one pretending very seriously a catch-a-toe-mouse-gamel (-:


Souls on Fire

2006-06-12
Souls on fire... hot indeed!

A wonderful write, especially
the last stanza.


I will survive

2006-06-12
Great write Malin!

"As the spirit inside me sings to me..."
That is so beautiful. A true survival poem, filled with the awesome strength of the spirit!


A letter to my brain

2006-06-11
Oh, this is so good!
Talking to your brain
as its boss...

I hope for a new report
when the meditation sessions
have been tried... :))


Spring of Desire

2006-06-11
"Love oozed out of every pore
Love was in our very core..."

What a wonderful poem
burning out of the screen...
Love the heading!


I say yes to ecstasy

2006-06-11
Yes - always say yes to ecstacy! :)

And yes - the beauty IS within us...


We could be...

2006-06-11
"we could be angels..."
A beatiful poem!


Autumn Leaves

2006-06-11
I agree with you all the way! Autumn leaves are the most beatiful of things...

"Showing the world their last bit of passion
Before dying out..."
Shouldn't we humans do that too?!


Astral Plane

2006-06-11
I wish I could do it too.

It gives me hope that you can.
(I have to practice more often! :)


Confusion

2006-05-15
You are right: there is really confusion in the world about why we are here, and who we are... Everybody seems to be guessing.

Will we never know? I'm not so sure about that... Maybe we are just looking in the wrong place, due to the inner confusion of the mind; the focus of separation...

Keep writing, you are good!


Come Together

2006-05-15
Beautifully written.
Yes, cyberspace will unite people all over the world in new ways.
Let the world be one EVERY DAY! :-)


Who are we to Judge

2006-05-14
Well written!

Yes, why do we judge? It seems we have a constant and urgent need to judge. All the time, in our heads.
Judging others, judging ourselves.
Comparing comparing. Endlessly.

Those contant judgmental thought-chains are draining us. No wonder we feel exhausted, many of us!
I wish we could switch to the channel
COMPASSION instead :-)


Searching for that someone special

2006-05-12
Well written!

Yes, what if we end up with empty hands and broken visions? Maybe the fear to lose the dream hold us back. Fear can stop you from many important things...
Never give up! Never give in to fear! Keep the search going! **HUGS**


Oh God, Please--

2006-05-11
To live volcanic - - -
I like that!

Her heart seems to be a rollercoaster,
a really dangereous one!! :)


Opal Sunset

2006-05-09
Opal sunsets... Vivid!
A glowing haiku.


Take me somewhere...

2006-05-09
That inner yearning... beautifully expressed in this poem, that could also be made to a song! :)

One day I believe we will all fly high, free and light-hearted... butterflies of the soul...


Heart to Heart, Soul to Soul

2006-05-09
Very beautiful and highly inspiring!
"soul to soul" - I love that expression

Soul-family members always find eachother again, no matter how far they've travelled apart in the deep corridors of time and space... :)))


Mustard Fields of Kashmir

2006-05-04
Beautifully written, with the horror-turn and all...

Is is said that there are "power points" on the earth, where events happens in a speed-up fashion - no matter if the events are constructive or destructive! ALL activity on those power spots are said to materialize very quickly and easy.
It could be that the Mustered Fields of Kashmir is such a power point!

So eventually I believe it will turn into paradise - once again! :))


Affair of the Air

2006-05-04
Focused and excellent!
The computer age captured so well in a few lines.


All or None

2006-05-03
How to love in a proper way?
..."Then you say, slow down, my love,
Don't love me anymore."...

Well, who said it was going to be easy?
Love is the Lesson here, and it is a hard one. An amazing maze with an awesome gift at its heart... :))

Anyway; A very beautiful poem!

(Never be afraid to love "too much", even if the other person is!)


Oh I want

2006-04-25
*HOT*
Nice piece. :))


Mass Crime

2006-04-25
You write:
"Do they ever reap
The harvest of the seeds
of murder, crime and greed
they've sown?"

Yes, I think they will indeed!!!
If not by their own conscience already in this life - they will the day they die!!
Those who were clinically dead and came back tells us their experience again and again:
That you go trough EVERY MOMENT OF YOUR LIFE, not only from the standpoint of how it were in physical life, but from inside every creature that you met, that you affected in some way... INSIDE FROM THEIR VIEWPOINT!!!
So, everything we give out really comes back to us... If we do not learn sooner, we learn and understand at that "day of examination".
And they tell that you are your own judge... and a very hard judge indeed...
I think this very possibly can be true. So many people all over the world tell the same story, no matter what religion, atheist or not...

So we have everything to gain with doing GOOD in the world, no matter what...

Thank you for sharing this very well-written text, with so many extraordinary important questions.


Eternal Flame

2006-04-24
Beautiful... I stay with it for a while...

"An eternal, burning flame
Shining bright
To find your way home"...


Crease

2006-04-16
Deep about the illusion...
"What keeps me going is these limitations, and the fallacy of a dream."
Interesting!


The girl I used to be

2006-04-15
I find both mystery and magic in this original poem. I love trees... so it is easy for me to embrace your beautiful writing about it.


Star boy

2006-04-15
This one I like so much!
"That map is not mine, Star boy." Wonderful.
And the last line goes out with such a strong vibration.