Autumn Leaves
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2006-06-11 wow, this is so amazing :D i love autumn it has to be the best season ever.
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She's back
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2006-04-24 ah a female adonis. seems like this person has gone from lust into love. very cleverfully done. love it.
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its rare,
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2006-02-20 very truthful poem about who actually means what they say. and sometimes the kindest words hurt more than the nastiest.
well done :D
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A song for the Damned
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2006-02-08 oooo very chilling. i like it :)
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A dream
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2006-02-08 it had an effect on you to not take him for granted. to enjoy being with him. etc.
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Crying Relief
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2006-02-08 awwwww *hugs you* this sounds really really sound strong imagery. the colour grey comes to mind.
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birds of prey
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2006-02-08 ooooo very good poem. very metaphorical aswell of perceptions of right and wrong, good and evil.
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Longing by the Mountain Stream
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2006-01-16 urgh :P omg, that so sensual, and so poetically beautiful. i would love to be in that scene you painted, in the countryside, with running streams and stuff. gorgeous
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I Often Wonder...
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2006-01-15 maybe...you're looking for the answer
to the big question
why are we here
what is the meaning of life
?
anyway, bloody good poem, as always. well done. superb.
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With
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2006-01-15 awww it's so pretty :) well done
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WHO AM I?
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2005-12-15 wow, sweetie, that was so deep and mystical. it does make you wonder about things and about who we are as ppl.
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The Calm and the Turbulent Sea
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2005-12-15 how?? how on earth can you make summin like the sea into something so sensual and ravaging, utter brilliance, my dear :D
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live on
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2005-12-04 i watered up when i read this. you have such strength, talent and life within you. just wow....
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Before Words
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2005-12-04 so mellow, so dramatic, so poigant, well done my lil chick pea lol
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Would you be me
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2005-11-04 wow. this was really really good. well done :)
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Mother and Son
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2005-11-04 oh wow. what a tender poem. i bet she was right behind your shoulder when you were writing that, smiling at you. even though she's gone, doesn't mean she stopped loving you. and we all make mistakes when we're young and hurt out parents alot. but....when you're young you don't realise. but when you grow up, it all comes back. and that's where regrets are formed. but it's normal and everyone goes through it one way or another.
*much hugs*
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Trust
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2005-11-04 well sometimes when we don't tell that someone how we feel, how can we expect them to. :)
but all in all great poem :)
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Feelings
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2005-11-04 tricky situation there. one i think many with identify with, i wish i could help you, but unfortuently, it's one of those things you need to decide yourself, meep :(
keep it up :)
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Snowfall
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2005-10-31 awww i love fall. but snow is better i gotta admit lol. you make it all come alive in my mind. oh so pretty. well done :D
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Past Regrets
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2005-10-25 very true, when we're young we all do some silly things lol. but the real way to deal with past regrets is to just accept we have regrets. to point is to make up for them :)
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untitled.......
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2005-10-24 yeh, even i'm lost with this one. bit choatic.
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TEARS UPON MY CHEEK
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2005-10-14 *claps hands in amazement*
i even feel kinda wrong for what i see as an interruption of the love in this page, here on my screen, but i just had to say....you clearly have found your true soulmate :) and i hope all best for you and your husband, though i think you've already got it :)
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Lost In My Thought's
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2005-10-14 i do love trust. it is a great thing to have, in this world of lies.
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After All These Years
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2005-10-14 oh wow, i hope me and my buck is like that in 40 years time :)
lovely poem, very tender and very loving.
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Food For Thought
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2005-10-12 sometimes when we feel moments of unease, writing can really help release the tension inside. and this is when we get some real jewels :) well done
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Terminal Interface
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2005-10-12 i like how the paragraphs if you look at the length at the poem looks like a timeglass. how clever is that. i don't know if that waswhat you wanted to get. but i really really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem
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Death is an Insomniac's Dream
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2005-10-08 i don't think anyone actually read this properly....this was so upsetting and so sad. you can tell that you are still in so much pain. and this is expressed so brutually raw in this poem.
sends much love
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SHOOTING STAR
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2005-10-07 very wonderful poem. makes you want to sit and be still and just wonder about these types of things. i've noticed on your poetry page, you've only got 3 poems, please post some more as i would love to read some more of your work :)
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I need you
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2005-10-07 mmmm....i feel like this about a guy i know aswell....those i think different circumstances to the poem. but still the feelings are the same. your capture the emotion so well
well done :)
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Please
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2005-10-04 this one i don't think is one of your best. as it didn't flow right and it was bitty. ermm...i suggest prehaps rewriting this one or summin. i'm not sure how you could save this one. :(
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Dark autumn night.
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2005-10-04 *snuggles* awwww poor one, i hope you find someone better for you to love :) and for them to love you in return
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If I told you...?
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2005-10-04 mmmm i've had this....and no matter what i told him, it didn't change anything
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Don't rape me.
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2005-10-04 i know this cry too well....and each day the memories don't go away.
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Unkown source of emotionless
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2005-10-04 wow....you can really feel the strong emotion of emptness but an underlying slight of emotion of sadness. this is a very intriging poem well done :)
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Life and love
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2005-10-03 in life there is only love, in love there is only life.
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Forever in my heart...
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2005-10-03 sometimes the best way to deal is to write down how you feel and i don;t think you could do any better at doing at that as you have done in this poem.
and sometimes the best way to deal is also the hardest. so i give you my warmest regards and hugs
xxx
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Rogie
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2005-10-03 i don't see what the title of the poem means. kinda through me off the poem :(
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away
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2005-09-27 *has to read again* life is crap, and crap things happen in life. but that lil elf should try and get some courage and move from his safe spot, maybe he won't get hurt or shot :)
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As Poets
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2005-09-27 you captured being a poet so well there. poetry is in the soul.
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I WANT TO SLEEP
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2005-09-27 it's horrible when you having trouble getting to sleep. you try everything, even some ridiculous things, just to get some sleep. the feeling of desperation seems to come through too.
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I FEAR THE DEMONS
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2005-09-27 FIGHT! fight, i say. the demons inside can be defeated, have no fear.
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My greatest fear.
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2005-09-27 mmm, losing that loving feeling. it's a fear v few i think would ever feel. i can't imagine what that must be like. keep up the good work
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You...
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2005-09-27 ohhh....gorgeous *applauds* its so wistful. mooning over that one person. eee it's so good :)
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Flawed to Perfection
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2005-09-27 ..flawed perfection :)
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REPLACEMENT CHILD {I am Vincent number two}
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2005-08-01 wow, it must be so confusing ya know, i cant believe your parents would do that to you. must really mess with your head.
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Uncertain
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2005-08-01 i love this, its soo filled with imagery that you want to keep in your mind for years to come.
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Twisted~~~~~~~
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2005-07-26 ah yes yes yes, loved this poem ALOT
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2005-07-26 morning tv? prehaps?
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InJestion
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2005-07-26 fantastic way to express life today. and what we do reguarly untilmatly destoys us.
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Remember?
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2005-07-15 i like the tenderness of this poem. of your love for that person. well done :)
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