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jacy

36 years old from England


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Autumn Leaves

2006-06-11
wow, this is so amazing :D i love autumn it has to be the best season ever.


She's back

2006-04-24
ah a female adonis. seems like this person has gone from lust into love. very cleverfully done. love it.


its rare,

2006-02-20
very truthful poem about who actually means what they say. and sometimes the kindest words hurt more than the nastiest.

well done :D


A song for the Damned

2006-02-08
oooo very chilling. i like it :)


A dream

2006-02-08
it had an effect on you to not take him for granted. to enjoy being with him. etc.


Crying Relief

2006-02-08
awwwww *hugs you* this sounds really really sound strong imagery. the colour grey comes to mind.


birds of prey

2006-02-08
ooooo very good poem. very metaphorical aswell of perceptions of right and wrong, good and evil.


Longing by the Mountain Stream

2006-01-16
urgh :P omg, that so sensual, and so poetically beautiful. i would love to be in that scene you painted, in the countryside, with running streams and stuff. gorgeous


I Often Wonder...

2006-01-15
maybe...you're looking for the answer
to the big question

why are we here
what is the meaning of life

?
anyway, bloody good poem, as always. well done. superb.


With

2006-01-15
awww it's so pretty :) well done


WHO AM I?

2005-12-15
wow, sweetie, that was so deep and mystical. it does make you wonder about things and about who we are as ppl.


The Calm and the Turbulent Sea

2005-12-15
how?? how on earth can you make summin like the sea into something so sensual and ravaging, utter brilliance, my dear :D


live on

2005-12-04
i watered up when i read this. you have such strength, talent and life within you. just wow....


Before Words

2005-12-04
so mellow, so dramatic, so poigant, well done my lil chick pea lol


Would you be me

2005-11-04
wow. this was really really good. well done :)


Mother and Son

2005-11-04
oh wow. what a tender poem. i bet she was right behind your shoulder when you were writing that, smiling at you. even though she's gone, doesn't mean she stopped loving you. and we all make mistakes when we're young and hurt out parents alot. but....when you're young you don't realise. but when you grow up, it all comes back. and that's where regrets are formed. but it's normal and everyone goes through it one way or another.

*much hugs*


Trust

2005-11-04
well sometimes when we don't tell that someone how we feel, how can we expect them to. :)

but all in all great poem :)


Feelings

2005-11-04
tricky situation there. one i think many with identify with, i wish i could help you, but unfortuently, it's one of those things you need to decide yourself, meep :(

keep it up :)


Snowfall

2005-10-31
awww i love fall. but snow is better i gotta admit lol. you make it all come alive in my mind. oh so pretty. well done :D


Past Regrets

2005-10-25
very true, when we're young we all do some silly things lol. but the real way to deal with past regrets is to just accept we have regrets. to point is to make up for them :)


untitled.......

2005-10-24
yeh, even i'm lost with this one. bit choatic.


TEARS UPON MY CHEEK

2005-10-14
*claps hands in amazement*
i even feel kinda wrong for what i see as an interruption of the love in this page, here on my screen, but i just had to say....you clearly have found your true soulmate :) and i hope all best for you and your husband, though i think you've already got it :)


Lost In My Thought's

2005-10-14
i do love trust. it is a great thing to have, in this world of lies.


After All These Years

2005-10-14
oh wow, i hope me and my buck is like that in 40 years time :)

lovely poem, very tender and very loving.


Food For Thought

2005-10-12
sometimes when we feel moments of unease, writing can really help release the tension inside. and this is when we get some real jewels :) well done


Terminal Interface

2005-10-12
i like how the paragraphs if you look at the length at the poem looks like a timeglass. how clever is that. i don't know if that waswhat you wanted to get. but i really really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem


Death is an Insomniac's Dream

2005-10-08
i don't think anyone actually read this properly....this was so upsetting and so sad. you can tell that you are still in so much pain. and this is expressed so brutually raw in this poem.

sends much love


SHOOTING STAR

2005-10-07
very wonderful poem. makes you want to sit and be still and just wonder about these types of things. i've noticed on your poetry page, you've only got 3 poems, please post some more as i would love to read some more of your work :)


I need you

2005-10-07
mmmm....i feel like this about a guy i know aswell....those i think different circumstances to the poem. but still the feelings are the same. your capture the emotion so well
well done :)


Please

2005-10-04
this one i don't think is one of your best. as it didn't flow right and it was bitty. ermm...i suggest prehaps rewriting this one or summin. i'm not sure how you could save this one. :(


Dark autumn night.

2005-10-04
*snuggles* awwww poor one, i hope you find someone better for you to love :) and for them to love you in return


If I told you...?

2005-10-04
mmmm i've had this....and no matter what i told him, it didn't change anything


Don't rape me.

2005-10-04
i know this cry too well....and each day the memories don't go away.


Unkown source of emotionless

2005-10-04
wow....you can really feel the strong emotion of emptness but an underlying slight of emotion of sadness. this is a very intriging poem well done :)


Life and love

2005-10-03
in life there is only love, in love there is only life.


Forever in my heart...

2005-10-03
sometimes the best way to deal is to write down how you feel and i don;t think you could do any better at doing at that as you have done in this poem.

and sometimes the best way to deal is also the hardest. so i give you my warmest regards and hugs

xxx


Rogie

2005-10-03
i don't see what the title of the poem means. kinda through me off the poem :(


away

2005-09-27
*has to read again* life is crap, and crap things happen in life. but that lil elf should try and get some courage and move from his safe spot, maybe he won't get hurt or shot :)


As Poets

2005-09-27
you captured being a poet so well there. poetry is in the soul.


I WANT TO SLEEP

2005-09-27
it's horrible when you having trouble getting to sleep. you try everything, even some ridiculous things, just to get some sleep. the feeling of desperation seems to come through too.


I FEAR THE DEMONS

2005-09-27
FIGHT! fight, i say. the demons inside can be defeated, have no fear.


My greatest fear.

2005-09-27
mmm, losing that loving feeling. it's a fear v few i think would ever feel. i can't imagine what that must be like. keep up the good work


You...

2005-09-27
ohhh....gorgeous *applauds* its so wistful. mooning over that one person. eee it's so good :)


Flawed to Perfection

2005-09-27
..flawed perfection :)


REPLACEMENT CHILD {I am Vincent number two}

2005-08-01
wow, it must be so confusing ya know, i cant believe your parents would do that to you. must really mess with your head.


Uncertain

2005-08-01
i love this, its soo filled with imagery that you want to keep in your mind for years to come.


Twisted~~~~~~~

2005-07-26
ah yes yes yes, loved this poem ALOT


!

2005-07-26
morning tv? prehaps?


InJestion

2005-07-26
fantastic way to express life today. and what we do reguarly untilmatly destoys us.


Remember?

2005-07-15
i like the tenderness of this poem. of your love for that person. well done :)