| Baptism
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2013-06-02
Wonderful poem! Great imagery and a lot of divine sense. As for me, I attend the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, and I'm now experimenting with writing Church poems, i.e. the poems connected with the teachings and doctrine of a particular Christian Church (LDS, I mean).
And I'm also trying to apply this experience to the development of my own literary concept.
If it's not a secret, which Church do you attend? If you don't wish to give forth this information, you can write me a private message. Anyway, sorry for the question.
Joan Black
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| WEEPING TREES WILLOW
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2013-03-01
Well crafted, a little sad and MAGNIFICENT!
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| Solemn survival
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2012-12-02
Great text, a very philosophic one.
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| The Heart of a Woman
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2012-11-27
Absolutely wonderful. This poem made tears well up in my eyes. I wish, there'd be more poems like that on Poetbay. The future belongs to poets like you, Amy. The magnificence and spirituality of this poem can hardly be overestimated.
Joan Black
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| Your Love, reward or else penalty?
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2012-09-27
Absolutely wonderful use of words, rhymes and very brilliant style!
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| Nuffink Matterz
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2012-08-21
The poem is nicely rhymed and elaborately composed. Great work!
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| First Day
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2012-05-20
I liked it very much!
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| Nothing there
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2012-03-10
Great imagery, sad and a perfect picture of real sadness and moral devastation.
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| VICTIM OF MARRIAGE 5
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2011-08-20
This poem is topical and burning, because nowadays children, as they grow up, forget about their aged parents and leave them. Great job!
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| I can(t)
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2011-05-04
Very wise and actual words.
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| Sitting in the Ruins under a Rose Window of a long ago fallen Stonechurch
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2010-07-08
At the end of your poem you play with the words "joyful" and "joyous", and that's very nice!
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| See the Light in the Other Window
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2010-07-08
Occasional rhymes are nicely combined with the unrhymed lines. Good!
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| Crucifixiation
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2010-07-08
I think, you should be more polite and avoid swearing.
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| Frozen Solid (Calin)
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2010-07-08
Beautiful language and style! Do you translate from Swedish?
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| Breakdown (Calin)
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2010-07-08
It is pretty good, but the style needs to be improved.
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| What Do You Want Me To Do
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2010-07-08
This is a nicely rhymed poem. I enjoyed it!
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| The Panther (R.M. Rilke)
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2010-07-08
The whispers are pretty good, I'd say, and it's good, that you read the classic literature.
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| The Ancient Oaks
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2010-07-08
Wonderfully written, good job!
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| Letting My Mind Fly (poetryslam)
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2010-07-08
Again you're swearing!
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| Emotional Massacre
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2010-07-08
By and large, the poem is good, but I think, swearing is unsuitable.
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| Pain
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2010-07-08
Very nice and beautiful rhymes!
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| Winter Short Poems
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2010-07-08
These poems are rather expressive by themselves, each of which is absolutely unique.
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| Torn Between Two Horses
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2010-07-08
This is kind of a philosophic poem, I can read the speculations, which are nicely represented.
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| Aura
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2010-07-08
Magnificent style! Wonderful poem!
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| Strings died to you
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2010-07-08
Rich, emotional language!!!
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| Time Angled
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2010-07-08
Very nice poem, good imagery, GREAT!!!
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| The Unbeatable
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2010-07-08
This poem is quite informative, rather than artistic, which is a common feature of modern poetry, and prose as well. By and large the poem is nice, and brings pleasure to readers.
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| PAGE
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2010-07-08
A rhythmically organized play of words. Very nice!
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| Miracle gardens
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2010-07-08
Good job, Michel! Your translation is really brilliant, although there are some inaccuraces, which can of course be forgiven. You have chosen a rather difficult, and, I would say, complicated text to translate.
You know, I am a translator myself, I translate Russian, French, and sometimes other authors into English and I also write my original poetry in English. I wish you good luck in your activity.
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| Reality
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2010-07-08
I like especially this line: "Unfamiliar silence" - very good imagery, but you still need to make your language more expressive. Good luck!
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| Love
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2010-05-20
Very beautiful and wise words!!! Great imagery. I'm impressed.
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| Another shore
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2010-02-14
Good poem, very nice!
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| 72) Just Last Night
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2010-02-11
This poem is nice! Good!
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| Angelina
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2010-02-06
Nice poem, beautiful imagery.
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| again
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2007-11-29
Very good poem! Expressive.
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| Love Game
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2007-03-27
Your poem is good. Very original style!
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from Russia 